Demonjune Shinobi


 Number of posts: 516 Age: 21 Married To:: Marrige is a religious commentment, fuck it Bloodline: None, I don`t get to mistake the heradity for my own power
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   (14200/14950) Level: 23 Rank: Academy Student
 | Subject: Re: Transmorph Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:44 pm | |
| hmm, that last version seems like an enhence taijutsu combo technique. So maybe put 10 on attack and defense while puting 15 on speed I mean cuz you`re puting a +15 in taijutsu rolls. not sure if I`m really thinking but it`s a suggestion anyhow. _________________Signature_________________ "No matter how many times you win a lottery, or make tremendous amounts of money on the stock market, being a nouveau riche and a rich man with proper social standing are not the same thing" - Namikawa Obji : translator: - Rain :Author: - Ohba Tsugumi | Spoiler: | | |  |
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Kazebara Yoichi Shinobi


 Number of posts: 1009 Age: 14 Village: Missing-nin Bloodline: Henkei
Character Info Experience:
   (15850/16200) Level: 24 Rank: Genin
 | Subject: Re: Transmorph Wed Mar 10, 2010 8:07 pm | |
| Forgot to mention, each hit must be dodged separately, costing 5 chakra each. _________________Signature_________________ First to Level 47. First non-admin Clan Leader. First to get ryo from Un-official missions. First to gain a 1 ryo reward. First to gain a 1 exp award. First to get to 2 exp.
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Madoka Kioshi Hyūga/Madoka Leader


 Number of posts: 1392
Character Info Experience:
   (28001/29700) Level: 33 Rank: Missing-Nin
 | Subject: Re: Transmorph Wed Mar 10, 2010 9:29 pm | |
| Ok here is some constructive thinking rather than just lashing out. It appears that you want this Jutsu to do two completely separate things, a permanent thing and a non-permanent thing. Ok this is a S-Rank and things like this has been done before. The way you are going about it thought with absolutely no restrictions/weakness though makes this like a GOD move. I helped Kira Formulate both his Earth Grude Fear and the Earth Release: Earth Spear and because of the abilities I had him put in the restrictions. Spoiler ed is his defense/permanent type Jutsu. | Spoiler: | | | Name of Jutsu: Doton: Domu no Jutsu / Earth Release: Earth Spear Class: B Chakra Cost: 25 Range: Personal Classification: Ninjutsu Type: Earth Release Exclusive to: None Requirements: Earth Affinity: 25 Activation: Random Roll Defense, Result of 20 or more Description: With his earth-element mask, Kakuzu can harden his skin to steel-like quality, protecting him from most attacks. It is, however, easily defeated by a lightning-based ability. While active Kakuzu's skin changes to a darker color and his strength drastically increases. Weakness: Lightning Based Jutsu Effect: User Chakra Cap is lowered by 25 while this Jutsu is in effect (this will not cause Chakra Loss unless the user has more than the new level of chakra). User gains + 25 Attack and +25 Defense and becomes immune to Taijutsu damage and any special damage that requires being absorbed thru(contact posion( or breaking(venom from a snakes fang) of the skin. This jutsu last until canceled or if a lightning based Jutsu hits the user this Jutsu us canceled. |
So then here is my suggestion to make this similar and so not too many people(like me) will Female Dog and complain. BTW, Kenjutsu is for sword only techniques, this includes more than that by a lot. If half of the moves were sword-type based I would have kept the Kenjutsu but I only see one Sword hit.
Name of Jutsu: Henkei (Form Shift) Class E-S: S Range: Self, Close Type of jutsu: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Hiden Exclusive to: Kazebara Yoichi Chakra Cost: 50 Activation: See Effects Effect: This Jutsu as 2 Effects, Only one can be activated per turn. Ninjutsu Effect: Random Roll Jutsu, Result of 25 or more. Add 30 to Attack, Defense, Speed. Add 15 to all Taijutsu related rolls. This incurs a Chakra Cap of 50 and is considered permanent until dismissed.
Taijutsu Effect: Hit the target 10 consecutive times, each time different random roll requirements, each effect must be dodge separately at a cost of 5 chakra per dodge.
1. Dual Katana Strike. Cost to activate: Random Roll Speed, 25 or over. Damage equals to Attack plus Speed multiplied by two. For the next 3 turns, opponent takes 1/10 of the damage dealt from wounds.
2. Mace Foot Heaven's Kick. Cost to activate: Random Roll Speed, 40 or over. Damage equals to Attack plus Speed. If successful, stun for one turn. (Stun does not apply during the dodging of these attacks)
3. Fist Barrage. Cost to activate: Random Roll Speed, 30 or over. Damage equals to Attack plus Speed multiplied by three.
4. Gumgum Punch! Cost to activate: Random Roll Attack, 30 or more. Damage equals to Attack plus Speed, if it hits, the fifth hit cannot be dodged.
5. Gumgum Knives?! Cost to activate: Random Roll Attack, 30 or more. Damage equals to Attack plus Speed multiplied by two.
6. Super-hard Ass-poke. Cost to activate: Random Roll Attack, 30 or more. Random Roll Speed, 30 or more. If this jutsu succeeds, the next 4 cannot be dodged.
7. Whirlwind. Cost to activate: Random Roll Attack, 25 or more. Random Roll Speed, 40 or more. Damage equals to Wind Affinity plus Speed multiplied by 3.
8. Flying Mace Kick. Cost to activate: Random Roll Speed, 50 or more. Damage equals to Wind affinity plus Attack plus Speed multiplied by 2. Stuns for one turn.
9. Weapon Hair Barrage. Cost to Activate: Random Roll Speed, 50 or more. Damage equals to attack plus speed multiplied by 3.
10. Dragon Barrage. Cost to Activate: Random Roll Speed plus Attack: 80 or more. Damage equals to attack plus speed multiplied by 4. Can only be used if at least 3 of the previous attacks are landed. _________________Signature_________________ I am willing to battle to the Death, but both sides must agree. If you are looking for some to win, i.e. Byakugan, it must be stated in your first post. Remember an Eye for an Eye, because I will also ask something of you as well.
If you need any help, let me know and I will do my best. Je parle un peu français et je suis prêt à vous aider si cela est votre langue primaire.
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Kazebara Yoichi Shinobi


