Fang's Awakening

Subject: Fang's Awakening Wed Jul 16, 2008 11:18 am

Name of your story: Fang's Awakening
Does it change ur charecter in any way?: yes
Is it very short or epic size or in the Middle?: Long or maybe middle
Does it have any admins as charecters in it?: yes
does it have any people from this forum in it?: yes
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Wed Jul 16, 2008 11:20 am

~approved~

you may now begin to start your story.
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Holding you up,
When you are weak,
Helping you find what it is you seek.

Catching your tears,
When you cry.
Pulling you through when the tide is high.

Just being there,
Through thick and thin,
All just to say, you are my friend.
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Wed Jul 16, 2008 12:18 pm

Cool story Fang! Uh? What? You didn't even begin? Ah men!
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Wed Jul 16, 2008 1:05 pm

Fang's Awakeining

"You will do this again until u get it right, Fang" said Fang's father. "Father, I can't summon Anko, it is too high level" I say. "I want you to summon Anko" he says again angrily. "I can't, I am to young. Why can't do u want me to learn so bad?" I say. "I cannot tell u until I come back. I have to go on a mission now, stay here unless someone is hurt" he says. "Dad, I luv y...." "Love is for the weak son, remember that" he says as he leaves.

I then go to the one and only Konoha ninja academy after he leaves. "Hey, my name is Kentaarza, I am a born from the retsu" he says. "Hi, I'm also am a retsu member" I say to him. "Hey, I'm Joel" another student says. " Hi my name is Baachi Fang". " Hi, I'm devilz, an Uchiha member" another shinobi says. I was happy that first day of the Academy. "You see that guy over there, his name is Towashin, and thats...." kent was cut off "Hello students, my name is Aigoro Kurowashi, and I will teach u students about being a shinobi. The bathroom is to your left and the exit is behind u. Any questions?" I say, "Can i use the bathroom, Master Aigoro?" "Sure Baachi" he says.

After I come back I see nobody in the classroom. Then I go outside and see everybody out there. I run out trying to be hasty. "Now, today we will learn fireball jutsu. Anybody want to volunteer?" Aigoro says. A girl I know named bluemoon raises her hand "Pick me." "Ahh. Please come forward bluemoon" says Aigoro. She walks up to Aigoro looking pretty excited. "Now, Begin" She makes various handsigns, she huffs in air, and then blows out fire. "Well done bluemoon. You may now sit down" Aigoro says looking impressed. "Now... Fang u try." I walk up to Aigoro feeling very nervous. Then I remember the seeing my dad do it. I make my handsigns, huff in air, and blow out a huge fireball. "Great job Fang, u must be a fire element"

I come home and see a note that says "Meet me in the forest. From Anoynoumous." I walk to the forest to see my dad is fighting 5 bandits from the sand village. "Son, ... help ... me." my father says. I then use my newly found move "Fireball jutsu" and kill off one of them. Soon after though I see my father get up and use his rasengan on one of the bandits. "Son... use.. rasen..uhh" I see a sword come through his chest. Then I see him fall down in front of me. "Son.. release the inner beast, release it. Then, he coughs blood, and dies. I get really mad and get use moves I never knew I could use. "Art of Summoning, Anko, the giant snake". Then, A big toad comes from under me. "Wow, Anko the giant snake. Your finally hear. Ok now I need u to Jump and punch the ground". "SURE SON!!!" He jumps up and punches the ground. He hits them all the way back to the Sand village. "Thank u Gamakichi".

I come home to no one at home, and just a plate of ramen on the table. I then go into the village academy and tell Aigoro wat happened. "Are u serious Baachi?" he says in shock. "Yeah, I saw it with my own eyes. I have no one at home anymore" I say stuturing. "Well,.. Do u want some ramen? I will pay." he says. "Sure Aigoro!" I say happily. "This will be the beggining, of a new era Fang. just watch."

The End of the beggining,

Buy: Anko for 50,000 ryo
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When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed
Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest

Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Wed Jul 16, 2008 1:19 pm

nice story im i in tha next part
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Wed Jul 16, 2008 1:27 pm

yes u are, a lot of people.
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When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed
Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest

Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Wed Jul 16, 2008 6:10 pm

ooh thanks for mentioning me Very Happy

and gamakichi isnt the big toad fyi..that gamabunta...

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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Thu Jul 17, 2008 8:25 am

The New Jutsu

As I walk home, I notice the Hokage stone faces. I see the most memorable Hokages up their. Sarutobi,Yondaime, Tsunade, Naruto, Aigoro, and Yume. I then notice someone painting on Naruto's stone face. "Hey, who are you?" I ask the student. "I'm,... your worst nightmare" He then get's into a unknown stance. "If you want to fight, you will be the one..." Before I finish, he starts to punch me, and they really hurt. He then uses a unknown move, but he calls it Dynamic Entry. All these jutsus were new to me. I fall back feeling pain everywhere. I notice one thing about his moves though, he isn't using ninjutsu. I then activate my Neo-rinnegan and try to copy his moves. "You can't copy these moves, they are too quick" I instantly understand his moves, I notice that he is only a Taijutsu user. I use my first jutsu Fireball technique. He gets hit squarely. He looks injured, and still gets away. "You haven't seen the last of me" he says.

