Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny

Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:25 pm

"um...alien?" xD

lol, love it Devz Smile

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Tue Sep 16, 2008 2:10 am

Aigoro’s 100 vs Sashinori's 100

Aigoro walk around in the dark area, hope he could get away from here. Suddenly he senses something coming toward him. *Hand Seals* “Origami No Jutsu.” He created a defensive paper house and hide inside. Aigoro began to bite his hand and drop a little blood on the ground. He draws a circle around the little drop of blood in the center. He began to meditate and speak some weird language. (With the drop of blood i given you, review itself. Give me the power of Light. Evil should be gone. No more death upon. I SUMMON YOU!) Aigoro took out a scroll and began to say “Life upon the sea, Life upon the heaven and life upon the sky give me your power and resurrect them!” The house transform to 100 paper warriors. A small sparkle little began to appear; it divided to 100 and enters each of the warrior’s body. A mysterious guy appears from the ground, “So you’re Aigoro? I’m here to eliminate you; people usually called me the “Sashinori.” Aigoro replied “Sashinori? Are you..? Aren’t you Sasori’s Puppet? How could you?” Aigoro stared at him. “Someone recruited me and give me a life. So you want to fight my Earth element power? HUH? Seems like you wish to fight me with your paper clones…” Sashinori yelled. All the paper warriors stand in guard. Aigoro concentrate his charka and created charka strings on each finger. The strings connected to each of the warrior just like the puppets.

Sashinori said, “You aren’t in Kai Rai clan, how could you be able to control them like a puppet?!” Aigoro smile and replied in a nice and deep voice. “Practice, practice, practice. It is all what you need to do.” Sashinori pull out a scroll “SUMMON 100 SANJINS” 100 Japanese puppets as appear. “Puppets vs puppet is that fine? Or are you too afraid to fight? HUH?” Sashinori asked in a mean and creepy looking… “Why would I be afraid? Maybe you aren’t that strong!” Aigoro replied. Aigoro begin to move his right hand’s finger. Twenty five puppets move around in a fast speed. Fifty puppets move around themselves and start in guard in order to protect Aigoro. Aigoro begin to move and push his left hand. Twenty five puppets move toward and form a weapon out by his paper hand. The paper clones starts to move toward on Sanjins and attack them. Sashinori says, “TOO EASY!” Sashinori move his right thumb. All his puppet start in guard and block all the attacks. BLING! BANG! SHING! “AH!” They both screamed.

Outside in Konoha, Ihmed was praying for Aigoro. He hopes everything will be fine. Back then…Both side has left one warriors. They both stab each other with their last warrior… Sashinori says, “Aigoro, give it up. You are OLD!” Aigoro glared at Sashinori. “Say Bye-Bye! Cage Monster!” Cages Monster has appeared and swallows Sashinori. The dark wall has break down. “AIGORO!” Devilz yelled. Mimo passed by, “Devilz I’ll take Aigoro to the hospital!” Kent went off with Mimo since he is very worried about him. Fang says “Enemies are gone. Not everyone were destroyed. We should restore Konoha to its former glory.”
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Tue Sep 16, 2008 2:16 am

The Leader

6 months has passed, Konoha is restored. Everything turns to be normal… Uchiha Sasuke has passed his leader position of Uchiha Clan to Uchiha Satsu and Devilz was chosen to become the Vice-Leader. Weeks and weeks has passed, Satsu has passed his position to Uchiha Siara. The first female leader of Uchiha Clan. Satsu has step down from the leader position and become the Vice Leader. And ofcourse, Devilz still remain as Vice Leader with Satsu.

Few weeks later...

“Announcement!” Hokage Aigoro is passing his Hokage Position to someone really special. “Siara!” Everyone attend the ceremonies. We all congratulated her. Siara is the leader of Uchiha Clan. It was passed by my uncle, Uchiha Satsu. And Uchiha Satsu was passed by my father, Uchiha Sasuke. That is what makes me proud. “Announce, the new hokage, Yondaime Siara!” We all bow at the hokage.
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Tue Sep 16, 2008 5:16 am

First Training
Devilz woke up early 6am and wait for Ino & Obito at Training ground #1. Obito suddenly appears in front of Devilz, "Wheres Ino?" Devilz replied, "She hasn't arrived." Obito look in to Devilz eyes, "Okay! We did tree climbing at Academy.. Hm..." Devilz asked, "Obito-Sensei! How come you become a Chuunin that fast when we were in the same class during academy?" Obito replied, "It doesn't matter. Remember this word, Ninja that doesn't care their comrades are worst than a loser." Devilz eyes grew bigger, "I'll remember it Sensei!" Obito smiled, "Today, your training is.. Hm... You've learnt to walk on tree & water, so what can i teach you?" Suddenly Ino appears beside Obito. "Morning guys, today Devilz we will learn battle tatics." *Puff* Suddenly Yamashiro Aoba & Maito Gai appears. Ino continue her talk, "Aoba and Gai sensei will be your enemy. Now show us your skills." Obito yelled, "START!"

