Fang's Awakening

Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:05 pm

My First Mission

I walk out of the Academy laughing and destroying. I take off my goggles, and throw them in the air. "I PASSED" I yell. I run to my house, and get my wallet. I run to the place where the ramen shop should be, but remember that it was dstroyed 5 days ago. I go to the dojo and tell the person there. "Master Iruka, I passed the exam. Aren't you proud of me?" I ask him jumping up and down. "That's great Obito, I hope you get a great sensei" he says to me as he passes me something. "What is this" I ask him moving it around. "This is a special katana. It was Sasuke's sword before he was murdered. He gave it to me before he went to try to destroy Akatsuki. I take the sword out of the case. "I want to get used to this. Can you help me out?" I ask him. "I was hoping you would say that" he says as he takes out his katana.

I come back to the Academy like Aigoro sayed. I walk in and see that mimo is back from the hospital. I see that even Toshimoto is happy and healed. I sit in the back wearing my headband. "Ok, I will give all of you a number from 1-7" Aigoro says. "1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7. 1, 2 , 3" Aigoro says as he points to me at 3. "I got 3 too." Joel says as he tries to flex his muscles. "I got 7. I'm not gonna be in the same group as you" Kent says looking depressed. "I got a 5." mimo says looking relieved. I walk out of the Academy seeing big jounins with signs. I look for 5, and walk towards the person. "Hello little kids, I am Nagato, but you wil address me as Dr. Master Nagato" he says throwing the sign away. "I have already set-up a mission. Wewill leave at once" Nagato says throwing us packs full of weapons.

I walk to the gates and take my goggles back to my inventory. I put my goggles on my eyes, and my headband on tight. "This mission is very important. You have to protect this Konoha member from Akatsuki. We might have to face tough people like Kyubi, Kurayami, and maybe even Eki" Nagato says as he takes out a map and pen. "We are gonna come from this side, and get the man in sight. When we see suspicious movement, we drive in. We also will put traps over here to keep them watched. Does everyone know the plan?" Nagato says putting the map away. "Right" Joel says. "Yeah" I say. "Hey, where is our female member?" Nagata asks. Me and Joel shrug our shoulders, then we here something coming from the gates. "I'm here" says a female ninja. "Ahh, Takahada, I'm glad you made it" Nagato says. He tells us the plan again. "Ok, let's go" Nagato says.

NEXT CHAPTER: OBITO.... DIES?
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Tue Aug 05, 2008 6:57 pm

WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Wed Aug 06, 2008 11:06 am

I know. its just like the real Obito and Kakashi, but he might not die.
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Wed Aug 06, 2008 2:27 pm

word up.
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sat Aug 16, 2008 1:33 pm

Obito Dies

We walk into the forest and stay hidden. I activate my Neo-Rinnegan and take my new sword out. I look around for any weird tracks. "Nothin, its too weak" I say as I keep walking. "Let me try" Nagato says. He activates a advanced Neo-Rinnegan and looks around. "I see a trail up by that bridge. Everyone, take out your tags." Nagato says quietly. I take out my explosive tag and set it on the ground behind us so no one will follow us. I walk across the bridge but stop suddenly. "Theres a string right here, it looks like a trap" I say as I back away. "Nice work Obito, I hope we can find this guy before I break a sweat" Nagato says. Satsu jumps over the string as he sets a tag on the rail of the bridge.

"There he is. He can't find out were here, but we need to protect him" Nagato says as he takes out a kunai. I grab my goggles and put them back in my bag. I put a kunai in my mouth and start to quietly follow him. He looks around the trees, but doesn't see us. He takes something out of his bag, and keeps walking. I jump to the other tree so I make less noise. He turns around quickly, and throws the kunai to my tree. "SHOW YOURSELF" he says yelling. I wait a moment noticing someone behind him. I see that its Kyubi, an Akatsuki member. "DUCK" I yell as I throw a bomb kunai at Kyubi. He jumps into the air and runs back. I run after Kyubi, forgetting my whole mission. I get my sword out and start jump on him.

"You foolish little Genin, don't you know who you're up against?" he says tauntingly. "I know who you are, and I don't care. I am gonna protect Leaf ninja no matter the cost. I won't lose" I say. I start to chase him and charge with my sword. I jump into the air, and slice where he was. I look around, and he isn't there anymore. I then feel a kunai hit me in the back. It explodes as it hits me. "AHHHH" I yell as I fly into a tree. I get up slowly, and start making my handsigns. I charge up a sacred ninjutsu. I run at him and charge my hand in front of him. "CHIDORI" I yell as I hit him in the stomach. I see as he flys through the tree. I open my eyes again, and look at him. "Is,, is that the sharingan?" he says as he looks at me again. I try to take out a kunai, but then I fall down. He gets up and takes my sword. He points it at my throat. "Well well genin, you have been revoked" he says. "NOT SO FAST" I hear some people say. I see the people and are relieved. "Hazirami. Anti" I slowly black out.

NEXT CHAPTER: SUPERMAN SAVED ME
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sat Aug 16, 2008 6:49 pm

lol great story just mention me more okay lol!

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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sat Aug 16, 2008 7:31 pm

Superman saves the day

"What do you want? Why are you saving a LEAF ninja? You left there village long ago" Kyubi says as he drops my sword. "I protect all ninja. I came when I saw an Akatsuki coat fly away" Hazi says as he throws a kunai. Kyubi does the matrix as the kunai barely misses. Anti jumps into the air, and kicks Kyubi into the ground. Kyubi, grabs Anti's leg, and throws Anti into a stream. "Hidden Mist jutsu" Anti yells as the air gets very thick and hard to see through. Anti runs at Kyubi, but he trips and falls on his face. Kyubi grabs him by the hair, and punches him into another tree. "Is that all you've got?" Kyubi says as he picks up my sword. "I guess its my turn" Hazi says as he steps up.

Hazi runs at Kyubi with a needle in his hand. He jumps over him, and pokes a needle in his arm. "Silly Hazi, those needles don't work on Akatsuki" Kyubi says as he takes out the needle. Hazi charges a Rasengan in his hand. He charges at Kyubi and hits him in the chest. Kyubi flys away and hits a rock. "Now, its time to finish this" Hazi says making handsigns. "Summoning jutsu: Rinnegan Bodies" Hazi says as a Naruto body comes out of the ground. The Naruto body does shadow clone and the shadow clone charges a rasengan in his hand. Hazi charges a rasengan in his hand also. They both run at the Akatsuki member with anger in their eyes. "RASENGAN" they both say as they hit Kyubi away into the forest.

Hazi wakes me up. "Kid, wake up. Wake up little kid" he says pushing me around. "What happened?" I say as I get up. "Hes gone, your safe little shinobi" he says. I grab my sword and run around. "OH MY GOD, I forgot my mission" I yell as I run into the forest. Anti runs at me and stops me. "Kid, we need you to come with us." Anti says as he gets up. I get back up. Anti and Hazi starts walking North into the forest. "Hey, wait up. Don't forget me" I say as I run after them.

IN THE LEAF VILLAGE

"Status report Nagato" Aigoro says as he looks through the paperwork. "The mission went well. We saved the guy from the Akatsuki, there was just one problem" Nagato says. "What went wrong?" Aigoro says as he stops looking at the papers. "Well, sir. We lost a member. His name, Uchiha Obito." Nagato says. Aigoro looks up at him with dissapointment in his eyes. "I will send a search team to find him. Right now, you need to find another member for your team" Aigoro says as he grabs a letter. "Sir, by lost, we mean..... dead" Nagato says as he looks at Aigoro. Aigoro starts to rub his head. "I knew this was too risky. Sending new genin onto a mission like that. I'll go tell his parents" Nagato says. "He doesn't have any parents Nagato. They died when he was in the Academy" Aigoro says as he leaves the office.

NEXT CHAPTER: LEAFS 2nd INVASION
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sat Aug 23, 2008 7:00 pm

Leafs 2nd Invasion

"So thats how i found you" Hazi says as we are walking through the forest. "But, why would you be looking for a little genin like me?" I ask as I look up at Hazi. "You remind me of someone very close to me. I wish for your legacy to live on" he says as he grabs an apple. "Why did you bring him? He tried to kill my friends. He is the last one I expect to be here" I say glaring at Anti with hate. "Well, I wanted to change my ways. I was gonna walk over on a mission, but I saw you fall to the ground. Hazi and I just happened to be here at the same time" Anti says as he looks into the sky. "So, where are we going you two" I ask them looking naive. "We're going to the very hidden, Star Village" they say as we look at a big village that is locked in.

