Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny

Subject: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:14 am

Name of your story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny
Does it change ur charecter in any way?: Little
Is it very short or epic size or in the Middle?: Epic size
Does it have any admins as charecters in it?: yes
does it have any people from this forum in it?: yes

Ill Update Every Part Of the Story.

Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:33 am

u supposed to get it approved before u post it
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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sun Sep 14, 2008 11:02 pm

Approved

Kenty dont kill me for approving. i know its your job, but i wanted to approve one story.
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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:20 am

The Beginning…

Devilz, A little kid who born to be an Uchiha member. His Father is Uchiha Sasuke, his uncle is Uchiha Satsu and his auntie is Bluemoon. His mother was killed by "Akatsuki" according to what his father has told him. He active his sharingan at age 7 and mastered his sharingan with 3 comma on it. He also has passed Genin exam at 13. He wears a special amulet that his mother made, there is also also seal in his stomach.

The day when Sasuke and his wife left their son and attend an “A” rank mission.“ Daddy! Mommy! Please stay! Don’t attend the mission! Please daddy! Please Mommy!” Devilz say… They did not leave a word, they smile before they leave me.
Two Days has passed, Devilz still haven’t see his mother and father for a long time… He though that he's not going to see them again. But he was wrong…“ Daddy! Where is mommy?” Devilz say… “Sorry son, she’s... She’s... Risk her life for saving me…” Devilz cried days and night. He thought he lost everything… But he made his mind, "I must be stronger. I’m an Uchiha!" He swore to have a revenge on the person who killed his family. Which was the “Akatsuki.” That’s what my father has told me. From that day on Devilz train days and night trying to be stronger… He thought he can train all day and become stronger but it was no use. So he began to attend academy.
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:21 am

Academy School...

The first day Devilz attend Academy school, he's not use to it. Until the person who sat next to him say “Hello, I’m Fang, nice to meet you.” Through the days in academy, People are guiding me through the life. This is where Devilz met Kent, the Retsu Clan’s Vice Leader. Kent is a senior student. Who guide me through academy and met lot of new people including Yoshi, Shinn, Mimo. “Please silent! Today we welcome a special guest to teach us a new technique. Please welcome, Bluemoon! She is the Hoshikage of Star Village.” Miss Yomu said. “Hello there, I’m Bluemoon, the Hoshikage.” Bluemoon said. “Gosh isn’t she pretty?!” Fang whisper to my ear. “Don’t you know Bluemoon is my auntie?” Devilz whisper back to Fang. Fang stared at me without a blink. “Today I will teach you guys how to control your chakra to walk on water and tree.” Bluemoon smile at us nicely. When Devilz walk up there, he feel so nervous. He slowly concentrate my chakra in my leg walk up to the tree. "Auntie MOON! I got up there!" Devilz yelled with excitement. "Hello there, would you want to try?" Bluemoon says. "definitely!" Fang immediately replied. He could easily walk up to the top of the tree. Meanwhile a senior student walk by, Uchiha Satsu. Bluemoon look at Satsu when Satsu walking toward to her. "Hello, Hoshikage. How are they doing?" Satsu says nice and deep. Bluemoon replied " They are really nice." Bluemoon smile at Satsu as Satsu walk away.
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:02 am