 Number of posts: 1009 Age: 14 Village: Missing-nin Bloodline: Henkei
Character Info Experience:
   (15850/16200) Level: 24 Rank: Genin
 | Subject: Re: Transmorph Wed Mar 10, 2010 11:03 pm | |
| If possible, I would like to add another minor weakness.
Ninjutsu effect must be active before Taijutsu effect is able to be used Ninjutsu effect need be active. _________________Signature_________________ First to Level 47. First non-admin Clan Leader. First to get ryo from Un-official missions. First to gain a 1 ryo reward. First to gain a 1 exp award. First to get to 2 exp.
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Madoka Kioshi Hyūga/Madoka Leader


 Number of posts: 1392
Character Info Experience:
   (28001/29700) Level: 33 Rank: Missing-Nin
 | Subject: Re: Transmorph Wed Mar 10, 2010 11:07 pm | |
| Ok that seems reasonable, with that weakness I would drop the Cap for this to 25 since now it requires the first effect to be in place. If it seems fair to you. _________________Signature_________________ I am willing to battle to the Death, but both sides must agree. If you are looking for some to win, i.e. Byakugan, it must be stated in your first post. Remember an Eye for an Eye, because I will also ask something of you as well.
If you need any help, let me know and I will do my best. Je parle un peu français et je suis prêt à vous aider si cela est votre langue primaire.
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Kazebara Yoichi Shinobi


 Number of posts: 1009 Age: 14 Village: Missing-nin Bloodline: Henkei
Character Info Experience:
   (15850/16200) Level: 24 Rank: Genin
 | Subject: Re: Transmorph Wed Mar 10, 2010 11:10 pm | |
| +1 when I have enough creation coins >.< _________________Signature_________________ First to Level 47. First non-admin Clan Leader. First to get ryo from Un-official missions. First to gain a 1 ryo reward. First to gain a 1 exp award. First to get to 2 exp.
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Madoka Kioshi Hyūga/Madoka Leader


 Number of posts: 1392
Character Info Experience:
   (28001/29700) Level: 33 Rank: Missing-Nin
 | Subject: Re: Transmorph Wed Mar 10, 2010 11:19 pm | |
| Yea with those weakness and reworks, I will lend my +3 to it when the coins are there. _________________Signature_________________ I am willing to battle to the Death, but both sides must agree. If you are looking for some to win, i.e. Byakugan, it must be stated in your first post. Remember an Eye for an Eye, because I will also ask something of you as well.
If you need any help, let me know and I will do my best. Je parle un peu français et je suis prêt à vous aider si cela est votre langue primaire.
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