Devilz jumped back and took out a kunai. Aoba suddenly disappeared when Gai run toward to Devilz. Devilz run toward and hit Gai with his fist, But Gai easily dodge it. Gai jumped up, when Devilz look up the sun shines his eyes. He could see anything. But it was a distraction, Aoba sensei holds on the Devilz leg from the ground. When Gai land back down he begin to run toward to Devilz and use Dynamic Entry, Devilz active his sharingan and kept throwing kunai to stop the attack but it wouldn't works. Ino whispered to Obito, "This test is hard for him." When Gai's feet almost reach to Devilz, Devilz immediately knee down. Devilz charged a chidori and hit it on the ground. Aoba sensei's hand was damaged by the chidori. Devilz jumped up and throw kunais at Gai. But Gai easily block them. Obito whispered to Sakura, "Impressive!" Ino walk up, "Stop!" As 2 jounins smiled at Devilz and disappears. Obtio smiled at Devilz, "You've done well today, I hope you learn something new."

Next Chapter: Devilz's memories: Part 1
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sat Sep 27, 2008 6:57 am

Devilz's memories: Part 1

When Devilz return home, father, Sasuke left a note. “Dear son, Ill be back as soon as possible. I am out to a mission, dinner at the stove. Love, Sasuke.” Devilz sat down and meditate in the living room. A while later, when he stood up, he accidentally drop a cup of tea below the closet. Meanwhile Devilz was cleaning the floor; he discovered that there are a passage connects to somewhere. So he decided to push off the closet and open the passage. As Devilz walks down his head start to feel a little painful. There were many scrolls placed there, which he discovered a journey written by his mother. Devilz look carefully at each book and decide to stay and have a read. Mostly, the scrolls were creatures that sealed into the scroll or a special scroll that needed in fight. He walk to a corner and discovered stuff from his father and mother. I began to take some of the book out and read it in my room. Devilz took three books from the passage including “Uchiha Record,” “Sasuke’s Book,” and… and… “My Diary.” Devilz began sat down at his bed and read the diaries. “Content including: My Life time, what I want to say, forgive me, Secret, your diaries.” He began to flip through the book read through it…

Next Chapter: Devilz's memories: Part 2 - In The Book
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sat Oct 04, 2008 11:59 pm

Devilz's long lost memory: Part 2- In the Book…

Tsunade- Sama. As well as my sensei, she taught me all medical studies I need to know. I will never forget what she taught me… Her body is gone, but her soul is with Konoha. I still remember the day she saved my life…

20 years ago, when I was 12… I was attacked by Hidden Rain shinobi. I am totally defending less. I wasn’t strong enough to protect myself. The Hidden Rain shinobi attacked me, I thought I couldn’t survive and I would die in the forest… Tsunade – Sama was returning to Konoha from a mission. As she returning to Konoha, she saw me lying under the big tree suffering with pain. I cough with blood out of my mouth. Tsunade walk up to me she saw the symbol on my coat, the uchiha. She immediately heal my wound. I recover in a short period of time. “Get well, kid. Ill bring you back.” Tsunade speak in a soft voice. I replied when I coughed “Thank you, I owe you a big one. Are you… Are you Tsunade- Sama?!” Tsunade smile at me, “what do you think?” I begin to kneeling down on my knees with my hands on my lap. “Tsunade- Sama, please, may you accept me to be your apprentice!” I lower my head. Tsunade- Sama glared on me; she was looking in to my eyes. “In one condition…” I begin to look into Tsunade- Sama’s eyes. “In what condition?!” Tsunade begin to laugh, “Wait until your injury has fully recovered.” “Thank you Tsunade –Sama!” I stood up and bow at Tsunade with a smile.

