karon's story

Subject: karon's story Mon Jun 16, 2008 2:00 pm

THIS IS THE STORY I HAD IN MY HEAD SINCE I WAS A KID:TELL ME WHAT U THINK
Chapter 1: The Begining

The wind was calm in the Kingdom of Akari. There lived a prince named William who was the best fighter in his Kingdom. William had a friend named Kurai who was the prince of Makai. One day a girl came in the picture, Princess Diana.. she came to meet the 2 princes. Diana became friends with William and Kuri, but William fell for Diana and confessed her. Little did William know that Kurai also fell in love with Diana and is willing to do anything to get her. That night Kurai kiddnapped the Princess and takes her to his country of Makai and tryed to tell her she loved her but she loved William, so he said to her" IF THERE IS NO WILLIAM,U WILL MARRIE ME!!!!!!!." Kurai leaves with a spell book and trys to kill William. William saw threw his plan and cast a spell to send Kurai to the Dark relam and saved Diana.

1 Year Later.......

William and Diana got married and hade a daughter named Karon.
Diana and william looked at her with dillightness in there heart and showed her to the whole kingdom.The kigdom was so happy they had a child that they sent them gifts of jo and happyness.

Little did William Know tha Kurai escaoed the Drak Relam and coming to have his revenge on him and Diana........

TO BE CONTINUED.........
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Subject: Re: karon's story Mon Jun 16, 2008 2:59 pm

on karon 2nd birthday she was given the power to purify darkness so no one can put Akari in to darkness.
At the same time Kurai invaded Akari and order his soldiers to capture the queen and the child. william was shoked what just happened so he took out his sword and tryed to fight them off.

Diana saw the soldiers and started to run to the church for sanchuary, but one on the soldiers accdently killed her by mistake thinking she was a cominer. William saw that and was furius and started to fight the soldiers off until he got there where his beloved lyed dead. William see karon and picks her up and strarts to scream. he ran into the church were his advisore Arkum was waiting for him.

"Arkum please take my daughter and take her far away form this place so no one can hert her!"

Arkum"Ur highness i cann leave with out u!"

William" i said go!" "There is no way i will be able to escape alive so plaease just take her and protect her with ur life!"
" Your a dragon for God sake!"

Arkum leaves with karon on a hourse"Good bye my king, mah god be with u and ur queen."

Arkum was almost of site when Kurai appeared in forn of him demaning where Diana is and the baby.

Arkum sreams" U BASTERED UR MEN KILLED DIANA AND THERE IS NO WAY I AM GIVING THE PRINCESS TO U!"

Arkum said a magic spell and transported Karon and Arkum to earth

TO BE CONTINUED.......
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Shinobi Joined : 25 Jun 2008 Posts : 1

that is awsome i like da storyline

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omg what will happen next???

Subject: Re: karon's story Fri Jun 27, 2008 12:47 am

Birds chirp

karon yowns when she gets up from here bed

Karon: "what a strange dream." " I wonder what it means???"

Arkum:"KARON GET OUT FROM YOUR BED OR YOUR GOING TO BE LATE FOR SCHOOL!"

Karon: "uncle Arkum im coming, im coming. Just hold your horses."

karon giggles a little

Arkum: "Stop fulling around and get ready for school karon."

Karon: " yes uncle." *karon smiles*

karons getting ready for school and runs out with her lunch casue she took to long

karon: i cant belive im going to be 17 tomarrow!"

karon jumps around happy

school bell rings

karon: o my gosh, im going to ber late

karon runs

karon late for class

Teacher: "Mrs. Rosewater late again. stay after school and clean the class room again."

karon: "Yes Mrs.Ericsson."

karon looks stubbern

karon "I cant belive i got detention." "how am i going to tell uncle again.???
to be continued....lol
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Subject: Re: karon's story Sun Jun 29, 2008 2:54 am

so what do u guys think???
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Subject: Re: karon's story Sun Jun 29, 2008 3:07 am

its good

maybe a little too girly for me tho

still good story tho

i like the starting

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it's pretty good ,i like it two thumbs up

Subject: Re: karon's story Mon Jun 30, 2008 1:04 pm

BELL RINGS FOR DETENTION

karon walks in to detention and wait till they call her uncle

phone rings calling Arkum

phone picks up

Mrs.Ericsson : "Hello this is Mrs. Ericsson." "Is this karons uncle???"

Arkum in a deep gental voice : "Yes this is him, may i ask who is speaking???"

Mrs. Ericsson : "Mr. Arkum, Ur niece has been tardy again for the 10 time this week and i wont u to take ur time talking to her about getting here on time."

Arkum : "Mrs. Ericsson, i will inform u i will give her a punishment that will suit her fine when she gets home."

phone hangs up

Mrs. Ericsson : "Yout uncle is waiting for u at home karon."

Karon gets up an leave the school

Karon : "I cant belived she called him." "He going to yell at me when i get home"

karon crys a little

then she gets home

Arkum is waiting in the kitchen

karon walks in

Arkum : "So karon what did you do at school today???" "I got a call from Your teacher tellign me you were late again.

Karon : "Im srry uncle i just didt make it on time."

Arkum looks at her looking disapointed

Arkum : " Your punishment is to clean the whole house and including the laundry,even mine."

karon looks at him

Karon : "You got to be kidding."

karon looks at the mess and starts cleaning

TO BE CONTINUED.........
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Subject: Re: karon's story Mon Jun 30, 2008 3:34 pm

Good story four thumbs up.

Subject: Re: karon's story Tue Jul 01, 2008 3:31 am

hehe cool

very girl-fantasy type of story (:

but still good sis!
Razz

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*bark bark*

Subject: Re: karon's story Wed Jul 02, 2008 12:59 am

when night hit karon went to her room and layed on her bed

karon : what a day

karon turns out the light in her room and gose to sleep

while karon was asleep arkum felt a strange ora coming to his house

arkum gets up and says a spell to find out who the dark energy is

Arkum : dominosquarenean

Arkums face turned black when he remebder the energy from his world and puts a barrier up

Arkum : Kurai, you will never seat foot in this house you monster!!!

the guy comes out of hte shadows

man in shadows :I am not kurai u traitor. I am his sun and when that girl turns 17 she is goin g to be my bride and there isent anythignu can do about it!*evil laugh*

Arkum : lumious

arkum repeals the man in the shadows and puts a barrier around the house

the clock hand hit 12am and the man disapeared but he said in a whisper
I WILL GET HER GAURDIAN AND SHE WILL BE MINE*EVIL LAUGH

karon necklas that she was wearing glows and and a barrier appers around her

arkum runs up stairs and was relived that the necklas that her father gave him to give to her when the time is right is working

arkum sighs

and gose to bed tired

TO BE CONTINUED
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i like it

Subject: Re: karon's story Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:43 pm

i like your story alot karon-chan. i cant wait to see what happens next.