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Konoshi Maria Makikage/Pheonix/Invisible


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Fri May 23, 2008 4:59 pm | |
| Maria walked down the aisle aggressively but hot. She pounced her thighs, and her body swayed in motion with every delegate step she took. She stopped at the end of the runway, she looked at the crowd with her chin up and revealed her puckered up lips. As she turned away she winked at the judges dazzling them. She then noticed in the ground some other girls with grease buckets and soap in their hands. "What!" before Maria could react she slipped on the greased runway. "NUUUUUOOOOO!" Maria said as she was flying through the air. She continued to slowly spin in the air from the fall, but to everyones surprise, she rotated enough that she barley landed on her feet. One of her heels broke, so she ran off the stage embarassed, but impressed from the unexpected backflip. _________________

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Hyu-zu Bao Super Mod


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Fri May 23, 2008 5:02 pm | |
| Bao wolf whistled at maria as she was on the walk way, and after she returned back stage he ran behind the stage and met up with her, "You were awsome out there, i was almost blinded by the beauty, but then i put my sunglasses on."he complimented her.
OOC: im not trying to be too flirty, just encouraging and supportive _________________
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Kurowashi Aigoro Forum Lord

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Retsu Kenty Admin/Hazi's Homeboy/Retsu 2nd in Command


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Sat May 24, 2008 3:47 pm | |
| Ok guys!!
The 48 hours are up! so im dissapointed to announce...that because Karon and Wolfreign havn't posted they are eliminated untill further notice [wait for 100% approval from eki]
the judges will now start to make there comments...
thanks for participating everyone!! _________________ The official post/quote of the week™
| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^ I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea 
Uhh...you never heard that  |
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Axeldin Hirashi Special Shinobi


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Sat May 24, 2008 4:03 pm | |
| Bao&Maria's Scores; Cat Walk: 7, not bad with the flip, but a bit of advice if your heel breaks try to ignore it that way it shows you can cope with any situation.
Dress: 4 A lttle plain, but it is still very nice
Managers Comment: 3 That was a very bad pun and the fact that you put that smile icon next to proves that you were trying to think of something at the top of your head without any thought.
NR&Sabrina's Scares; Cat Walk: 9 You RPed the Cat walk very well their were just a few areas of bad grammer and punuation, but besides that it was very good.
Dress: 5 This dress is very stunning and shows the naural beauty of the model instead of covering them with expensive jewels.
Managers Comment: 4 your comment showed that you wanted to make her seem more confident alothough it was a little tackey it had a fare ammount of tast to make it a 4.
Kurowashi Aigoro&KaiRai Haruo's Scores; Cat Walk: 4 it was very short and it did not give a lot of detail, I suggest working on your Role-playing skills some more.
Dress: 3 It seemed like it was too to many times, but besides that it looked very elegent.
Managers Comment: 3 Very prdective it is almost as if you just wanted to give her advice and not worry about her you seemed more concintraded on winning then anything else. |
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Hyu-zu Bao Super Mod


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Sat May 24, 2008 4:19 pm | |
| BAD PUN!!!!!???
PLAIN DRESS!?
IM GUNNA BEAT YOU DOWN WITH A SHOVEL FOR THOSE HORRIBLE COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!
*gets out a shovel and beats down Axel* _________________
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Axeldin Hirashi Special Shinobi


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Sat May 24, 2008 4:22 pm | |
| | threating the judge will lower you score and a 4 out of 5 is not bad for the dress |
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Hyu-zu Bao Super Mod


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Sat May 24, 2008 4:23 pm | |
| i was kidding GEEZE!
and my dress making skittles are pwning.. FASION is my middle name! _________________
Standing by, All the way. Here to help you through your day.
Holding you up, When you are weak, Helping you find what it is you seek.
Catching your tears, When you cry. Pulling you through when the tide is high.
Just being there, Through thick and thin, All just to say, you are my friend. Friends Forever |
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Retsu Kenty Admin/Hazi's Homeboy/Retsu 2nd in Command


