naginata no inmetsu

Subject: naginata no inmetsu Fri Jun 27, 2008 8:43 pm

Name of Jutsu: naginata no inmetsu (halberd of destruction)
What it Does: the user summons a halberd of darkness into being, with the halberd in hand the user thrusts forward with blinding speed impaling and stunning the opponent. The attack does speed + jutsu power and it stuns for two turns
Chakra Consume: 15
Type of Jutsu: genjutsu
Register it to who: myself
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Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Fri Jun 27, 2008 8:59 pm

hmmm, not to riggid, and not too weak eather. I think this would be a keeper ;D
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Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Sat Jun 28, 2008 8:00 pm

*bump*
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Whose sudden visitations daze the world,
Vanish like lightning, but they leave behind
A voice that in the distance far away
Wakens the slumbering ages."

Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Sat Jun 28, 2008 8:08 pm

I dont like the stun idea.
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Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Sat Jun 28, 2008 11:01 pm

what if i just cut the JP and make it speed and the stun?
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"Such souls,
Whose sudden visitations daze the world,
Vanish like lightning, but they leave behind
A voice that in the distance far away
Wakens the slumbering ages."

Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Sat Jun 28, 2008 11:13 pm

Well the damage formula is okay, its just the two turn stun isn't realy working.
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Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Sun Jun 29, 2008 3:58 pm

i see
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"Such souls,
Whose sudden visitations daze the world,
Vanish like lightning, but they leave behind
A voice that in the distance far away
Wakens the slumbering ages."

Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Sun Jun 29, 2008 4:07 pm

y not maria, your eye of the tiger does 2 turn stun and your move is three stats mine is only 2
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"Such souls,
Whose sudden visitations daze the world,
Vanish like lightning, but they leave behind
A voice that in the distance far away
Wakens the slumbering ages."

Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Sun Jun 29, 2008 4:32 pm

1 turn stun maybe?

and bao your such a kiss ass Razz

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Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Sun Jun 29, 2008 7:50 pm

y 1 turn my current one is one turn i wanted to make a new one that was slightly better. and maria i dont remember the approvement of any of your jutsu, of course i wasnt here but some of them sound rather fishy, the point being that ppl call me rigged when your jutsu are about the same only better.
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"Such souls,
Whose sudden visitations daze the world,
Vanish like lightning, but they leave behind
A voice that in the distance far away
Wakens the slumbering ages."

Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Sun Jun 29, 2008 8:17 pm

Its probably not my place here at all...

but how bout it does do the two turn stun but u only do 1/4 damage to them for those two rounds?

But then again i do not know any or Mari's jutsu's so she might be overpowered and trying to keep you down. agan maybe its not my place to talk here.
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Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Tue Jul 01, 2008 2:56 pm

Maria she has a point, you have jutsu's similar to this one.... and i approve

- 1/3 approvals
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Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Tue Jul 01, 2008 4:01 pm

The eye of the tiger is a special jutsu. All of your jutsu's stun, but I just realized none of them have a two turn stun. And actually for your information my Obsidian Rain was approved long ago and all of my other jutsu's are bloodline traits. So dont be victimizing me, and your jutsu's are a lot better than mine.

Our jutsu's are not similiar because practically all of yours stun the opponent and do massive damage within their combo's.

Well anyways. You can keep the formula and the two turn stun.

Approved. 2/3.
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Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Tue Jul 01, 2008 6:56 pm

thank you maria
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"Such souls,
Whose sudden visitations daze the world,
Vanish like lightning, but they leave behind
A voice that in the distance far away
Wakens the slumbering ages."

Subject: Re: naginata no inmetsu Tue Jul 01, 2008 8:33 pm

ok Maria also has a point... all yours pretty much do stun but also with your stats being so high it practicaly kills the person in one hit.....
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