Seven years later…

Seven years has been passed, I become Jounin. That is the day I met him, Uchiha Sasuke… There are too many memories to say. All I could say is, I willing to risk my life for the one I love.

When I was age 28 I married to him. It was the best memories ever… I could never forget. After a year and a half, my baby has finally born. I named him Devilz, Uchiha Devilz. After 6 years, Devilz is finally 6 years old. I wrote everything I know about medical that Tsunade taught me inside a book. I was about to pass the book to Devilz and teach him, although I didn’t. Instead of giving him the book, I locked inside a box and hide it inside the secret passage. I given him an amulet that I made. It was a key to the box as well as the charm to protect him from the evil force.

One night, I was on a mission with 3 Chuunins. I regret that day; we were on a mission to stop 2 members from Akatsuki from capturing a bijuu. My team was really injured from the damage that the Akatsuki done. The time I rush to protect the bijuu, I made a deal with him. I sealed the bijuu in to a scroll. My team managed to escape, when I return to Konoha. I release the bijuu and sealed inside my son. I really regret what I have done. But I have no choice, and so I explain to Sasuke and the Hokage. The Hokage willing to help me so she used 5 elements unseal on Devilz’s stomach. Since Devilz is still young he couldn’t hold that much power. Although I realize the amulet I given to Devilz was also a power source to control the bijuu until he could managed to control the strength of it.

Devilz realize how much things his mother and father hide things away from him. So he went in to the passage and look for the box. Devilz grab his amulet and place it on the box. As the box and the amulet begin to shines, the lock has broke apart. Devilz grabbed the book and begin to flip through it. Devilz smiled as he slip the book inside my shirt and leave the passage.

Next Chapter: Hoshikage in trouble!
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sun Oct 05, 2008 10:46 am

Hoshikage in Trouble: Part 1

Early morning, the sun shines on my eyes. *knock* *knock* Devilz stood up and open the door. Jubei look at me, “Devilz get changed the Hokage have a mission for us!” Devilz get his outfit on and toward to the Hokage office. “Okay! Listen up you 6 genins. This is serious! I receive news that Akatsuki are planning to kidnap the Hoshikage, Bluemoon. NO MATTER WHAT WE HAVE TO PROTECT HER! I mean it! It’s a special B rank mission for you all!” Everyone grew their eyes wide. “Since every above Chuunin is on other mission. Only you guys are left. Jubei, Rin, Devilz you guys will head toward to star village to protect the Hoshikage! Rasendori, Mimotaku and Shinn you guys will track Akatsuki at Trading Post #2 & 3. Mimotaku, Devilz you guys will take lead for your team! ACTION!” we lower our head, as everyone begin to leave the room Hokage ask me to stay for a while. “Devilz, I know you are worried, I just want to tell you that your aunt is strong. I know her well. But I would want you to get prepare…” Devilz didn’t say a word and left the room. Everyone was waiting for Devilz at the front gate. As Devilz arrived, Team Mimotaku has start action. “Guys, It’s action time!” Devilz raised his hand under the sun.

7 hours has passed, its 5pm. They finally arrive Star Village. As Devilz and his team mate sit at the ground waiting for the Hoshikage… As the Hoshikage walks out, every one of us stared at her clothing… It was beautiful! She was like a Peacock. As she sat on her throne, she smiles at us. “Thank you and welcome to Star Village. Thank you for coming to protect me. I think the Hokage has told you everything am I right?” I lower my head to show respect, “Yes, we are here to protect you until Konoha has eliminated the Akatsuki.” The Hoshikage stood up and raise his left hand slowly, she smiled at us. A young shinobi called Eric has brought us to our rooms. As we walk in Eric says “Here’s your room. Please stay here for now.” As Eric closes the door we dropped our small backpack. Rin says “Hey guys, before we get here, I study a little bit about the place here. Star Village isn’t really big. I already brought the map of this village and this building.” Rin open his bag and took out 2 scrolls. “Have a look, this scroll is Star Village and this scroll is where we are right now.” Jubei was shocked, “Than… What is our plan? If there are enemies here, we can’t handle them around here.” Devilz smiled, "I have already planned.” Jubei replied, “What is it?!” Devilz look at Rin and Jubei, “My plan is complicated. Rin, you have to try and avoid all the attacks in order to heal our wounds and protect the Hoshikage. Jubei, since your good at close combat ill have you in front. I need you to deal more damage to them as well prevent them from attacking me, since I have to prepare a special treat for them.” Rin asked “What treat?” I replied Rin, “You’ll know…”

Next Chapter: Hoshikage in Trouble: Part 2 - WHAT?!
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sun Oct 05, 2008 11:33 am

Hoshikage in Trouble: Part 2 - WHAT?!