The Class Introduction

It has been few weeks study in academy. It’s kind of fun when we get to know more things. “Class, listen please. Today I would want you all introduce yourself. Since most of us are new. And I’ll call you guys out one by one.” Miss Yomu says. “First up, Fang you go first. Fang walk up to Miss Yomu slowly. “Hi everyone… Erm… I’m Fang, You could call me Baachi if you wish to. I’m an Uchiha. Erm… Heheh. I got nothing much to say…” “Next up, Can… Devilz you come up?” Everyone was looking at him, Devilz slowly walk up to Miss Yomu. “Hello all, I’m also from Uchiha. You could call me Matthew, but I prefer people call me Devilz. Erm… My uncle is Uchiha Satsu, my auntie is Bluemoon. And my father is Uchiha Sasuke…” “Who’s your mother then?” Someone says. “I don’t have a mother. My mother died when I was 5. She was killed by Akatsuki. That’s what my father told me.” Miss Yomu stared at me and dropped her pen. “Oh. Erm… Thank you Devilz, you may go back to your seat.” Suddenly, Hokage Aigoro comes in to our class. "Aigoro-Sama!" The class says. Aigoro put his hand up and smile at us. "I'm here to check out how are you guys doing. A reminder, next monday is Genin exam. Please make sure you bring all the equipment you need." Hokage Aigoro left the room as we continue our lesson.
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:11 am

Genin Exam

The day when my father Uchiha Sasuke brought me to school, he said something really important. “Show them what you got. I’m proud of having you be my son.” Devilz don’t really know what he’s trying to say. But he always remember it. When he was walking to the Genin exam area, a guy pulled his right arm. He stand in guard and say “Who are you? What do you want?” “Release the power you got inside you. I know your stronger than I thought.” The person disappears. Devilz barely can see his face. But it’s too dark when he wore a cloak. I’m so confuse, about what the man just say… Devilz was really afraid something will go wrong… He return to the Genin exam area, and he have been called out by a Jounin.

Hokage Aigoro has told me to accomplish three hard test. Devilz stay calm through the whole time. The first test is to locate and hit all 20 targets in the forest. Devilz accomplish that task and move on to part 2. Aigoro-Sama request me to set up trap in a cave. And of course, I passed part 2. The last task that Aigoro-Sama given me was locate the REAL hokage. He created 100 clones of himself. But Devilz easily located him with clothing, and also remember where he stand. When the exam was over. Devilz am soo frighten.. He scared that he wont pass. Suddenly My father, Uchiha Sasuke says " I'm sure you will pass because you are my son." The next day, Devilz saw his name in the board. "I passed! CAN YOU SEE MY NAME! IT’S THERE I PASSED!” He yelled with excitement.
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:12 am

Team Genins

As Devilz woke up he heard his father said there are 3 students who passed Chuunin exam. Devilz was thinking about it when he walks to Academy school. As Devilz walk in to my class room, Devilz saw Ino-sensei & Aigoro-Sama stood in the center of the room. My legs were shaking, Devilz couldnt wait to know whos my sensei. Devilz walk slowly to my seat and wait for everyone to be here. Mimotaku whispered to me, "Hey Devilz, hope you get a good sensei." Devilz smiled back to Mimo. When everyone has arrived, Aigoro-Sama stood one step closer to us. Aigoro speak loudly, "Welcome Genins. From now on, you no longer a Academy Students. You will now be assign to a sensei. Ino!" Ino stood beside Aigoro, "Now ill call your name, and your team number. Once your team is all here, ill tell you the location where to meet your sensei."

"Team 12, Kyotoshien, Yorimoto & Devilz. Your sensei is Uchiha Sasuke. You will meet your sensei at training ground #1." Kyoto & Yori stood up and stand together. As Devilz stood up Sakura interrupted, "Sorry, Devilz. Kiato, your team 12." Devilz desperately sit down but he knows if he goes with Uchiha Sasuke, his father, he won't be able to learn much.

"Team 13, Shinn, Rin & Jubei. Your sensei is Nara Shikamaru. You will meet your sensei at training ground #2." 3 Genins stood up and walk out of the classroom...

30mins later, the teams sorting has ends...

As Aigoro & Ino walk out the classroom, Devilz immediately walk in front of them. "Aigoro-Sama, may i ask, where is my sensei?!" Devilz hold his hands tightly. Aigoro smiled and say, "Devilz, your sensei has come late." Devilz dropped his head, "Then where is my team mates?" Aigoro look back, "Ino!" Ino replied, "Devilz, Aigoro has assign you to be with Uchiha Obito. He is one of the Chuunin that just passed. I bet you know him." Devilz smiled at Ino. Aigoro look into Devilz eye, "Devilz, you have no team mates yet, because i know you are talented. Sakura & Obito will be your sensei." Obito walk in, "Oh! Devilz, so your my student?" Devilz put his thumb up and look back to Aigoro, "But why Ino is my sensei too?!" Aigoro look at Ino and Obito, "Theres something you shouldnt know..." Aigoro walk out with Ino as Obito close the door and chat with me.
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:29 am

Protect Konoha

Devilz was going to Ramen Shop with Shinn and Mimo. During our walk an explosion has active. All villager and Genin below were called by the Special Jounin to the hidden place. When everyone else was fighting outside with the enemies, Devilz was so angry. He was thinking why couldn’t he go out and help? Why do he have to stay here?! Everyone is fighting outside. Konoha’s biggest fear was here. He can’t do anything but wait. The time has passes; the invasion from other village was over. the funeral has come...

We all wore black to a funeral for all the shinobi that risked their life for Konoha. The wind blow at me slowly. Devilz look up at the sky, the sun shines at me. He swore to himself that his dream is to become the Hokage to protect everyone in Konoha. To have everyone acknowledges me. No more death should appears in my sight.
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:30 am

The Changes

It has been 7 months has passed from that attack. Konoha has return restored to its former glory. Everyone has changed; Devilz didn’t give up my dream to become the Hokage of Konoha. Fang asked me to be his student. At that point, He immediately say “yes.” He told me three people have passed the Chuunin exam. And one of them was him. He taught me everything he got, and Devilz think Obito is proud of him.
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:31 am

nice story Devilz =)
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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:34 am

Thanks Kent!xD

Kent, im gonna put you in a fight with Fang

And Mimo going to be in a fight with Aigoro.
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My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:36 am

Another Attack

*BANG* A Big explosion has active. All Shinobi was called by Hokage Aigoro. “Please go with your team. You all have to fight for Konoha.” During our way to Konoha’s main gate, Devilz saw group of people wearing cloak. They aren’t Anbu. So He told Fang, “Fang, ill catch you up later.” Fang just went off and Devilz immediately went to Hokage Room. *Knock… Knock.* He open the door and walk up to Hokage Aigoro. “Aigoro-Sama, I saw a group of people wearing cloak that enters out village. I think it’s the enemies. They invaded us!” “Gosh! They’re here!” Aigoro-Sama did some hand seal and created 10 birds with origami no jutsu. He command all birds contact everyone beware there’s enemies invaded us. Devilz immediately catch up with Fang, I told him everything… “Devilz, use this scroll when it is needed.” Devilz don’t know what is it, but because he trust Fang, so he kept it with him…

* Next Chapter: Devilz Vs. Idon
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:53 am

Devilz vs. Idon

Devilz and Fang were called back to hokage room. Suddenly, the special seal as active by four hidden shinobi has surrounded a area. Aigoro-Sama, Devilz and Fang were trapped inside the area. “Black seal technique” someone created some dark vines wall separated Aigoro, Fang and Devilz. “Haha! Why would Orochimaru called us to fight this little kid?” a person who hidden in the shadow says. “Who are you?! Show yourself!” Devilz yelled to no one… “ I’m your biggest fear, where is your mother and father? Want to cry? Huh? Do you know your mother hates you? He left you and went to me?! Hahahha! He said.

Devilz was wondering how she know my mother is gone. He start feeling angry. Devilz want to kill him. "No one should mention my mother like that!" Devilz Sharingan has active. “Call me Idon. Let me finish you now!” Idon said. Idon rush toward to Devilz and stab him with his kunai. But Devilz saw all his movement and easily escape from the attack. “NO ONE SHOULD MENTION MY MOTHER!” Devilz scream and aim for the right time to use Chidori. Idon has taken off his mask and active… The sharingan?! Idon suddenly appears beside me and use rasengan on my back.
Devilz losing lots of blood. He barely could stand up and fight against him. Suddenly Sasuke Appears, he concentrates all his charka on his senbon. He throw three senbon on Idon. Idon scream “What are these?! ARGH! My BODY!” As the senbon goes inside Idon’s body. Idon begin to turn black. There’s something about my father, Sasuke which Deivlz don’t know.

