Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny

Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:57 am

Reading this... Im reminded of Hogwarts... and I refuse to be Dumbledore!
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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sat Oct 25, 2008 6:50 am

Team Genin’s Mission-Part 2: Hunted

Kelsey, Devilz & Rin begin to walk out Konoha as the other team track down Akatsuki. Two days has pass, Devilz and the others arrived the closest trading place from Fire Temple…

Kelsey whispered, “Devilz, Rin prepare for the fight!” They all hide in the bush...
“Tiashu come quick!” Konan yelled. Rin warn Devilz and Kelsey, “The Akatsuki is here. Is that Konan? I thought she was dead long time ago!” Kelsey whispered, “Its Sactoro!” Konan throw paper Shurikens at the bush, “Who’s there?!” Devilz, Kelsey and Rin show up. Tiashu was shocked when she saw Devilz. Konan said, “Shinobi from Konoha eh?” Kelsey took out a kunai, “Give Sactoro back!” Devilz eyes grew bigger as he saw Tiashu… Devilz slowly walk toward to Tiashu, “You seem so familiar…” Rin pulled Devilz back, “Devilz be careful!” Devilz knee down to the ground, Tiashu used a genjutsu to and speak to me in my mind, “Devilz, long time no see… How are you? I miss you son.” Devilz was shocked again, “Mother? MOTHER?!” Kelsey said, “Devilz, what are you saying?!” Devilz yelled, “Tiashu, are you my mother?! I can feel it!” Tiashu took off his mask. Rin was surprised, “Sakura-sensei? Aren’t you the medical ninja, Haruno Sakura?!” Devilz suddenly feel so painful, he suddenly remember all the memories with his mother. “Mother, I miss you…” Konan throw a paper shuriken toward Devilz. Kelsey knocked it with her kunai. Kelsey said, “Devilz, you have to concentrate. Our mission is to eliminate Akatsuki and save Sactoro! I know it’s hard for you to fight your mother, but you have to do it…” Devilz made up his mind when the tears stop falling out.

Next Chapter: Team Genin’s Mission-Part 3: Family battle
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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sat Oct 25, 2008 7:35 am

Devillz have it as something like youre fighting and i appear and stop it then other shinobi come after your mother and we buy her enough time to escape?
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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sat Oct 25, 2008 7:57 am

Nice Idea^^ Im planning them to capture her back to Konoha. Razz

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sat Oct 25, 2008 2:22 pm

ooowww a spoiler =D
nice might just do my storyline XD
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---------A wise man once said------------
~~"Death to all Konoha Knights!~~
ALL HAIL THE AKA-KONOHA ALLIANCE"

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sun Nov 02, 2008 6:18 am

I havnt made any jutsu in my story yet. Razz

I saw Aigoro story that, once you wrote a jutsu in the story you'll get to buy it right? I hope it is still working. Razz

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sun Nov 02, 2008 6:22 am

that was Anti's idea... it was a good idea... but I dont think its implemented any more...

now u have to pay for everything...
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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sun Nov 02, 2008 7:11 am

Team Genin’s Mission-Part 3: Family battle

Devilz throw a kunai at Sakura, Sakura easily knock down the kunai and suddenly appears behind Devilz. She whisper, “Release.” She hit Devilz’s right arm with her palm. Devilz hardly move his right arm. “WHAT IS GOING ON?” Devilz yelled. Sakura says, “I cut down your ligament.” And she whispers to herself as she smiled, “In exchange, I will rapidly lose chakra every movement I do.” Konan suddenly appears behind Sakura, “Time is going fast, I’ll have to capture her.” Konan jump from tree to tree and goes toward to east. Kelsey & Rin fallowed Konan as she run away. Devilz tried to stood up but he failed and fallen on the ground. The tears begin to fall out of his eyes. Sakura look at Devilz, “sorry son… I’m… sorry. Leave now, I don’t want to fight you.” Devilz suddenly feel so painful. The black mark on his stomach has glow, Devilz hardly can hardly handle the “power” inside him. Devilz hold tightly to his stomach, “Mother, please help me.” Devilz tears has dropped on the amulet begin to shine. The amulet has overcome the power, Devilz begin to chill… Sakura tears fallen out as she run to Devilz and has her arm wrap around Devilz’s head. "I am sorry; I sealed IT inside you…” Devilz suddenly shocked, his head felt so hurt...

In the other side…

Kelsey said, “I can’t track Konan, did she run toward to the east?” Rin replied, I can feel her chakra flow. She’s still going to east. Where is she going?” Kelsey says, “Hmm… The closest village in here is… Oh my gosh! IT’S STAR VILLAGE! She’s going to capture Bluemoon (aka Siaki Lexi)” Rin asked, “whose Siaki Lexi?” few minutes of silence… “It’s Devilz’s second uncle, Kurowashi Aigoro’s Wife!” Rin asked, “Then who’s first uncle?” Kelsey replied, “Uchiha Satsu… ITS KONAN!” Kelsey notice Konan is in front of them.

Next Chapter: Team Genin’s Mission-Part 4: The two battles
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My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sun Nov 02, 2008 8:24 am

I see. So i have to pay for the jutsu i wrote inside my story if i dont have them.
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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sun Nov 02, 2008 2:29 pm

That seems to be the norm... or be a Premium
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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Nov 03, 2008 12:53 am

Ooh..
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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Mon Nov 10, 2008 5:35 am

Team Genin’s Mission-Part 4: The two battles

Back to Devilz’s battle...