Its 6pm, the clouds are covering the light...

3 Shinobi run toward to Hoshikage, “Hoshikage, what is going on?!” Hoshikage replied them, “Number 1, call me Bluemoon. And Number 2, we recently receive news that Akatsuki is coming tonight. So stand in guard.” Devilz smiled, “Guys, action time!” Jubei use transformation jutsu and change himself to Bluemoon. Rin grab Bluemoon’s hand as he took out a kunai and run to the basement and hide. Devilz smiled at them and whispered to myself, “Guys… I hope this is not the last chance to see you all.” Devilz did few hand seals and created 10 shadow clones with Kage Bunshin No jutsu. The 10 clones scattered around us and hide. As the cloud slowly covers the moon, a explosion has active. Devilz yelled, “Jubei!” Jubei and Devilz run out of the building of Hoshikage. As we see guys wearing black coat with red clouds on it. Jubei whispered, “It’s the Akatsuki…”

The person with a flute says, “Oh hello! Move off you Konoha Shinobi! We are on a serious mission!” Jubei says, “So as I!” Devilz says, “according to what Rin has researched, the person with flute call Tatake. The person beside him that doesn’t seems normal called Nataka.” Nataka says, “We haven’t introduce our self and you know us?! Tatake, we have plenty of time. Let’s play with them…” Tatake laughed, “Of course!” Nataka did few hand seal he manipulate the shadow. Jubei says “Devilz be careful! Nataka has similar power like the Nara clan! The shadow of Nataka has rapidly moved to Jubei. Jubei wasn’t fast enough to avoid his attack. Nataka says “Tatake!” Tatake replied, “Yeah, what ever!” Tatake did few hand seals and, “Earth Element: ground dog area seal!” A wall has created around us. We may not be able to escape.

As Nataka Shadow possession jutsu has active, he did another hand seals which hundred of movable shadow tentacles are moving mid air but not on the ground. Jubei wasn’t able to move… When Devilz push Jubei away, he has his body connect with the shadows. Meanwhile Jubei move quickly has use reverse lotus on Nataka. *Boom* Somehow Jubei was the person who falls at the ground. Nataka control those shadow tentacles and stabbed through Jubei body. But it was a replacement jutsu. As Jubei trying to reach for Nataka, Tatake capture him and kick him to the ground. Jubei wasn’t able to stand up.

So Tatake did some hand seals and, “Heavenly pain of hell.” As Tatake play the flute, me and Jubei felt the pain given from the flute. Our heart was like being squeeze, or like the fire burning it… Nataka stopped the Shadow, Devilz hold his ear with his hand but it was useless. He looked at Tatake and realize Tatake needs the flute. Devilz screamed, “Jubei High kick in 45% degree now! Jubei immediately kicked which the flute breaks apart. When Jubei try to punch Tatake, Nataka appears behind Tatake and hold his head. “Tatake, your useless now!” Tatake body was blow up with a touch by Nataka… Jubei and Devilz open our eyes widely…

Next Chapter: Hoshikage in Trouble: Part 3 - The Peacock
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sun Oct 05, 2008 7:40 pm

Hoshikage in Trouble: Part 3 – The Peacock

Recently, Nataka has killed Tatake, everyone open their eyes widely…

Nataka sealed Tatake body inside a scroll, “I’ll sell this body. Now who’s next?” Jubei was panic, as Nataka did some hand seal and his took out his scythe. Nataka run quickly and try to hit Jubei with his scythe. Jubei was panic, “no please!” Jubei begin to drop some tears. When the scythe begins to hit Jubei from above, Devilz push Jubei off! The scythe hit me left stomach. The blood leak out quickly. Jubei become a little strange, Devilz felt that his chakra flow is getting faster… Jubei stood up, “Time for your death!” Jubei moved quickly and hit Nataka front & back, then front & back. He immediately holds Nataka tightly and use reverse lotus, although Nataka avoid the reverse lotus and throw Jubei on to the ground. Jubei and Devilz were in serious injured…

