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Retsu Kenty Admin/Hazi's Homeboy/Retsu 2nd in Command


   Age : 17 Joined : 28 Mar 2008 Posts : 3056 Village : Akatsuki Married To: : Siara? =3 Bloodline : Retsu Clan (Neo-Rinnengan) Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sun Jul 06, 2008 9:36 am | |
| Thanks guys,
This part of my story is when im young these next people will be introduced to my story soon,
Karon Towashin Yume Kurayami [she will be mentioned but not like there in person ] Eki [same as ^] Bao
maybe some more also. _________________ The official post/quote of the week™
| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^ I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea 
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Fire Princess SpamNobi


   Age : 18 Joined : 21 Mar 2008 Posts : 757 Bloodline : Inukuka Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sun Jul 06, 2008 12:04 pm | |
| yayaya i am coming in next.lol _________________
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Retsu Kenty Admin/Hazi's Homeboy/Retsu 2nd in Command


   Age : 17 Joined : 28 Mar 2008 Posts : 3056 Village : Akatsuki Married To: : Siara? =3 Bloodline : Retsu Clan (Neo-Rinnengan) Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sat Jul 12, 2008 2:49 pm | |
| ======= INVASION! =======
Ok lets find out who your father and mother are,
*5 minutes later...*
H....how..can this be?? Hazirami thinks to himself..
"Wa?..what is it sir?" kent said softly..
"You..your the son of B..."
KABOOM!!!!
"Holy macrel what was that!!!" Said somebody in the hideout,
"I can hear screaming coming from the distance sir!"
"Damn..i didn't think he would attack so soon..." hazi said quielty to himself.. "Ok kentaarza time to proove yourself! come with me, you two come also i know what to do!" Hazi shouted out as he began to head towards an exit from the hideout.
*As the 4 nin left the hideout there was a small group of ninja some of them slightly wounded, one stepped forward..*
"Karon? what happend!" hazi asked.
"We...we was attacked, nobody is alive down there! we had to flee! there's nothing we could do, dont worry they wont find us here i cast a genjutsu to hide our location" The young girl replied.
"Ahh you must be Kentaarza, ive heard alot about you..im.." the girl said.
"No time for introductions we need to evacuate all the wounded and and figure out whats going on here" kent interupptedly said.
"Heh..already he's bossing us about, but none the less we must evacuate the wounded, Towashin take the wounded into the hideout and lock the exit" Hazi slowly said.
"Yes sir!" *The wounded ninja slowly got up and headed into the hideout..*
"Guys..prepare yourselves..judging from the sudden swarm of mist..were under attack by the mist village...and it looks like a big attack...so be carefull,"
*Hazirami activates his neo-rinnengan and charges into the mist, sudden shouts and beams are seen from the mist..*
*Ill edit the rest later lol all cba to do atm.* _________________ The official post/quote of the week™
| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^ I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea 
Uhh...you never heard that  |
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Fire Princess SpamNobi


   Age : 18 Joined : 21 Mar 2008 Posts : 757 Bloodline : Inukuka Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sat Jul 12, 2008 2:52 pm | |
| its making me wait more
why do u make i so exiting to make me wait  _________________
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Hyu-zu Yoshi Eki's Apprentice


   Age : 16 Joined : 17 May 2008 Posts : 1222 Village : don't have one Married To: : no one Bloodline : Hyu-zu Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sat Jul 12, 2008 9:48 pm | |
| come on the wounded they can bid for themselves i don't care about them j/k _________________
 I HAVE A LONG NAME zachary evan minalsilo eucudar delerosa sina derpree |
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:46 pm | |
| | im not in it XD |
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Uchiha Satsu SpamNobi


   Age : 13 Joined : 18 Mar 2008 Posts : 1030 Village : Star Married To: : Engaged to Siaki Texi Bloodline : Uchiha Clan Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Thu Jul 17, 2008 4:20 pm | |
| I'm not going to be in your story???? BUAAAAAAAA. YOUR BAD!!!
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Retsu Kenty Admin/Hazi's Homeboy/Retsu 2nd in Command


   Age : 17 Joined : 28 Mar 2008 Posts : 3056 Village : Akatsuki Married To: : Siara? =3 Bloodline : Retsu Clan (Neo-Rinnengan) Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Thu Jul 17, 2008 7:25 pm | |
| Anti; soon you shall be revealed [an evil mannn] Satsu you have a vital role in my story soon Towashin you become evil and help anti xD _________________ The official post/quote of the week™
| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^ I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea 
Uhh...you never heard that  |
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Hyu-zu Yoshi Eki's Apprentice


   Age : 16 Joined : 17 May 2008 Posts : 1222 Village : don't have one Married To: : no one Bloodline : Hyu-zu Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Thu Jul 17, 2008 7:34 pm | |
| i don't work for anyone kent especially anto no offence anti _________________
 I HAVE A LONG NAME zachary evan minalsilo eucudar delerosa sina derpree |
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Uchiha Obito SpamNobi


   Age : 12 Joined : 20 Jun 2008 Posts : 1489 Village : Konoha Married To: : Dating uchiha yui Bloodline : Uchiha Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:39 am | |
| How about me kent _________________ When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest
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Retsu Kenty Admin/Hazi's Homeboy/Retsu 2nd in Command


   Age : 17 Joined : 28 Mar 2008 Posts : 3056 Village : Akatsuki Married To: : Siara? =3 Bloodline : Retsu Clan (Neo-Rinnengan) Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:56 am | |
| Fang you help me defeat towashin and anti 
Towashin you dont work for him, he gets into a spot of trouble and decide to help him. _________________ The official post/quote of the week™
| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^ I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea 
Uhh...you never heard that  |
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Uchiha Obito SpamNobi


   Age : 12 Joined : 20 Jun 2008 Posts : 1489 Village : Konoha Married To: : Dating uchiha yui Bloodline : Uchiha Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:57 am | |
| Alright, I will take Anti.
I will help after or if I beat him. I will _________________ When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest
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Retsu Kenty Admin/Hazi's Homeboy/Retsu 2nd in Command


   Age : 17 Joined : 28 Mar 2008 Posts : 3056 Village : Akatsuki Married To: : Siara? =3 Bloodline : Retsu Clan (Neo-Rinnengan) Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Fri Jul 18, 2008 7:19 am | |
| Lol,
it wont be for some time yet, i still got to introduce them into the story.
and Fang reply to our battle in battle dome ^_^ _________________ The official post/quote of the week™
| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^ I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea 
Uhh...you never heard that  |
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Uchiha Obito SpamNobi


   Age : 12 Joined : 20 Jun 2008 Posts : 1489 Village : Konoha Married To: : Dating uchiha yui Bloodline : Uchiha Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Fri Jul 18, 2008 7:22 am | |
| alright. _________________ When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest
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