Sakura stop her tears and change her emotion, the anger look. Devilz suddenly unleash the seal, black chakra flowing through Devilz body. Devilz suddenly appears behind Sakura and punched her back. When Sakura fallen down, Devilz smashed her. Unfortunately it was a clone of Sakura! Devilz fallen on the ground as he close his eyes, Sasuke was there. “Come back Sakura… It has been more than 10 years you leave us.” Sasuke asked with a worry expression. Sakura replied, “What you’ll do if I don’t?” Sasuke yelled, “Give up and come back with us! The other shinobi from Konoha are coming after you!” Sakura did the tiger hand signs, “Kai!” Sasuke cover his eyes with his arm when the leaves are surrounded Sakura. *Puff* Sakura disappears. As the back up team come, Sakura has escape… Devilz woke up and realize he is at Konoha’s Hospital. He asked Sasuke what happen during the previous mission to capture Konoha. Sasuke explain the whole thing… “So yeah, your mother has escape. Your team is still trying to capture Konan.” Sasuke said. Devilz was disappointed and say, “I have to catch up with them!” Sasuke stopped Devilz from leaving his bed. “Sorry dad.” Devilz said as he hit the back of Sasuke’s neck. Sasuke was unconscious and he lay on the bed. Devilz escape and run after Kelsey & Rin.

In the other side…

Kelsey used water style jutsu and cut the entire surrounded tree down. The water jutsu stopped Konan from moving around. Konan jumped up and use her paper to form a wing. This allowed her to fly. Konan created thousand of papers creatures and attack Rin & Kelsey. Rin tried to avoid the attack but it was no use. Kelsey water jutsu doesn’t make a scratch on the papers. “Aren’t paper weakness to fire or water?!” Kelsey whispered to herself. Kelsey tried to run to Rin and help him but Kelsey didn’t realize her leg was tied by one of the paper creature. When Konan stopped the paper creatures, Rin & Kelsey was in bad situation. “Say bye-bye Konoha shinobi.” The paper creatures form into one big dragon with a sharp head. The dragon flying toward to Kelsey & Rin…

Will Rin & Kelsey survive?
Will there be someone else sacrifice for them?

Next Chapter: Team Genin’s Mission-Part 5: Life or Death
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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Subject: nice Tue Nov 11, 2008 11:17 pm

Great story!
that is a nice one Devilz-sama
hope to be your apprentice someday bounce

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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Fri Nov 14, 2008 8:10 pm

haha:P
If i can pass the chuunin exam again.
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Subject: Re: Devilz's Story: The Bond, Fate & Destiny Sun Dec 21, 2008 10:31 am

Team Genin’s Mission-Part 5: Life or Death

Previously, Devilz suddenly unleash the seal, black chakra flowing through Devilz body. “Come back Sakura… It has been more than 10 years you leave us.” Sasuke asked with a worry expression. Sakura did the tiger hand signs, “Kai!” Sasuke cover his eyes with his arm when the leaves are surrounded Sakura. *Puff* Sakura disappears. Devilz woke up and realize he is at Konoha’s Hospital. Devilz said as he hit the back of Sasuke’s neck. Sasuke was unconscious and he lay on the bed. The paper creatures form into one big dragon with a sharp head. The dragon flying toward to Kelsey & Rin…

Back to the battle…

The sharp paper dragon pointing to Kelsey’s stomach as it flying toward her. Rin immediately grab out a kunai as he dodge the dragon attack and rescues the unconscious Kelsey. The blood slowly dripping from Rin’s back. Konan whisper, “Only losers will protect their friends.” Rin use his chakra scalpel and cut of the paper creatures. Rin fall on the ground as the blood spread around him. “I must heal my wound right now.” Rin whispered to himself as he coughs out the blood in his mouth. “Final hit, bye Genins.” Konan yelled. Paper creature flying toward to Rin and Kelsey as the sky begin to fade in dark. “DON’T GIVE UP!” Devilz yelled as he summons his giant snake to protect everyone. “Psh. Another Genin from Konoha eh?” Konan whispered. Suddenly Obito has come in time. He drop a scroll at the ground. “Guys, we have to retreat! KAI” *BUFF* Everyone disappears in the scroll as the scroll links back to the summoning ground in Konoha… “Hokage-Sama told you guys to rest this mission have to be stopped right away. Kelsey brings Rin to the hospital, Devilz, ill come pick you up in 3 hours. I have something to show you.” As Kelsey and Rin goes off to the hospital, Devilz goes home… “Sorry Devilz” Obito whispered…

Around 2 hours later…

Devilz lying on his bed to get some sleep. He begins to sweat as his temperature increases, Devilz seems to be suffering from a nightmare… “NO! PLEASE GO AWAY! ARGH!” Devilz scream as he awake from his bed… “Ah… what is going on..?” Devilz walk up to his washroom and wash his face, he looked at the mirror… “W-w-what?! What is going on?” Devilz look at his neck as he yelled, “this mark is from… from.. Orochimaru… BUT IT WAS IN THE DREAM! How come it came true?!” Devilz look at the seal at his neck, and lift his shirt up, He look at the mark at his stomach… “This seems to be the power inside me… But what about the seal on my neck?” Devilz quickly get change and get to the training ground and try out some jutsu, but it didn’t affect his seal on his neck. Devilz return to his home as Obito waiting for him outside, Obito? Sorry I didn’t check the time.” Devilz said. Obito reply, “No problem, I want to tell you something and show you something, fallow me.” Obito looked at Devilz’s neck. “THAT SEALS!” Suddenly an Anbu appears behind Obito, “Obito-san, Hokage wants to see you.” Obito reply, “No problem, Devilz check you out later.” *BUFF* they disappears. Devilz realize Obito knows something about the seal on his neck so he decides to do some action.”

Next Chapter: Chuunin Exam
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-The Uchiha's Vice Leader-
My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.

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