Maria Konoshi's story

Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Thu Jul 17, 2008 7:12 am

~~~New Sensei/Hokage~~~

Tsunade's disappearance from the hokage position was proved to be known and quite obvious. She left her position that she held for seven and a half years as Hokage, to persue her dream as a gambling professional and live the rest of her life along with Shizune, whos pig Ton Ton, recently ran away. Naruto Uzumaki became the Hokage, he was recommended by Tsunade and was a great ninja who learned how to tame the demon inside him. In other words, he became one of the greatest ninja in the world.

The chunnin exams were about two months away, and already the students have sort of gotten used to their sensei's, but this was all about to change.

Maria was walking through the graveled sidewalk, along with her friend Kelsey and her other friend Karon, who had her nose buried in a romance book. "Why did Iruka-sensei want us to return to the academy, I mean, dont you think he would be sick of us aftere those three years at the academy." Maria said as she kicked a pebble and watched it skip along the tarred surface.

"Well, I heard that somone DIED!!" Kelsey said looking as if she was telling a scary story. "Well, everybody has heard different theories, and I am pretty sure nobody died." Karon said as she licked her finger to turn the page in her book.

"Seriously Karon! Why are you so obsessed with that book?" Kelsey said as she scratched her arm and attempted to read the cover of the book. "Well..... I saw Yume pick it up, and it looks like he wants to get it, so I want to read it quickly so I can tell him about it before he gets it!" Karon said with a smile on her face.

"Aren't you guys all over eachother anyways...?" Maria said as she turned the corner, merely knocking down Karon because she wasn't paying attention.

"Hey! Girls! Wait up!" some voices called out behind Maria, Kelsey, and Karon. The three hesitated then looked back, startled at the sudden outburst. Hazirami, Kentaarza, and Nagato were running up behind them. "Dang! How fast... do you... walk!" Hazirami said panting for air.

"Well, for one thing, we aren't fast walkers, your just slow... And two, why would a girl like me, talk to a guy like you?" Kelsey said to Hazirami as she flicked him in the forehead. "Mmmhmmm!" Maria and Karon said as they turned around and walked alongside Kelsey.

"Girls these days, they can own you in words, but when it comes to actual combat, they are deadweights..." Kentaarza said, not realizing how loud he said it.

The three girls stood in anger, as flames were rising behind them. "WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY! SAY IT AGAIN AND ILL KNOCK YOUR TEETH OUT!" Maria said while holding her fist up at Kentaarza. "Ahhh... Err... I I I I I I I I I.... I I I ...... I I.... I I I I....." Kentaarza said while studdering to try and find some words to spit out of his mouth.

"What ever!" Karon said as the three girls turned around once again and continued towards the academy.

The six people entered the classroom, where they once were five hours a day learning about ninja skills, a year ago. When the six kids entered the room, the other three were also in there, Wolfreign, Aigoro, and Gan Ning.

"I am sorry to say, but the sensei's you have were only fill in's. They were for the last generation. We finally got our new three sensei's who are fresh new Jounin! And a kage..." Iruka said while moving to the side.

Two men, and one women entered the room. "This is Sasuke Uchiha." Iruka said while pointing at Sasuke, "This is Tenten" Iruka said while pointing gloomily at Tenten who stood tall. "And last but not least, this is Naruto Uzumaki." Iruka said as he sighed, "Just like last time, they will call off your names, and you have to walk up to them."

Sasuke walked up first with his hands in his pockets, he pulled out a piece of paper, cleared his throat and began to talk, "Kelsey Naimi." Sasuke said. Kelsey jumped up and ran down, she stood close behind Sasuke and started drawing on the chalkboard. "Wolfreign Inuzuka and Nagato Fujibyashi." Sasuke said while he put his hands in the pocket, he was startled as he saw something with his Sharingan, he saw behind Nagato's real eyes where he had special Doujutsu eyes. Nagato and Wolfreign ran down, they all held hands and started playing ring-around-the-rosy around Sasuke's tall leg.

Tenten walked up, she clear her throat and smiled at all the little children. "Okay... Karon Rosewater! Gan Ning, and Kentaarza." Tenten said as she walked back and not long she was accompanied by three children who were all at a dead stare at her.

Naruto walked up, he reached around in his pockets, he cleared his throat. Ahh great... Im with the nerd again... Maria thought to herself. "Aigoro Kurowashi." Naruto said, "Hazirami Retsu." Naruto said as he recognized the last name, "And Maria Konoshi." Naruto said.

