Garnurk Admin/God Of Darkness/Marth


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 | Subject: Personal Story Line Template Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:34 pm | |
| Name of your story:(if a story does not have a title, its not going to lack any, I am going to say this is Optional) Does it change your Character in any way?:(Yes or No) What is the length of your story?:Short, Epic or in between) Does it have any admins as characters in it?:(Yes or No) Does it have any people from this forum in it?:(Yes or No)
Now, this story could updated and improve your character, or it could just be your characters history. It will however show us, how they are, and what they do. When improving your character, I do not believe in paying for things. I think if you write a well written story, you should get these changes in small amounts. Such as if you want a level up, you could have it, but the story better be good ^^
Good Luck on the story, and do your best!
Now, for introducing characters. Do NOT do what Anti had posted with the characters name and then these:. Its a horrbile way to write, anything. I suggest using the characters name, in your story such as this.
Marth walked slowly into the room, and saw a woman. He glided over to her and stood there for a single moment and looked over to her. "Hello, how are you on this fine day?" The girl did not say anything back. Marth looked away and opened his mouth again. "I am Marth, may I ask whom you might be" She then looked over to him and nodded. "I am Sara" Sara then blushed and walked to a group of people, that she seemed to know.
This is only an example, of what you could do. I do not want to see this either.
I walked slowly into the room.
Yes we know its you, but using your characters name is so much more enjoyable, and it adds to the story. They only time I want to see I, is if you are talking in the story, for example.
"I like that, also."
Sadly, you must wait to write your story, until an Admin approves of it, that I cannot change. |
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 | Subject: Re: Personal Story Line Template Thu Dec 25, 2008 5:40 am | |
| YAY! Rules changed! _________________ -The Uchiha's Vice Leader- My aim is to be the Hokage, And this is My Way Of Ninja.
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