Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana

Uchiha Serou · Subject: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:51 am

Shiashi Ryu:

A katana made from combinations ultra conductive light metals which can magnify lightning current. Dragon Carvings as design. These Katana was given to Zhylocaust from her demon mother, Taname. Taname predicted Zhylocaust's elemental afinity which is why he gave this Katana to Zhylocaust which can make wield lightning to it's full extent.

Exclusive to: Zhylocaust (others can use this too but can't use it's jutsus except by training)

Effect When Equipped:

* Adds 10 attack
* Adds 20 Jutsu power

KenJutsus:

Chakra Fusion:

Chakra Cost: 5 chakra deduction per turn.
Activation: RR Jutsu Power. Result must be 20 or more.
Effect: Adds 30 Lightning Power and Allows to use Shigiri and Onigiri.

Spoiler:
	Description: The user fuses his chakra to Shiashi Ryu and converts it to lightning, making it stronger and sharper. And because of its super conductivity property, chakra flows fluently making lightning even stronger.

Shigiri/Death Slash:

Requirment: Shiashi Ryu must be equipped.
Exclusive to: Shiashi Ryu user.
Rank: B
Chakra Cost: 20
Activation: RR speed. result must be 15 or more.
Effect: Damage equals to attack plus speed multiplied by two and stun the opponent by one turn. Unblockable.

Spoiler:
	Description: The user runs towards the target while generating Lightning to Shiashi Ryu and slashes the target with one swift slash.

Kuro Kanji/Black Defence:

Requirement: Shiashi Ryu must be equipped.
Exclusive: Shiashi Ryu user.
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 5
Activation: RR Speed. Result must be 15 or more.
Effect: Block all range bujutsu attacks.

Spoiler:
	Description: The user quickly blocks all projectile attacks. This is possible because of the light metals that compose it, making easier to swing.

Onigiri/Demon Slash:

Requirment: Shiashi Ryu must be equipped.
Exclusive: Shiashi Ryu user.
Rank: S
Chakra Cost: 45
Activation: RR jutsu power and speed. Both RRs must be 25 or more.
Effect: Deal damage equal to Jutsu Power plus Speed multiplied by 5. This jutsu is undodgeable.

Spoiler:
	Description: The user will fuse a massive amount of chakra to Shiashi Ryu. This chakra will be converted to a Demonic Lightning Chakra that will cause devastating attacks. The user then gives a powerful slash that give an enormous chakra wave that can obliterate the target.

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Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Sat Apr 24, 2010 11:45 pm

Remove the Undodgeable in Shigiri/Death Slash: and I'll give my +3

it's a B-Rank Zhylo plus it has a stun and a 15 or more for activation so you should make it dodgeable.

Uchiha Serou · Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Sat Apr 24, 2010 11:47 pm

But both jutsus requires Chakra fussion to be active.. shouldn't that be enough???

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Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Sat Apr 24, 2010 11:49 pm

or make it unblockable because it has same effects like Sword Barrage but without the stun.

Uchiha Serou · Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:03 am

I edited it..

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Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:04 am

Uchiha Serou · Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:26 am

+1

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Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:28 am

lol(nuggets Zhylo)

Uchiha Serou · Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:29 am

nuggets??

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Uchiha Serou · Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:15 am

Three days have passed..

Weapon Creation approved..

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**Cloud** · Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Wed Apr 28, 2010 3:12 pm

overruled!

The chakra costs don't match the ranks of the jutsu...

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	The Six Paths of Pain, from left to right: Animal, Naraka, Asura, Deva, Human, Preta.

Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Thu Apr 29, 2010 12:07 am

????? oh wait he can overrule...

Uchiha Serou · Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Thu Apr 29, 2010 2:47 am

What do you propose then??

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~Uchiha Itachi

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Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Thu Apr 29, 2010 4:05 am

I think Cloud saw this

Kuro Kanji/Black Defence:

Requirement: Shiashi Ryu must be equipped.
Exclusive: Shiashi Ryu user.
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 5
Activation: RR Speed. Result must be 15 or more.
Effect: Block all range bujutsu attacks.

or not

**Cloud** · Subject: Re: Shiahi Ryu / Death Hands Dragon Katana Thu Apr 29, 2010 9:16 am

Yes I did. And this...

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Shigiri/Death Slash:

Requirment: Shiashi Ryu must be equipped.
Exclusive to: Shiashi Ryu user.
Rank: B
Chakra Cost: 20
Activation: RR speed. result must be 15 or more.
Effect: Damage equals to attack plus speed multiplied by two and stun the opponent by one turn. Unblockable.

You should REALLY look at the right topics if your going to create jutsu.

http://www.narutoninja-rpg.com/jutsu-roll-play-formulation-f47/jutsu-formulation-guideline-t8465.htm?highlight=jutsu

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Ranks and associated Stats
Rank Chakra Cost Affinity and RR Requirements Points
E 5 5 1
D 5 10 2
C 15 15 3
B 25 20 4
A 30 25 5
S Special Special Special

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-Paths

Spoiler:
	The Six Paths of Pain, from left to right: Animal, Naraka, Asura, Deva, Human, Preta.