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Sat May 24, 2008 4:29 pm | |
| Bao and Maria's score
Cat walk: I'd give you a 8 maria..you were very confident on the platform and wasn't afraid to strut your stuff! I particulary like the facial expressions you pull! better then most that dont do any facial expression atall..you actually looked like you enjoyed this!..just try to work on your balance a bit more!
Dress: Id say a even 5..mainly because theres not much to it..just a small flingy dress..the colours work well with the model but it's to dull for my liking..
Managers comment: 8! You do good with the words, doing your best to make your model feel great and sexy! which is exactly what she needs at this time! you gave her alot of confidence on the floor..but a little less flirting a bit more suggestions on how she can improve..
Hazirami and Sabrina
Catwalk: 8 You have great confidence which is hard to find in these sort of things! You just go right out there and give it all your best and your not afraid of what anythinks or says..and thats what makes a top class model..i say only 8 because i thought there wasn't much movement in it..you need to do more actions and poses to truely strike the crowd with your glamour!
Dress: I give the dress a high 5..just below a 6 im not really a big fan of red and black together on clothing..in my opinion it looks a tad like rust..but the design of the dress suited the model in every way possible and thats why i gave a 5!
Managers comment: 9 You do everything you can for your model which is absolutely superb! you give her confidence..you give great compliments..before and after the walk! which is exactly what she deserves..the best comments ive seen so far!
Kurowashi Aigoro&KaiRai Haruo's Scores;
Catwalk: 5 Haruo my darling you really need to work on your confidence! you have potential to win this! and i really think you could! beleive in yourself a bit more and you'll be unstoppable! You also need to do more actions to make the dress truely compliment you :]
Dress: i give this wonderfull peice a 7..its a great dress which just shouts out..."WOW!"...it'll be great for parties..dinner parties..fancy night outs..i like the different use of patterns also..but again its a bit to dull for my liking!
Managers comment: 3 You didn't give the model much confidence which is part of her problem..she needs all the confidence and motivation she can get to truely become a top model! and you just wern't there for her.. _________________ The official post/quote of the week™
| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^ I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea 
Uhh...you never heard that  |

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Hyu-zu Bao Super Mod


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Sat May 24, 2008 4:30 pm | |
| ah yes, thank you Kent. _________________
Standing by, All the way. Here to help you through your day.
Holding you up, When you are weak, Helping you find what it is you seek.
Catching your tears, When you cry. Pulling you through when the tide is high.
Just being there, Through thick and thin, All just to say, you are my friend. Friends Forever |
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Retsu Kenty Admin/Hazi's Homeboy/Retsu 2nd in Command


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Sat May 24, 2008 4:36 pm | |
| i was dissapointed with some of the stuff  _________________ The official post/quote of the week™
| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^ I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea 
Uhh...you never heard that  |
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Shadow Wolf of za Pack SpamNobi


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Sat May 24, 2008 7:09 pm | |
| i haven't decided yet, can i put in two of them and have karon pick one of them? _________________ I live with the wolves, i cry with the wolves, i die with the wolves -wolfreign
 
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Hyu-zu Bao Super Mod


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Sat May 24, 2008 7:12 pm | |
| Wolf, you were discqualified for not showing up _________________
Standing by, All the way. Here to help you through your day.
Holding you up, When you are weak, Helping you find what it is you seek.
Catching your tears, When you cry. Pulling you through when the tide is high.
Just being there, Through thick and thin, All just to say, you are my friend. Friends Forever |
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Shadow Wolf of za Pack SpamNobi


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Sat May 24, 2008 7:14 pm | |
| if so here they are:

 _________________ I live with the wolves, i cry with the wolves, i die with the wolves -wolfreign
 
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Shadow Wolf of za Pack SpamNobi


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 | Subject: Re: Annuel Misu Yochi Pe-gento First Exam Sat May 24, 2008 7:15 pm | |
| Bao, i wasn't able to get on today. my dad kept me busy putting in new carpet!!! _________________ I live with the wolves, i cry with the wolves, i die with the wolves -wolfreign
 
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