When we begin to felt its over a person yelled, “Ninja art: Kujaku!” Purple things wrapped Nataka. Nataka scream, “WHAT IS THIS?!” Bluemoon smiled, it’s the Mysterious Peacock Method. Devilz stood up and say “Rin?! Aren’t you suppose to protect her?!” Rin replied, “I’m sorry. We’re worried about you guys! Let me heal your wounds!” Rin run toward to Jubei and Devilz when Bluemoon is holding Nataka down. Rin did few hand seals and place his palm at our wound. “It would hurt a little but hold on. But you guys in serious pain.” Rin stop his healing jutsu and grab 2 potions from his bag. “Jubei drink this, it’s a potion I made for recover some chakra. And Devilz, ill drop some of this potion on your wound. It will recover ur blood vessel and well stop the blood leaking out. It also has a effect to recover some chakra.” As Jubei drink the potion, he stood up, “WOOHOO! I feel strong!” Devilz wound is getting better by Rin’s secret medical technique. Rin says, “Devilz stay! Your wound isn’t recovered yet!” Rin did few hand seals and place his palm on Devilz wound. Rin’s palm begins to glow. He begin to felt a lot better than before.

Devilz say, “Boys, Action time!” Bluemoon you can relax now. As Bluemoon release Nataka, Bluemoon know it won’t be that easy so she use Mysterious Peacock Method: Beast. A beast appears and attack Nataka mean while Devilz Summon his Giant Snake. When everyone tried to attack Nataka, Nataka took out a scroll and managed to escape…Rin try to stop him, so he created 2 shadow clones to fallow Nataka. After few minutes later, the clones buff. Rin lower his head, “Nataka has managed to escape my clones has gone…” Jubei and Devilz smiled, “Its fine.”
As they return to the Hoshikage office. Bluemoon sat on her throne, "Well done guys. Thank you for protecting me. Mission accomplished, you all may go back to Konoha." Blue moon smiled. We all bow at Hoshikage as she walks away, and so we return to Konoha. At the same time, the other team return from tracking Akatsuki...
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Oct 06, 2008 7:46 pm

The thing that never ends: Part 1

Early morning, Devilz woke up when the sun shines on his eyes. Devilz changed to his ninja outfit as he passed by the closet in his room. He stops by the closet and look at it and whisper to himself, “Will there be a passage in this room?” He push off the closet and he saw a weird symbol. He realizes he could try by, Sharingan. Devilz active his sharingan as he look at to the weird symbol. The symbol begin to glow, it opens up a under ground passage. As Devilz walk in the entrance begin to close, the closet automatically move back to the wall. The lights are on as Devilz walks down the stairs.

Devilz saw a Uchiha Fan at the wall, five rooms. As he gets closer to the wall, he saw there is a summoning plate at the ground. Devilz enter the first room where all medical stuff that his mother used to have. He walks in the rooms look at the potions and herbs. As he flips through the books, he saw his family photo at the table. He enters the second room; he saw many books about the world of shinobi. He thought this room was similar to the library. As Devilz look at the books, he discovered a bingo book. He places the bingo book in to his cloths and walk out. As he walk in the next room, he saw a lot of old times memories like the first toys Devilz played with. And… and he saw his mother shinobi headband… He walks out the room and look inside the next room. He saw all are books again…

So he walks to the fifth room, which is below the Uchiha Fan. Devilz push the door, the room was empty… but there was a book at the ground. He picks up that book and read through it. It was a empty bingo book… So he took out the bingo book from his cloth. Flip through it and saw… saw… Kelsey’s grand parents! He immediately place 2 bingo books inside his cloth and run over to Kelsey house…

Next Chapter: The thing that never ends: Part 2 - The Fight
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Tue Oct 21, 2008 7:23 am

The thing that never ends: Part 2 - The Fight

*Knock*Knock* “Kelsey! Open up the door!” Devilz yelled as he knocks the door hardly. Kelsey opens up the door, “Devilz?! Come in.” Devilz sat at the ground when Kelsey is getting out some tea. “Kelsey, listen up. I founded a secret passage in my room, I went in and I know lots more about my father and my mother. But this isn’t the main point.” Kelsey looks closely at Devilz eye… “My parents leave a room for me to do stuff inside where I found a empty bingo book at the ground. There are other 4 rooms… In my father’s room I founded a Bingo book, as I flip through it I founded your grand parents… I think you might know something between our families.” Kelsey’s eye grew wider as Devilz took out the bingo book… “It’s true?!” Kelsey screams… Devilz hold Kelsey tightly, “What its true?!” Kelsey push me off, “60 years ago, our family has a problem. We tried to kill each other no matter what. When The Third Hokage stops the fight between us, everything is settling. Although until now, we are still enemies. I never thought its true…” Devilz begin to panic… “We could change everything Kelsey…” Kelsey run off, “Kelsey! WAIT UP!” Devilz yelled as he tries to fallow Kelsey.

