Kentaarza's story

Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sat May 24, 2008 9:59 am

thanks man =)
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sat May 24, 2008 10:08 am

hey wanna be comrades?

My name is zaniki zaraki If you need a parter to back you up...I got u....

Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sat May 24, 2008 10:15 am

and i got your back to Wink

my names Kentaarza Retsu
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sat May 24, 2008 3:48 pm

Kool story!

Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sat May 24, 2008 3:50 pm

Thanks!

and nice piccie Razz

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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Mon May 26, 2008 1:15 pm

======== FEAR ========

As the boy sat down in front of Gan..wondering what he would have to do he thought in his head about all whats recently happend.."in the past week ive seen people die..in horrific ways..i've met so many new people..i can't controle this..its to much for me.."

"Haha young boy..don't give up yet.." said Gan
"HUH?? how did you hear that???" said the boy in a shocked way Surprised

"That doesn't matter right now...you have a chance to start all over again...not many people have that privalige..now step up here..lets see what your made of!"

*The boy steps up to the front of the room and says*.."ok now what do i do sensei?"

"Ok...i want you to focus up all your chakra the best you can!"

The boy looks up and nods..."ok ill try.."

The boy put his hands together and started to focus up his chakra..in a matter of seconds bits of bright blue chakra suddenly become visible around his hands and feet..Gan said.."Ok boy thats enough..you can stop".."NO! it need more!.." the boy sharply said back!

Huge amounts of chakra then started pouring out and flew around the room smashing into the tables and chairs..The chakra started lashing out at the walls creating cracks

The walls then started to collapse..and Gan shouted..."STOP BEFORE YOU KILL US ALL!"

More chakra came pouring out..the door suddenly opend and a big flash beamed out..

three days later..

The boy woke up..his vision was all blurry again.."what..what happend?" the boy said quietly..

"Heh..seems your alot more powerfull then any of us thought.." said some strange man.

"YOU!! you're..you're the man who saved me...and again?"

"Well..yes..it seems you have a knack for getting in trouble hey?" said the man.

"My name is Hazirami and i am the shodaime hokage..I am also the current leader of the Retsu clan.." said the man proudly

"Retsu?...wait did you say hokage?!" said kentaarza all confused.

"Retsu is a bloodline..which you my friend are a member of..."

"how...how do you know this..?" said the boy whilst thinking to himself.."retsu!?!"

"your eyes...my eyes...dont they look familiar?...that scar on your left butcheek..." he said with a blushy face.

"Umm...i got no scare on my butt..." kent says whilst grinning

"OH..dam..i gotta get that checked out.." said hazi as he stands up..

"Young boy..stay were you are..i will come back shortly..we can talk about this little mishap of yours earlier.."..

*Maria walks into the room*

"heyyy..how's it going..i heard about your little accident..you've frightend even more villagers now heh! but dont worry...everything will be fine!..gan told me about the amount of chakra you used...your body must be in great pain.." she said as she sits beside him

"no..im fine..honestly..i..i really didnt mean to hurt or upset anyone..i really didnt..i was just doing what master gan said..ive ruined it all havnt i?" he said whilst twiddiling his thumbs

"this always happens! i cant get anything right..!!!!"

"calm down..hey...tomorrow..ill get lord hazirami to help you ok? seeing as he is from..your same bloodline...how about it?" maria asked

"ok..ill give it ago!"..the boy replied whilst smiling

[ill add more later lol]
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Mon May 26, 2008 2:24 pm

Why would I talk about your buttcheek? I'm not that perverted...
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Mon May 26, 2008 6:16 pm

idk..

you got a scare on your buttcheek.

so you thought it was hereditary Razz

[4got how to spell it]

lol
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Mon May 26, 2008 6:30 pm

Hazirami sat on a knife....
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Tue May 27, 2008 3:50 am

lol

a knife that maria accidently on purpose but accidently puton his chair..
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Tue May 27, 2008 4:27 pm

Kent when u gonna have me in ur story i wanna be in Sad

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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Fri Jun 06, 2008 3:06 pm

======= FAMILY =======

*The next day*

In the early hours of the morning the boy leaps out of bed and runs into the kitchen area and makes himself a HEEEUGGE breakfast and gulps it all down..in a quick rush he then runs and gets on some clothes and awaits lord hazirami's arrival..

As the boy sits on his chair and hears a creak he turns a round and pulls out a kunai.

"who goes there!" he shouts.

"Ohhh put that thing away boy you could poke somebody's eye out" said a voice coming from the corner of the room..

"lord Hazirami is that you?" the boy slowly utterd Surprised

"Hm..i i must be losing my touch..im not as good at hiding as i was once.." hazi said as he walked into the light.

Boy follow me were going to meet a few people..and we'll finally discover who you really are..

*too tired to add rest atm...sorry lol*
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sun Jul 06, 2008 7:20 am

Heres the long awaited part lol..

======= TRUTH =======

As Hazirami and Kentaarza walked through the village of Mori, Kentaarza heard loads of the villagers speaking to each other "What lord hokage doing with such a miscreant like HIM!"
*Kent looks up at Hazirami*
"Why do people hate me so sir?"
"They don't hate you young one...there just...afraid right now...word got out quick what happend with you and Gan..and well..you've got to see this from there point of view..what would you think if a stranger came to your village and shown mass amounts of power?" Hazi said as he smirked.

"Oh well..i guess your right, ill prove myself to them!" *Kent smiles to himself*

"OK! were here" Hazirami shouted!
"....theres nothing but...tree's...." Kentaarza said with a confused look.

*Hazirami slowly lifted his arms and clapped*

The tree's suddenly formed an opening and Hazi began to walk,

"You coming young boy?"

"yy..yes!!.." Kent said while stuttering from amazement.

"This is the secret hidden Retsu base! The hardest place in Mori to find, only high ranking Retsu members no how to get here"

"All you did is clap.." replied Kent.

*Hazi takes a deep breath then begins to talk..*
"Nu uh!..To make the tree's form the correct passageway you must activate your neo-rinnengan and clap in a certain way, it may look normal to the human eye but...with out ability to see veins and pressure points in ourselves and others we put mass amounts of power into a certain area which opens the passage...im not sure how it works..but it does...thats all you need to know right now.."

"So...hows coming here supposed to make me remember who or what i am?"

"Well..your a human..a superior one at that...not only because you have the neo-rinnengan but because you are the only ones to have survived an attack from the 3 most deadly akatsuki members...KaiRai Eki..the leader...Kurayami...the most deadly assassin known..and Kyubi...a...well...know one knows what he is for sure.."...*Hazi stared into the distance...*
"Boy if i didn't come when i did..you wouldn't be alive right now.."

"I know, and thats why i am forever in your debt!" Kent said fastly.

"Ok follow me boy..." Hazi said as he walked towards a big well type thing.

OOC: I'll finish later lol.

Yume if you read this story the reason i didn't put you as one of the deadliest Akatsuki members is because at this stage of the story your still a Konoha ninja, and soon become Hokage..but then leave for Akatsuki..kay?

lol.
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sun Jul 06, 2008 8:43 am

cool story
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sun Jul 06, 2008 9:17 am

put me in your story kent
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