Fang's Awakening

Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:27 pm

Mission Protect the Leaf

I walk towards my new favorite resturant, Fujiwara's Ramen shop. "What do u want kid, I'm busy?" says the ramen man. "Well, I want some miso ramen. Also some Pork and Beef to go" I say. I show him my wallet filled with cash. "Coming right up. Woo, look at all those moneys" he says mesmorized. I take the ramen from him. "You should stand back. This might get ugly." I say to him as he backs away. I start to go to town on the ramen. I finish my Miso ramen in a record 30 sec. I hear a big boom outside and I look up. "Who is that sir?" I ask the ramen man. He takes out a katana. "Those are some Mist ninja. Stand back son. I run home and lock the door. "Where have I seen him before?" I say to myself. "All well, off to bed." I say turning off the light.

I walk to the Academy to see a women crying at the shop. "Why, why did they have to take him?" a women says unclearly. "Whats wrong with her?" I ask her friend. "Otio, he is dead." she says as she bursts into tears. "It must've been those mist ninja" I say. I run to the academy not remembering the time. "Fang, you just made it. Lucky you" says Aigoro.

"Today class I want to teach you this jutsu that only the best can learn That move is called 'Sand Coffin' This move compliments the 'Sand Funeral' but it is a move that locks the person in a sand like coffin. First you do wat you usually do for Sand Funeral, but you imagine the sand forming into a coffin. Thus making your sand become a 'Sand Coffin'. I want.... Fang to try it. Make me proud son" he says. I walk out side with a bag of sand in my hand. I pour the sand on the ground. I motion it towards the practice dummy. (mind) "Concentrate, concentrate" I open my eyes... and the dummy is in the air, with a box thing around it. "Great job Fang. Who's next?" Aigoro says

I walk home with my friends, Kentaarza, Toshimoto, jeremy, and mimotaku. We jump on the rooftops and all around. "MIST NINJA" jeremy says. We run in front of the gates to confront them. "Who are you, and why do you keep coming to Konoha?" I ask. "I am Anti, and this is my crew. He punches me, but I dodge and uppercut him. THE BATTLE BEGINS

Baachi, Kent, Jeremy, Toshimoto, and Mimotaku
VS.
Anti , Haruo, Kisune, Savage S, and Hakio

NEXT CHAPTER: Konoha vs. Mist
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:30 pm

WWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

xD
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:19 pm

Kent vs. Haruo

*Western Music playing* "So, your the famous Kent huh? I heard you are Maria's student. Satsu told me you fancy Maria. (XD sorry kent)." Haruo says. "Yes I am that Kent, yes she is my sensei, and no I don't. You listen to Satsu?" Kent asks her. "Well, I just wanted to make you mad. Hey look, your mad. I want you to try to beat me, so it will be funner killing you" Haruo says. "Ohh, you think you can beat, the Kentster so easily." Kent summons Anko the giant snake. "Ohh, I am not sure. Maybe you can beat, I don't know, a 2 year old." he says on Anko. They get into their stances. BEGIN

Haruo uses Hidden mist jutsu and blinds kent. "Summoning, Crow" she says. You can see a bomb coming at Kent. Too bad he dodged it. He activates his Neo-rinnegan and locates her. "Eye of the Tiger". He gets her off guard with a kunai and paralizes her. "Too bad you only paralized Crow" someone says. Then a bomb of the same sort as before gomes straight at him. He gets hit in the back. He starts to halusinate. "Who are you, and what are you doing in my chocolate factory" he says dazed. She grabs him and punches him. He falls back and starts to bleed. He gets up and lunges at her, he kicks her in the air and then kicks her into a tree.

Kent jumps at Haruo and slaps her. He trips her and throws her into a waterfall. She clears the mist and instantly sees Kent running at her. He jumps over her and stabs a senbon in her tenketsu. She is powerless now. He trips her and before she falls he puts a senbon in her left tenketsu. He wakes up feeling weird. "What just happened? Ohh you," he says coming bakc to reality. He picks her up and throws her backat the tree. He throws some sand on the ground. "I hope this works" he says to himself. He moves all the sand around her and conentrates. He moves his hand up into the air like he was taught to. He opens his eyes and sees that Haruo is in a coffin. He laughs at her. "Bye Bye" he says. He clenches his fist, and it's over.

NEXT CHAPTER: Toshi vs. Savage S
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:24 pm

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO =D

aweeeesome!!!

xD

and i dont fancy maria Sad

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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:30 pm

Yeah, Satsu pays for that in this story XD ! I am on your side.
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:32 pm

HAHAHAHAHA! I PWND YOU KENT! btw, thx for saying it was me saying it. I loved it! Twisted Evil

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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:37 pm

when its my fight I really hope i dont die >,<, are you gonna kill me off Fang? awesome fight btw
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sun Jul 27, 2008 7:58 pm

Toshi vs. Savage S

"I heard that you were from the famous Retsu clan. Is it true?" he asks taking out his kunai. "Ohh it is true. I am the 4th best Retsu that ever lived. I was taught the way of a true shinobi. I went from village to village. I have become the best in this village except the Hokage. I am sad that he left though. I will kill you for my training. You are not enough.." Toshi gets cut off by a kunai. "Shut up and lets fight" he says. Toshi gets into his ninjutsu stance. Savage gets into a Taijutsu stance. BEGIN

Savage uses his Hidden Mist jutsu to blind Toshi. He uses a unusual jutsu. "Water Dragon Jutsu" A dragon made of water comes straight at Toshimoto. The dragon goes through Toshimoto and make him cough out blood. "Rasenchi Renge" Toshi hits Savage with his jutsu making him cough blood. Savage throws a kunai and then uses a very weird jutsu. "Ice Fist". Savage's fists turn into ice. Savage runs towards Toshimoto and punches Toshi in the stomach, he hits him in the face, and throws him into the ramen shop. "What is this thing?" Toshi asks himself.

He then runs at Savage with his senbons in his hands. He grabs Savage and stabs a senbon in one of Savages legs. He throws Savage into the Academy and he breaks through it. Toshimoto can see blood on Savages ice hands. He tries to punch him, but Savage punches him in in the face clearing him out all the way back to the gates. Toshimoto is now bleeding everywhere. He takes out a senbon, and runs at Savage. Savage gets up and starts to run at Toshi with his fists back. They collide, and both fall back. They both try to get up really quick, but they are very injured. Toshimoto knows what to do and uses Rasenchi Renge. He hits Savage in the chest and Savage flys into a tree, but he is then stabbed by a branch. He starts to bleed. He quickly dies after.

NEXT CHAPTER: Mimotaku vs. Hakio
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:07 pm

awwweesome i hope mine is as good
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Tue Jul 29, 2008 8:05 am

Oooh, can I be in a later chapter, possibly?
If so, Kurushii Shouten.
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Mon Aug 04, 2008 8:27 pm

Mimotaku vs. Hakio

Mimo gets into his beast stance. Hakio takes out some needles. "I am the lost soul of Mist, and the student of Haku. I don't need luck to defeat you" says Hakio with a kunai in his mouth. "Save it little boy. I will take u out in one sec" says Mimotaku. He takes out his tomahawk and uses Lypunken on Hakio, but Hakio uses simply his arm to push him away. He throws Mimotaku all the way into the dojo. Hakio uses Suigadan (Water Fang) jutsu, which cuts mimo on the arm. Mimoaku then uses Lightning Thunder Bash on Hakio and hits him into the gates. Hakio gets up and uses a special jutsu, " Crystal Ice Mirrors jutsu". Now there is 30 mirrors around mimotaku showing all images of Hakio. "You underestimated me gardner boy" he says

Hakio dissapears and 5 needles hit Mimotaku. "Who was that?" says Mimo surprised. 5 more needles hit him out of nowhere. "You can't stop me, I am your worst nightmare" Hakio says. "1000 needles jutsu" Hakio yells. 100 needles hit mimo in the back. 300 needles hit mimo in the chest. 500 needles hit mimo in the arms and legs. The last 100 miss. Mimotku starts to cough up blood. "Wh...who a...are y...you" mimo says as he also coughs more blood. "I am the ninja that keeps you up at night. I am Hakio" says Hakio. Then, out of nowhere , one of the mirrors. "Sorry to ruin the fun, but Satsu is here" he says. "S...Satsu" mimotaku says as he falls down

Satsu activates his Neo-Rinnegan. "What is that gonna help you with? I am the best ninja on earth." Hakio says cockyly. "Ohh, you will see dirtbag" Satsu says laughing. "SUIGADAN" Satsu says. A big water form of a fang rushes towards a mirror, and cuts through and Hakio flys out. "How did u know which one I was in?" says Hakio coughing blood. "You shouldn't worry about that, you should worry about how you wanna die" Satsu says. Satsu picks Hakio up and throws him over the Village Gates. Hakio slides out and rips most of his clothes. "This is when the fat lady sings" Satsu says. Satsu runs at Hakio with his Rasenchi. He hits Hakio with his rasengan sending him flying, then he drives Hakio down with the Chidori.