Kelsey walk to the forest, she stopped at the old plain ground and begin to do some hand seals. “Tiger, Ox, Rabbit, Snake, Horse, Tiger, Ox Rabbit, Snake, Horse.” Kelsey whispered to herself. “Kai!” The ground begin to shake, the underground passage has open. As Kelsey walk down to the passage, Devilz sneaked in. Therefore 2 mysterious shinobi from Hidden Sound has sneak in too… Kelsey stopped to move, “Devilz, I’m sorry but I have to eliminate you!” Kelsey took out a Kunai as she run rapidly to Devilz. “Muhahaha! Siaki & Uchiha’s next generation is here. Its time to say goodbye.” 2 shadow move rapidly and stopped behind Devilz. “Doryuu Taiga - Earth Flow River!” The ground is turning to mud, flowing toward to Devilz. As the mud hit on Devilz, Devilz couldn’t move a single finger. “Doton Kekkai • Dorou Doumu - Earth Barrier • Earth Dome Prison!” The shadow place his hand in front of Devilz the ground forms a barrier. Devilz’s chakra was being absorbs. Kelsey yelled, “WHAT ARE YOU GUYS DOING! SUITON: WATER DRAGON JUTSU! Kelsey release a large water dragon toward to the shadows. “HAHA! IT’S USELESS!” *BOOM*

“Origami style: Origami shuriken!” A Shadow appears from above. The attack double strikes 2 shadow. Kelsey screams “AIGORO!” Aigoro smiled at Kelsey, "save Devilz first." Kelsey drops her head, "but…” Aigoro yelled with his anger, “I know everything already, just put it down for now. Listen to me; ninja that doesn’t care about their comrades are worst then a loser!” Kelsey stood up, “I can do this!” Kelsey run rapidly as one of the shadow tried to attack her. Although Kelsey unleashes her inner power, the light purple chakra begins to flow around her. Kelsey jumped up high and heel drop on the barrier. The barrier breaks apart. Devilz felt unconscious and he fell on the ground. The enemies retreated. As Devilz woke up, he was on the bed in Konoha’s hospital. Kelsey sudden walk in the room and smiled at me. “I guess we’re both settle down now. We have nothing to do with it. We shall forget it. Sorry Kelsey…” Devilz felt sorry… Kelsey replied, “I guess your right…” Kelsey smiled and leave...

Next Chapter: Team Genin's mission
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Fri Oct 24, 2008 4:16 am

very cool devilz!!!

Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Fri Oct 24, 2008 4:57 am

This is very well written out, but I still do not like that you used I, to show that is was you. When you use a character, I'd much rather see, your own name, instead of I use Devilz. Devilz, you are a good writer. I also like the way, you did not follow how Anti posted, how to write a story. Good Job, and Good luck on the rest of it.

Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:01 am

Thanks ^^
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:39 am

Team Genin’s Mission-Part 1

*BANG* “Devilz wake up!” Mimotaku yelled when Devilz was still asleep. Devilz blink his eye, look out the window. The sun shines on Devilz eyes. As he scratches his eye, “What sup Amnael” Amnael scream, “Hokage-Sama called us to meet her at her room! RIGHT NOW!” Devilz immediately get changed and went to Hokage’s room with Amnael. Devilz waited outside when 4 genins come. “What are you guys doing here?” Devilz said facing everyone. Mimotaku replied, “Hokage-Sama called us to come.” Hokage yelled from the room, “Come in!” When everyone stands still in front of the Hokage, she speaks again, “Hmm… So everyone is present. Last night, we receive news from Fire Temple. Akatsuki is going to capture Sora’s son, Sactoro. I need you to save and return Sora’s son. Kelsey, Devilz & Rin, you will be saving Sactoro. Amnael, Jubei & Miyuki you will be tracking Akatsuki’s hideout. NOW GO!” They all bowed at Hokage and leave the room…

Next Chapter: Team Genin’s Mission-Part 2: Hunted
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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