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Jiriya (Aoi) SpamNobi


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 | Subject: Re: Aoi otahu Wed Feb 13, 2008 2:47 pm | |
| | I might...but then again it does make my charictor look cooler when I talk about his dad |
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Hyu-zu Bao Super Mod


   Age : 16 Joined : 10 Jan 2008 Posts : 5924 Village : Missing Nin Married To: : Dating Krysti(Miyuki) Bloodline : Hyu-zu Character Page Health:
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Jiriya (Aoi) SpamNobi


 Joined : 01 Feb 2008 Posts : 414 Village : Konohagure Married To: : anyone who can put up with me Bloodline : Retsu Clan (Neo-Rinnengan) Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Aoi otahu Wed Feb 13, 2008 3:09 pm | |
| | sort of but his dad wasn't really a lady charmer and Aoi.....I'll try and make him keep it in his pants |
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Hyu-zu Bao Super Mod


   Age : 16 Joined : 10 Jan 2008 Posts : 5924 Village : Missing Nin Married To: : Dating Krysti(Miyuki) Bloodline : Hyu-zu Character Page Health:
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tinnie Admin/Kapakage/MMO Creator & Admin/Hoster/Flash


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 | Subject: Re: Aoi otahu Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:47 am | |
| anti? _________________ Tinnie - MMORPG Game Admin/Starter & Current Hoster of MMO Game  'There's nothing new under the sun' |
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Jiriya (Aoi) SpamNobi


 Joined : 01 Feb 2008 Posts : 414 Village : Konohagure Married To: : anyone who can put up with me Bloodline : Retsu Clan (Neo-Rinnengan) Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Aoi otahu Tue Feb 19, 2008 12:56 pm | |
| my friend gave me advice for my (still not approved) kekegenkei I want to get everyone's opinion
"You kow how I said that your bloodline should be able to advance another step? This is sort of the way I see it, based off of the Uchias;
no sharingan= regular ninja
no "vine-eye"= possiabally controll over vines.
sharingan= ability to copy and detect
vine-eye= controll over vines, ropes, chains, etc...
mangekoyu= need to kill best friend, but insane abilitys varying on death of friend
???=???
this is the only reason i'm pointing this out. I can feel it getting stronger, but I don't know what it should be. What do you think? here is one idea I have, takeitor leave it...
Miasthma vision= allowes you to summon the "tree of life." If you summon it, it wil grant you limetless charaka for a limited amount of time. In essence, you will be able to fully controll water and earth stule jutsu, no hand signs needed. However, after use your mind might not be able to handle the strain. This could result in insanity, or a self-induced coma.
it's just an idea of what I think is possiable for your character, take it or leave it. But, it would explain his fathers obsessiveness. in his work, he may have misused this jutsu..."
FYI: his dad was obsessive (often not eating,drinking or even sleeping when he has a project that interests him) and always knew what,and when he had to do things (Aoi is not like him at all) |
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Jiriya (Aoi) SpamNobi


 Joined : 01 Feb 2008 Posts : 414 Village : Konohagure Married To: : anyone who can put up with me Bloodline : Retsu Clan (Neo-Rinnengan) Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Aoi otahu Thu Feb 21, 2008 2:26 pm | |
| | really? nobody has an opinion? thts crzy (but so are alot of things on here) |
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Sango Uzunirah SpamNobi


   Age : 18 Joined : 11 Feb 2008 Posts : 394 Village : Konoha Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Aoi otahu Thu Feb 21, 2008 5:02 pm | |
| Just go with it. It sounds good to me. It sounds like a very powerful kekkai genkai but with extremes reprecussions. _________________
-|-Character's Age: 14-|- -|-Sango Uzunirah's Demon Spirits Rathian & Rathlos Seal Awakened State-|-   |
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 | Subject: Re: Aoi otahu Thu Feb 21, 2008 5:17 pm | |
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what about anti? |
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Jiriya (Aoi) SpamNobi


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 | Subject: Re: Aoi otahu Fri Feb 22, 2008 7:04 am | |
| Yeah coma or insane....I will go with it that can b how I defeat Kiba....what do u think Anti? (I value ur opinion even if I don't think the same Anti-kun) |
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Jiriya (Aoi) SpamNobi


 Joined : 01 Feb 2008 Posts : 414 Village : Konohagure Married To: : anyone who can put up with me Bloodline : Retsu Clan (Neo-Rinnengan) Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Aoi otahu Mon Mar 31, 2008 3:00 pm | |
| After training for several months Aoi regains his ability to control his kekegenkai, on a mission to the land of rice patties Aoi again confronts Kiba, this time on a cliff taller than mount everest, and after several hours of fighting throws Kiba off of the cliff. the badly injured Aoi is found by the rest of his team & dragged to safety. after several weeks in a coma and several more of rehab Aoi is back on his feet and training harder than ever. several weeks after his recovery he learns of Kitsune of suna's strange relation ship with kiba, she cannot die until kiba does, and that since she's still alive so is kiba. after months of searching Aoi gives up and now spends his time as konoha's "new Jariah"
more 2marrow since I have 2 leave _________________ Giving all I have Understanding all Youth explode
Just A minute here who R u calling a perv! I am king And a Hero to all perverts |
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Jiriya (Aoi) SpamNobi


 Joined : 01 Feb 2008 Posts : 414 Village : Konohagure Married To: : anyone who can put up with me Bloodline : Retsu Clan (Neo-Rinnengan) Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Aoi otahu Tue Apr 01, 2008 6:48 am | |
| I request my char. becomes lvl 5 I request to make a few jutsu _________________ Giving all I have Understanding all Youth explode
Just A minute here who R u calling a perv! I am king And a Hero to all perverts |
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Kamen Inu Admin


   Age : 19 Joined : 10 Mar 2008 Posts : 760 Village : Akatsuki Married To: : dating kiba in rl Bloodline : Hyu-zu Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Aoi otahu Mon Jul 07, 2008 10:29 pm | |
| your story is pretty good aoi but i dont understand some of it. _________________
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