I walk home feeling sore everywhere. "I'm home, oh wait. No one is here." I remember my mom left us at my birth. Well, that's what my dad said. I put my stuff away and go to my bed. I then go to sleep. I dream of that fight, and I then discover that my moves are obsolete. I see again that one of his moves is a special taijutsu that is forbidden.

I go to the academy the next day feeling worse than ever. I see everyone from the last day. Even some new people. "Hey, I'm Baachi" I say. "I'm Teen, he is mimotaku, and that's Joel. I think you know each other." "Yeah we met yesterday" I say. "Ok students, please stand up, we will learn a new jutsu today. It is called 'Desert Funeral'. Some may learn it, some may not. I will show you on this dummy" says Aigoro. He takes out some sand, and throws it on the ground. He moves his hand, and so the sand moves. He makes it wrap around the dummy, he flows his hand up as the sand enduced dummy goes up. He then clenches his hand instantly, so the sand explodes and so does the dummy. "The first to do this technique will be... Kentaarza. Kent, come on up" he says. "Alright, it's time for me to shine" He shows up quickly, and throws the sand on the ground. He makes it spell "Kentaarza". He makes it float up, then sideways, and attaches it to the dummy. He makes it float up, then he blows it up. "Nice kent. How about you Baachi?" says Aigoro proudly. I put the sand on the ground, and sway it left. I send it towards the dummy and knock it down. I finally get it on the dummy, and raise it high. I blow it up but it is too close to me. I get hit by some sand and fall back. "You need to control your anger son".

"Control my anger. How can I do that? My father died in front of me." I say to Devilz. "Hey, if I were you I would listen. Aigoro would know about this." Devilz says "So, it's you again" says a familiar voice. "What are you, a stalker?" I say getting into a ninjutsu stance. "I will finish you, who ever you are" I say throwing sand on the ground. I move the sand to his feet. I picke him up, and explode his feet off. "How's that for a fight?" I say.[/i]
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When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed
Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest

Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Thu Jul 17, 2008 10:11 am

aww my name was only mentioned, I thought I was gonna be a character, but whatever thanks for the recognition ^-^
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Thu Jul 17, 2008 10:17 am

soon Anti. in battles and stuff. also u will all be main
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When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed
Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest

Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:59 pm

go read my story its call T.O.P
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Wed Jul 23, 2008 8:27 pm

Forgive and Forget

I walk home from the ramen store. *I love miso ramen. It just fills me up* I say to myself. I come home and see a kunai on my table. I am 12 and alone, with my shinobi skills to keep me alive. I take out a grass dummy and put it in the back yard. I dropkick it to the ground and use fireball jutsu to burn it up. I come back in feeling very depressed. I go inside and see a picture of me and my mom, with kunai in our mouth. "Ahh mom, I wish you were still here" I say looking at the picture happily

FLASHBACK

I run into the house and run in my moms arms. "Mommy, mommy. Look what I can do?" I say to her hyperly. I take out a kunai and throw it at a tree. "Thats great Baachi, I want to show you something." she says to me taking out 5 shuriken. She jumps into the air and onto the tree. She flips in the air and falls down in front of me. She opens her hands, and nothing was there. I look at the ground, and see 5 shuriken alligned like a heart. "I love you son" she says. "I love you to mom" I say. I hug her ver lovingly.

"Son, we need to go to the funeral today. It's one of my friends funerals, and I want you to come." she says. "Ok, what is his name anyway?" I ask her puppy-doggy. "His name is Kakashi, and he was my sensei. Now lets get ready" she says. I put on my black suit, and put on a clip-on tie. My mom puts on a black dress and a black hat. We go to the memorial stone very early. We see the Hokage Hazi there. "Hi Hazi. It's me, Fujiwara" my mom says. "Ahh Fujiwara. You are a true shinobi. Aren't you going on a mission later?" he says. She covers my ears. "Yeah, but don't tell Baachi here. Only my husband knows, but he wont be here until tonight." she says quietly. "Here lies Kakashi, the body of a true Anbu." the priest says. I over hear Hazi saying after the funeral "I can't do this Maria, I have to go. Sorry Maria, but I can't be Hokage anymore." he says depressed. "Mommy, why does Hokage Hazi say he won't be Hokage" I say. "We need to leave son" she says rushingly.

"Ok son, I have too leave now. If I don't come home, then that means I am winning." she says as she hugs me. "Ok mommy, I love you" I say sadly. "Love you too Baachi" she says. She walks out of the house taking her Anbu mask with her. I walk to the academy to just watch through the window of the teacher. I go to the Ramen store and get some miso ramen. I go to the top of the village gates. I come home to see my dad in a chair. "Where were you son, I was worried sick." he says angrily " I was just playing outside. Wy daddy? Why isn't mommy home?" I ask him with puppy dog eyes. "Sorry son, but she died. She left a note for you though" he says passing me a letter. I read the letter and it says " If you are reading this, then I am either dead or captured. I would love to come home and teach you more of what I know, but I can't come home for a while. Be nice to your dad. Love, Fujiwara." I look up from the letter. "Mmm...Mom is de....ad?" I ask him.
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When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed
Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest

Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Thu Jul 24, 2008 6:33 am

Let me guess, she went to capture me back to Konoha, and I ended up killing her. I guess I'll have to implement this into my story. XD
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Subject: Re: Fang's Awakening Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:03 pm

lol, yes, thats what happened. Wat would happen to me though?

Sad

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When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed
Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest