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Konoshi Maria Makikage/Pheonix/Invisible


   Age : 16 Joined : 06 Mar 2008 Posts : 1795 Village : Mori Married To: : Hazirami Retsu Bloodline : Kamen Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Kira no Shukoshu Sun Jul 13, 2008 6:55 pm | |
| Name of Creator: Maria Konoshi Name of Jutsu: Kira no Shukoshu (Killer tentacles) Reason to Create Jutsu: So I can have an elite jutsu to defend me in battle, and to show that a Makikage has something special. Do you have an Elite Jutsu Token: Nobody responds to my bank request, but I have the money to pay for one. Are you willing to pay 100k for Jutsu Creation?: Yes, sadly :3
Description: The user forms many thin unbreakable tubes of chakra which attatch to the opponent. The tubes dig deep into the opponents flesh if any movements are made. The tubes suck life and chakra out of the opponent.
Dmg: Jutsu Power x number of tubes created, -5 chakra per tube towards the opponent. 7 chakra per tube. The opponent is stunned for one turn.
And like all elite jutsu's! This can only be used once in a match. _________________

~I am a master Taijutsu specialist!~
Last edited by Konoshi Maria on Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:25 pm; edited 2 times in total |
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Kurowashi Aigoro Forum Lord

   Age : 16 Joined : 10 Apr 2008 Posts : 3838 Village : Konoha Bloodline : Kurowashi Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kira no Shukoshu Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:10 pm | |
| So this is your reason for asking about Chakra drain death.
Could you roll play how the damage will effect an opponent in battle? I would just like to assess how it works before I give my vote... _________________ |
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Konoshi Maria Makikage/Pheonix/Invisible


   Age : 16 Joined : 06 Mar 2008 Posts : 1795 Village : Mori Married To: : Hazirami Retsu Bloodline : Kamen Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kira no Shukoshu Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:15 pm | |
| Hmm, I never really thought about how they are put together. I only did that so it would prevent people from using their elite jutsu's and hitting hard on me.
Billy uses blah blah and does blah damage.
Maria uses Kira no Shukoshu
| Attack : |     (47/100) | | Defence : |     (7/100) | | Speed/Agility : |     (100/100) | | Jutsu Power : |     (53/100) | | Hand Seal Knowledge : |     (8/100) |
I make 7 tubes, which will deal a total of 7 x 53 damage. The opponent also loses 35 chakra points. I use up 49 chakra points of my own. _________________

~I am a master Taijutsu specialist!~
Last edited by Konoshi Maria on Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:27 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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Fujibyashi Nagato Admin/Naitokage/ Lion/ Dead Eye


   Age : 16 Joined : 15 Mar 2008 Posts : 699 Village : Manaan Married To: : ---- Bloodline : Retsu Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kira no Shukoshu Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:35 pm | |
| that is actually really easy calculations for an elite justu, i approve of this -1/3 Approved- _________________

-Taijutsu =] |
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Kurowashi Aigoro Forum Lord

   Age : 16 Joined : 10 Apr 2008 Posts : 3838 Village : Konoha Bloodline : Kurowashi Character Page Health:
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kurayami Admin/The Shadow Fox/Darkness


   Age : 16 Joined : 02 Feb 2008 Posts : 1688 Village : Akatsuki Married To: : none yet Bloodline : Konayuki Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kira no Shukoshu Sun Jul 13, 2008 10:54 pm | |
| thats simple aigoro the limit is the amount she can make without completely draining her own chakra or as it stands she can make a grand total of 21 which is 2100 dmg so lets say that the opponent has 2200 hp and 100 chakra right...she uses this and drains their chakra to zero even though it doesnt kill them they still die from the chakra drain, its a nice jutsu and ill give it to her since i have one that is quite similar except i dont agree with the stun i think after getting hit with an elite u should get to go next turn otherwise i agree.... _________________ "Such souls, Whose sudden visitations daze the world, Vanish like lightning, but they leave behind A voice that in the distance far away Wakens the slumbering ages."
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kurayami Admin/The Shadow Fox/Darkness


