Editing 3 made up jutsus

Subject: Editing 3 made up jutsus Wed Jun 18, 2008 9:15 pm

Since my 3 previous jutsus are quite erratically conceived (no one was really good enough to give some advice), I have polished the three to become more understandable and formidable. These are already approved jutsus but if you wish to deny them again for a new approval, I am not against it.

Jutsu 1

Shashin no Jutsu (Photograph Clone)

Description: With Byakugan camera, user makes a Clone of his opponent or target from a photograph will all its jutsus, abilities and bloodline intact.

These clones last as long as its user is conscious and takes up to 50 or more percent to produce. A typical user will only be able to use this ability once if not rather putting himself in jeopardy with draining his own chakra limit to zero preventing the possibility of abuse.

Calculation
(Copy target opponents status, jutsus and bloodline abilities as if there is a 2nd player in game into a clone by the same name of the target. Clone will die if user of jutsu has become unconscious or stunned)

Jutsu 2

Origami no Jutsu (Paper art ability)

Description: Self Explanatory

Calculation
Attack + (atk/2) + Speed + (spd/2) for 3 Turns

Jutsu 3

For my third jutsu, Ive decided since the Exploding Shahin no Jutsu is just a copy of Bakuretsu Kage, Im making a 3rd jutsu.

Bun'ya Kami no Jutsu (Paper Bubble)

Description: User makes a bubble of paper that protects the user, much like Gaara’s sand bubble. Previous attack to user will be decreased.

Also decreases 'stun' effects to a 50/50 chance of success.

Calculation
((user’s defence+speed) divided by 2))-(prev attack damage)

Sample
Pervious attack is 90
User with def 30 & spd 50 uses Bun’ya Kami no Jutsu

Def+spd=80 divided by 2 = 40, Previous attack which is 90 is decreased by 40 = 50

User will only take 50 damage. And if pervious ability has 'stun' the effect will be a 50/50 chance of success.
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Subject: Re: Editing 3 made up jutsus Wed Jun 18, 2008 10:06 pm

ok id like to know why you are changing them?
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Subject: Re: Editing 3 made up jutsus Wed Jun 18, 2008 10:08 pm

also, #1 id qualify that as an elite jutsu, and #3 lol your choice, i find that a horrible move
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Subject: Re: Editing 3 made up jutsus Wed Jun 18, 2008 10:12 pm

The only change is on the third jutsu since the approved one I made I didnt use and was just a version of Bakuretsu Kage

So Im applying for approval of the 3rd jutsu, Paper Bubble.
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Subject: Re: Editing 3 made up jutsus Wed Jun 18, 2008 10:38 pm

i still dont get why you want to change, i need a valid reason
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Subject: Re: Editing 3 made up jutsus Wed Jun 18, 2008 10:58 pm

Not actually changing... just that I thought you need to use this to make a jutsu that was already made... I just changed the name of the jutsu...

So Im making a whole new jutsu.

I made 2 jutsus and 1 jutsu I only changed the name, didnt actually make it.

So for that jutsu I just changed the name for, I am making another.
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Subject: Re: Editing 3 made up jutsus Fri Jun 20, 2008 4:49 pm

mmm, i dont like #3 for the reasons, if an attack is already done u cant redo it, i think it should be were if u use it you cant get stunned for next 2 turns, makes it more fair
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Subject: Re: Editing 3 made up jutsus Fri Jun 20, 2008 5:00 pm

How I meant is that each time a stun jutsu is used against Aigoro and he uses Paper Bubble in response, they do a random roll

1 = Miss

2 = Hit

If the roll reads 1, Aigoro is safe, if roll reads 2, Aigoro is stunned and looses his Shashin Bunshin if he has one at that time

Subject: Re: Editing 3 made up jutsus Fri Jun 20, 2008 5:05 pm

...i know bbcode, u dont have to explain it to me, and i was refering to the block attack too...
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Subject: Re: Editing 3 made up jutsus Fri Jun 20, 2008 5:08 pm

Jutsus in the Naruto universe are all made in response to their opponents moves... Replacement no Jutsu, Bunshin no Jutsu, all escape jutsus. To escape from direct attack should be a ninja's first line of defense.

So if its not allowed, then Im going to have to edit it again.
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