* Next Chapter: Fang & Kent vs. Demon Brother III
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Sep 15, 2008 5:01 am

Fang & Kent vs. Demon Brother III

In the other side…
“Hello? Anyone here?!” “Is there someone?” “Yes, I’m here!” Fang saw a shadow moving closer and closer to him. Fang concentrate his chakra on the kunai and throw them toward the shadow. “DIE!” the shadow dodges the kunai. “Holy who the hell are you? Are you trying to kill me?!” the shadow says. Fang charges his hand with Chidori. Meanwhile The shadow charges a chidori too… They both were running toward to each other. “DIE!” they both said. The shadow says “STOP! Are you Fang?!” Fang replied. “Kent? Is it you?” Shadow replied “Oh my gosh! I founded you Fang! WOOHOO!” Kent took out the torch. *DING* the torch is on. “Ah! I found you Fang!” Kent hugged Fang tightly and cried in his chest. Fang hugged back and cry! “Ah! Kent, I miss you gosh. I thought you were dead.” Fang say when he cried and snuggle in Kent chest. Kent glared at Fang. “Look at me, do you think I will die that easy?!”

Suddenly two other shadows appear. “Whoa! Two whiny babies crying here?” The shadows start laugh. “Kent, who are they?” Fang whisper in Kent’s ear. Kent replied “Um… alien?” The shadow says “WE’RE THE DEMON BROTHERS III! WE’RE NOT ALIEN!” Water Style: Suiryuudan no Jutsu(Water Dragon Projectile Technique) Two water Dragon aim Kent and Fang. Kent pull Fang shirt. “RUN!” Fang stand in Guard and use few hand seals and created “FIRE BALL JUTSU!” Kent immediately active his neo-rinnengan and copy Fang’s fire ball jutsu. Two water dragon hits on their fire ball jutsu. The mist began to spread everywhere… Kent “It’s my turn to be serious, Obsidian Needle Rain!” The sky began to fall needles rain on the demon brothers III. “BRO, LOOK UP!” the brothers prefer a special jutsu “Taihoudan - Large Projectile” a blast of water blocked all of the rain. Meanwhile Fang summon Anko’s Giant Snake, the snake began to swallow one of the brother and dissolve…

“BROTHER!” “Ox, Boar, Dog, Bird, Dragon, Ox, Boar, Dog, Bird, Dragon, Ox, Board, Dog, Bird, DRAGON! SUMMON Ruiga's Shark & Piranhas!” “Fang maybe we should combine our power.” Kent charges Lightning Element on his hand. “I’m waiting for this already!” Fang replied. Fang began to charges fire element on his hand. “Katon- Raiton: Volcanic Lightning!” They place their hands on the ground. The ground begin to form some spikes, flame begin to leak out from the spikes. The sky turns black. A zap of lightning hits on each spike. “Raiton- Fuuton: Touch of the lightning!” The ground began to soak all the water. The flame has dried, the lightning form a tiger. The wind began to absorb drain all the water in the ground. The power gather at Kent and Fang’s hand. Kent and Fang began to run toward to the brother. “NO! HELP BROTHER! HELP!” *BANG* Fang and Kent hit on the brother’s heart, his skin begin to tear apart… “Gosh! I feel like I’m in Naruto Movie #1. This jutsu is soo like that rasengan!” Kent says to Fang with a smile. “Kent… You know..? YOU’RE RIGHT! WE’RE LIKE THE MOVIE!”

Next Chapter: Aigoro's 100 vs The 100
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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