NEXT CHAPTER: Obito vs. Anti
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Mon Aug 04, 2008 8:52 pm

Obito vs. Anti

Obito runs to the gates. He sees mimotaku dying on the floor. "Are you ok? Who did this to you?" I ask him worried. "It.... was.... th....those mist.... ninja. They....got...m" he says, then passes out. "He doesn't look good. The only way though that you'll get to the hospital, is through me." Anti says. "You guys had to come in here, and attack our village. I will KILL YOU!" I say angrily. He gets into his own mist stance while I get in my Ninjutsu stance. "You don't know who your messin' with" I say to him as I take out my katana. THE BATTLE IS ON!

I run at Anti and try to cut his arm. "HIDDEN MIST JUTSU" Anti says as the air fogs up. I look around trying to find him. "SILENT HOMOCIDE TECHNIQUE" I hear and then feel a thud in the back of my back. I fly all the way into the Village forest. I look around and see that my sword was broken in half. I look around again, and see no one in sight. "WATER DRAGON TECHNIQUE" Anti yells as I see a big dragon hits me into a tree. "Woohhh, this guy ain't no joke." I say tired and bloody. I activate my Neo-Rinnegan. I look around and see a outline of someone. "I see you" I say playfully

I run on a tree and use fireball jutsu. I hit him in the back. I jump to another tree. "WATER DRAGON TECHNIQUE" I yell as a big dragon appears out of the air and it hits the figure. I summon Anko and have him wrap around Anti. I go to Anti and use Lightining Thunder Bash on him. Iys goes through Anko and hits Anti. Anti flys off into the distance. I run at Anti and punch him farther away. I gather some sand. I throw it to Anti and have it attach. I move my hand up like Gaara. I concentrate on making a coffin. I open my eyes and see that I did well. I make my eyes look heartless and then clench my fist. The sand explodes Anti and anti becomes a bloody mess. I grab mimo on my back, I get Toshi also and run to the hospital. "DOCTOR, I need treatment on these to" I say rushing. "No problem sir." he says bringing in a bed.

NEXT CHAPTER: MY WEIRD EXAM
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Mon Aug 04, 2008 9:17 pm

My Weird Exam

Ok class, it is time for us to finally do our Genin exams. I want this to go by experience so, I want Kentaarza to go first. Kentaarza walks up to the front of the class with a smirk on his face. "Ok, first I want you to make a correct clone of Naruto. You may begin" Aigoro says. Kent controls all his chakra and gets windy. "Transformation jutsu!" Kent says. Out of the cloud appears.... Naruto. "Nice job, now I want 4 clones of yourself" Aigoro says. Kent gets a bag of chips. He eats half of the bag, then builds up his chakra. "Shadow Clone Jutsu!!" Kent yells. Out of the blue, 4 clones of Kent appear. "Wonderful, now I want you to explode this balloon." Aigoro says. Kent gets the ballon. He puts his hands out over the balloon. The balloon dephorms and then implodes. "Great job Kent, you are now a genin" Aigoro says as he gives him a headband.

"Next to try is.... Toshimoto. Also, great recovery from last night" Aigoro says. Toshimoto goes up to the front. "Transformation Technique". Toshimoto makes a clone of Academy student Naruto. "Nice job, you know whats next" Aigoro says. Toshimoto charges up some chakra and makes some handseals. "Shadow Clone Jutsu" Toshi says. Toshimoto makes 5 clones of himself. "Awesome Toshimoto. Now I want you to do something different. I want you to make a rasengan" Aigoro says. "Sure, watever" Toshimoto says as he gets his hands ready. He holds his wrist with one hand, and focuses chakra with the other. Then, a sphere of chakra apperars above Toshimoto's hand. "Congrats Toshimoto. You pass" Aigoro says as he gives him his headband.

"Now is... ahh Obito. Please come forward" Aigoro says. I walk up there feeling nervous. "I want you to make your chakra flow through this blade here." Aigoro says handing me a blade. I take the blade out of his hand. I control a Lightning Thunder Bash in my hand, and hold on to the blade with it. I look at it and see the blade bursting with chakra. "Nice job, now I want you to activate your Doujutsu" Aigoro says. I go back in my mind and remember seeing my father die. I open my eyes, and I activated the Neo-Rinnegan. "Nice work, now I want you to make a sword, out of this sand here" Aigoro says passing me a bowl of sand. I grab the bowl and break it on the ground. I move my hand over it and visualize a blade. I open my eyes to see that the sand was no longer there, just a ...... blade. "Excellent, you are now a Genin" Aigoro says as he passes me a headband.

NEXT CHAPTER: MY FIRST MISSION
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Tue Aug 05, 2008 9:07 am

awwwww I thought I would kill my enemy, at least i didnt die Razz

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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:49 am

You will get better.
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