Name: Tsukuyomi
Description:Description:sukuyomi requires eye contact to be performed. When executed, the jutsu traps the target in an illusionary world that is completely controlled by the user. While it only takes a few seconds to complete in the real world, the user can make it seem as if days have passed for the target. Depending on the user's whim, they can either torture their target for what seems like days on end, or make them relive a traumatic event over and over. When the jutsu ends the resultant psychological trauma will render the target unable to fight for an extensive period of time, and possibly suffer a complete mental breakdown. An example of this is Kakashi Hatake, who had to be hospitalized for quite some time after Itachi performed the Tsukuyomi on him.
Chakra Cost:45
Requirement:Mangekyo Sharingan must be active.Random Roll JP.Result must be more than 30 to successfully execute.
Effect:Target cannot move for 3 turns. Each turn, target will take damage equal to Fire Affinity level, divided by 3 for each turn target cannot move. After the 3 turns, user’s Speed will be reduced to its level divided by 3 for 3 turns more. Opponent’s Jutsu Power is reduced by half its original amount for 3 turns.
Note:The User gets damage -30% current Hp.

Up for approval

Ok here is my 2 cents. this is a Genjutsu Dojutsu. I do not belive that it should be based on Fire Affinity but Jutsu Power. This is a illusion not flame. Second I remember that episode and I don't beleive that Itachi took any damage for it like his summonings so I would tend to belive that the -30% HP should not be there. Third, I belive that there should be a penently to speed on the target after this to represent the struggle that had just happened. This should also not be curable unless said shinobi has a med-nin present with the Jutsu to heal or he spends time in the hospital.

Ok I would like to request that you limit it's aviablitiy. I here you screaming already but here me out. The Mangekyo Sharingan seems able to be gotten from a couple of different ways, so all should find a way that suit them. However I have noticed that each user had some Unquie abilities that the others did not, the only ones I know of that shared some abilities were Itachi and Sasuke. Tobi could have had or seen some of them devolping in his clan but it seems each person is different in their abilitly with it. I am not saying only one person but maybe only 4 or 5. Unfortunetly, the clan was wiped before it could be fully gotten into. Ok remember you can take the request with a grain of salt and throw it out if you chose too. But other than that I think you had it pretty well.

Name: Tsukuyomi
Description:Description:sukuyomi requires eye contact to be performed. When executed, the jutsu traps the target in an illusionary world that is completely controlled by the user. While it only takes a few seconds to complete in the real world, the user can make it seem as if days have passed for the target. Depending on the user's whim, they can either torture their target for what seems like days on end, or make them relive a traumatic event over and over. When the jutsu ends the resultant psychological trauma will render the target unable to fight for an extensive period of time, and possibly suffer a complete mental breakdown. An example of this is Kakashi Hatake, who had to be hospitalized for quite some time after Itachi performed the Tsukuyomi on him.
Chakra Cost:45
Requirement:Mangekyo Sharingan must be active.Random Roll JP.Result must be more than 30 to successfully execute.
Effect: Effect: Target is stuned for 3 turns. Damage target every turn equal to (Jutsu/2) times User's Level. User can not move while target is stuned.Target rolls speed result must be more than half the opponents speed to dodge this Genjutsu.
Note:The Target cannot dodge this except by rolling his speed.
The User Loses 25%chakra of Chakra if this Jutsu is used successfully

I give my votes to it +3

+1

+3 well there goes my final Dojutsu