   Age : 16 Joined : 02 Feb 2008 Posts : 1688 Village : Akatsuki Married To: : none yet Bloodline : Konayuki Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kira no Shukoshu Sun Jul 13, 2008 10:54 pm | |
| and the disadvantage is that if she accidently uses up all her chakra then she dies... _________________ "Such souls, Whose sudden visitations daze the world, Vanish like lightning, but they leave behind A voice that in the distance far away Wakens the slumbering ages." |
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kurayami Admin/The Shadow Fox/Darkness


   Age : 16 Joined : 02 Feb 2008 Posts : 1688 Village : Akatsuki Married To: : none yet Bloodline : Konayuki Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kira no Shukoshu Sun Jul 13, 2008 11:01 pm | |
| i apologize in advance it this is taken wrongly but why are u always such a suckup when it comes to maria, Nagato? _________________ "Such souls, Whose sudden visitations daze the world, Vanish like lightning, but they leave behind A voice that in the distance far away Wakens the slumbering ages." |
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Hyu-zu Eki Root Admin


   Age : 18 Joined : 17 Nov 2007 Posts : 5160 Village : Akatsuki Married To: : No One Bloodline : KaiRai Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kira no Shukoshu Sun Jul 13, 2008 11:17 pm | |
| ummm nagato with a new admin its 3/3 *as i agree now* its aprooved, add it since im kinda confused on how _________________ ~Naruto Ninja RPG Main Admin~




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Hyu-zu Eki Root Admin


   Age : 18 Joined : 17 Nov 2007 Posts : 5160 Village : Akatsuki Married To: : No One Bloodline : KaiRai Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kira no Shukoshu Sun Jul 13, 2008 11:18 pm | |
| nvm ill add it _________________ ~Naruto Ninja RPG Main Admin~




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Konoshi Maria Makikage/Pheonix/Invisible


   Age : 16 Joined : 06 Mar 2008 Posts : 1795 Village : Mori Married To: : Hazirami Retsu Bloodline : Kamen Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kira no Shukoshu Mon Jul 14, 2008 5:45 am | |
| Well can I add this since it is approved? _________________

~I am a master Taijutsu specialist!~ |
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kurayami Admin/The Shadow Fox/Darkness


   Age : 16 Joined : 02 Feb 2008 Posts : 1688 Village : Akatsuki Married To: : none yet Bloodline : Konayuki Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kira no Shukoshu Mon Jul 14, 2008 8:30 am | |
| go ahead maria its all yours _________________ "Such souls, Whose sudden visitations daze the world, Vanish like lightning, but they leave behind A voice that in the distance far away Wakens the slumbering ages." |
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Konoshi Maria Makikage/Pheonix/Invisible


   Age : 16 Joined : 06 Mar 2008 Posts : 1795 Village : Mori Married To: : Hazirami Retsu Bloodline : Kamen Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kira no Shukoshu Mon Jul 14, 2008 8:43 am | |
| Is it all right that I change the damage formula to Jutsu Power x number of tubes created? _________________

~I am a master Taijutsu specialist!~ |
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kurayami Admin/The Shadow Fox/Darkness


   Age : 16 Joined : 02 Feb 2008 Posts : 1688 Village : Akatsuki Married To: : none yet Bloodline : Konayuki Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kira no Shukoshu Mon Jul 14, 2008 1:03 pm | |
| ask someone else lol i dont want to be held responsible for anything lol and i notice how yours does even more than mine now GJ =] _________________ "Such souls, Whose sudden visitations daze the world, Vanish like lightning, but they leave behind A voice that in the distance far away Wakens the slumbering ages."
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Guest Guest
 | Subject: Re: Kira no Shukoshu Mon Jul 14, 2008 1:05 pm | |
| Rigged XD
also WTF:
150 chakra! 200 chakra!
???
how come eki said u cant have more than 100 chakra! |
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