3 brothers and 1 sister & the man that fell 4 her

Name of your story:3 brothers and 1 sister & the man that fell in love with her
Does it change ur charecter in any way?:a little

Is it very short or epic size or in the Middle?:in between

Does it have any admins as charecters in it?:yes

does it have any people from this forum in it?:well it has people through out the sight in it
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its sounds sugoi.

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am i in it?

karon iswearing a hood over her face while walking in town hoping her 3 older brothers dont find her going out with KaiRai Ranzu on a date.

karon arrives and see ranzu waiting for her so they can eat ramen.when karon was about to sit down and eat her ramen she felt 3 people looking behind her and grab Ranzu and drag him out of the ramen shop

Ek i:Who do u think u are dating my sister huh punk

Kent : whats is your deal, u have to go threw us first before u date r little sister.

Aigoro :You think u can go behind are back karon hima and date any guy with out introducing him to us first.

Aigoro picked karon up and put her over his sholder.Kent and Eki took Ranzu and beat him up and said if u ever date her again without are permission we will turn u inside out.

Karon :Why do u guys do this to me.?! You pick on the guys i date and threaten them! How could u do such a thing to your younger sister!

[b,Eki,Kent,Aigoro [/b]:We just wont the best for are sister and if the guy cant protect you he isent worthy of calling himself your boyfriend.*all three of them laugh*

when they got home they out karon in her room and made sure she couldnt get out.

Karon : I need to find a guy thats strong enough that can take my brothers on, but they already beaten every guy i dated up( Madara,maclaren11,Mangekyou Itachi,and Retsu Joel)

A mysterious man walks in to there village with two blades on his back and long dirtyblond hair and finds a tea shop and drinks some tea.

Mysterious man Very Happy

o u know where i could find work sir. I am in tire need of money.

Tea guy :yes in fact i am hiring when can u start.

the mysterious man smiles and said THANK YOU VERY MUCH

TO BE CONTINUED
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karon was thinking of a way to get out with out her brother seeing her,so she conjuered up a plan.

karon scream.

Kent,Eki,and Aigoro run in

All :karon whast wrong

karon :I hade a bad dream and i cant sleep.*karon fakes cry*

Her brothers give her a hugg

Eki :There, there little sister,your big brothers are here to protect you.

when all of them are conferting her she hits them with a bottle and knocks them all all out.

karon :finaly,now i can leave.

karon sneaks out of her house and wonders around the village.when she wondering she passes by some drunk ninja.Those ninja start sexualy harssing her and she runs.They go after her and trap her.Right when they are about to touch her the mysterious man appears and beats them up.

mysterious man :Are you ok miss.

karon :i think so.Thank you.

karon bows and runs back to her house kind of scared and she cant stop thinking about that man that saved her life.

TO BE CONTINUED.......................
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So in this scenario, Im guessing Aigoro is the youngest of the 3 brothers, right?
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no eki is born fisr then aigoro and then kent.

put it this way eki was born then 2yrs later u were born and a 1yr later kent was born and 4 yrs later it karon
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How old is Eki here?
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eki is 25 .
aigoro is 23
kent is 22
karon is 17
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women luv to be the youngest.

karon gets up in the morining and herr brothers dont remeber karon hutting them

towashin kishimoto and kamen inu are waiting for karon at the door.

karon brothers keep staring at towa

towashin kishimoto : i like ur sister as a friend,sostop staring at me

inu giggles cause they do that every day

all three of them leave and walk to school

towashin kishimoto :karon hima why dose your brother keep doing that.

karon : i dont know, thats how my brother act.

inu :i feel sry for u towa

inu and karon laugh

they arrive at school and sensei bao getss mad at them for being late

Sensei Bao :Why are u 3 always late!!!!!!

all 3 :because we can.

bao looks at them

Sensei Bao : Detention,all of u

all 3 of them are at detenction

after detention was over inu. towa and karon went to go for some tea. when they got there she saw the man that safed her last night

Myterious man :How can i help u??? Hey you are the gitl from yesterday.

karon : Yes, thank you for helping me out with those men.whats ur name??

Myterious man : MY name is Bikou.

towa : If her brother see u talking to her they are going to kick ur butt.

Bikou : realy now, how so???

karon :they beat up every guy i dated and no one is strong enough to take them on

Bikou looks at her

Bikou :Miss why dont you let me your boyfriend that way i can finaly get to fight someone and your brothers would stop and leave u alone.

karon thinking and she agrees wiht the offer

Karon :Just wait and see brothers i got a boy that can be able to beat all 3 of u.

karon laughs

TO BE CONTINUED..............
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LOL! bao is the bad guy.

w8, were in our 20's and still getting detention? Thats just aint right.
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aigoro u are at home

me towa and inu got detention
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