"I dont know why we were sent here. We despise Konoha, but we're freakin Genin" Siara says as he plays with his sand. "We were sent on orders from the Sandaime Kage. We must follow his orders" Thor says as he grabs his sand box. "Well, I didnt think I would be here, but I am ready to whoop some leaf ninja butt" Lurka says as he smashes his hands together. "Now guys, we were sent to destroy Konoha, anyone that gets in our way will be crushed. Can you genin take that?" Thor says as he looks at them with a fire in his eyes. "Sir yes sir" they all say in a militry position. "Well get ready now boys. We are about 5m away from them. I want you guys to jump into the trees and hide from the anbu. Got it?" Thor says to them as he points it out. "Got it!" they say as they jump up camoflauging into the scenery.

As they get closer, the Anbu start to notice. Thor looks at the anbu, laughs, and throws a kunai at him. The Anbu dodges it, but doesnt know its a trap. Thor locks him in a sand box, then implodes the box. Some more Anbu come to help him, but they are stopped as the genin tighten their legs into the ground with sand. Thor takes out a bomb kunai, and throws it at the first ninja. They explode and they all die. Thor, Siara, Lurka, Marista, and Naara walk into Konoha with a vengeance in their eyes. Thor walks through the gates, and starts to go on a killing rampage. He sees a villager, and suffocates him with his sand. Naara uses Sand clone, and the Sand clone explodes in front of an academy student. All of the ranks of Konoha come in front of the sand ninja trying to stop them. "You can't stop me, we are the elite sand ninja of the sand village." Thor says as he stands in front of them.

Next Chapter: Gone too long
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Fri Aug 29, 2008 10:38 am

Interesting... But I can kick their ass!!!!!
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Fri Aug 29, 2008 10:51 am

Just you wait Satsu. these people might be the demise of Konoha themselves. dont they really look like Sand ninja, when they are actually.....
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Fri Aug 29, 2008 4:41 pm

x3

tingly!
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Sat Sep 13, 2008 11:00 am

Gone too long

As the breeze passes through the Konoha gates, a big shoe steps in the hidden village. I walk into the village with my sword, goggles, and my new self. "Oh my god, is that Obito? OBITO" yells a 16 year old Satsu. "Yes it is me. I have been gone 2 years, and now I am back. So where is Kent?" I says as he puts his Konoha headband back on. "Umm, Kent joined Akatsuki" Satsu says slowly "... He left Konoha for Akatsuki?" I says astonished. "No, he is in Akatsuki, but he didn't go anywhere" Satsu says pointing at a person with a red cloak. "Kent?" I say yelling at the person. "Obito? Oh my god! Obito, your alive" Kent says running towards me. "You... joined... Akatsuki?" I somehow let out. "Yes I did, but nothing will have to change." Kent says. "Wait, if your in Akatsuki, why are you here" I ask. "The thing is, the Hokage signed an alliance with Akatsuki" Kent says.

"Say what now? Why did Aigoro ally with Akatsuki?" I ask. "Thats another thing. Aigoro isn't the Hokage. You guys have a new Hokage. Her name is Uchiha Siara" Kent says. "Why is their a new Hokage? Who is this Siara you speak of? Why was she picked as Hokage? And why am I just hearing this know?" I ask with fury in my eyes almost activating my sharingan. "She is a Chunin from Konoha. Aigoro stepped down 1 year after your supposed death. She won a tournement in Konoha that chose the Hokage. Whoever you were with must've not told you." Kent says "I was with Hazirami, the former Hokage" I say raising an eyebrow. "Maybe it was for your own good" Kent says.

A familiar women walks by me. "Miyuki?" I say. She turns around, then covers her mouth with her hands. "Obito, your not dead. We've missed you so so much" she says as she hugs me. "I missed you guys too. What do you guys think happened to me?" I ask, "Well, when we saw that Nagato, Satsu and Zero didnt walk in with you, we were suspicious. When Nagato told Aigoro that you died during the mission, everyone heard it soon and thought you died" she explains. "Ive missed to much. Gone too long. Now its time for me to make my mark again." I say as I walk back to my house.

Next Chapter: Chunin exams
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:36 am

i likes it Razz

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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Mon Sep 15, 2008 3:13 pm

Its way 2 cool fo school, or anything but here.
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