So the Konoshi is still around. And she is on my rivals squad, while I have hers. Sasuke thought to himself as he put his arm around Nagato, "Hhmhh." Sasuke grinned at Naruto who was busy dancing around with his gennin.

Meanwhile in the courtyard, Naruto sits on a railing with the three children sitting at his feet.

"Okay... I know you already passed the test that Kakashi and Asuma gave you, so you wont need to do another one." Naruto said while laughing, "I already know who you are and what you like, I had a conversation with Kakashi about all the new gennin." Naruto said as he flipped his orange and black cloak behind him.

"Tomorrow I want to test you, I want to see what your capable of. Tomorrow meet me at the river, at seven o'clock sharp. Okay, your dismissed, go on and do whatever you want with your last free day." Naruto said as he shooed them off.

Maria walked a different route than the other two, the nine tail fox. she thought to herself as she carefully walked down the steps.
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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Thu Jul 24, 2008 3:17 pm

Maria woke up that morning, she put on her clothes and stumbled out of her apartment room. She towards the front of the building towards Aigoro's families small apartment, which Maria's was bigger than and was given to her free by the new Hokage, Naruto.

Maria arrived, it was cloudy out, and there was a chilly breeze. Perfect day for some training.

Maria was the first person to arrive there. She sat cross legged in the middle of the field to attempt to meditate. Somone or something tapped her on the shoulder. She peeked her eye opened and looked behind her to find nobody there, her heart started to pound, she started to hate being alone, she finally realized how dark and spooky the forest looked.

She felt her shoulder to see if it was real, and she pleaded for the sun to come out to lighten up the forest. When she looked back forward she screamed and was startled by Hazirami sitting right in front of her, meditating. "'Getting all intense, eh?" A voice said. Maria looked up to see it was Naruto was standing right over her bending over to look at her, he was smiling. Hazirami started to laugh. Aigoro came out from behind Naruto, "Its seems like I was the last one here." he said.

"Okay, your training will begin." Naruto said, he pulled out three bells. "Look familiar?"

"Hey, thats the test Kakashi gave us." Maria said aloud. "Exactly, but there are three bells, and notice there is no time limit. In other words, I will keep you out here all day if that is what it takes for you to get the bells." Naruto said as he jiggled the bells.

"Ready? Aaaand START!" Naruto yelled as the three gennin moved.

Maria disappeared and Hazirami ran at Naruto full speed, leaving only and trail in the grass. Aigoro quickly moved and brought a paper scroll out of a small pouch. He spread it out and used his kunai to cut a section off. Very quickly and smoothly he created a hand full of Origami Shurikens. Aigoro jumped up into the air and sheathed the several shurikens in both of his hands.

I've always wanted to see first hand of this... special jutsu. Naruto thought.

It seemed as if silver paint was spilled and dripped over the sides of the paper shurikens.

Hazirami almost reached Naruto with his fist clenched ready to punch him in the stomach. Naruto sighed and threw his hand over, uplifting much sand to blind Hazirami. Hazirami did a back flip and charged back at Naruto.

Aigoro threw his now metal shuriken he made at Naruto, all seven of them were spiraling towards their sensei.

"Hmmf." Naruto said as he talked big, rather underestimating the gennin.

A tentacle made out of water emerged at high speed from behind Naruto. What! Naruto thought as he sensed it. The tentacle hit and wrap around Naruto-sensei and held his arms to his waist. "You! You got me from behind! That punch was only to distract me, Hazirami! Very impressive." Naruto said as he had a flash-back of Maria dissappearing right in the beginning.

Aigoro's shuriken were flying at Naruto and all hit him in the chest and one hit him in the headband.

All children stood in horror! The Naruto was fading away, turning into a pile of sand right in front of them.

All three childrens eyes flew all the way open, they stood in shock. "It was a clone!" Maria yelled in disbelief

"I see, that sand he threw up. That was a distraction to cover himself, then he created a clone of himself." Aigoro said while thinking. "Truly formidable." Maria said frantically.

"Well, he is Hokage." Aigoro said while pushing up his glasses. "Well, then where is he?!" Hazirami said shakily. "Where?" Naruto's voice said. Naruto's big masculine hand was resting on Hazirami's shoulder. Hazirami gasped and tried to tug lose, but his sensei had a tight but gentle grip. Hazirami spun his arm around to try and hit Naruto, but failed, his sensei caught his arm. Naruto now held Hazirami's left arm in his left hand, and held his right shoulder with his right hand, preventing him from moving.

"Hazirami is in trouble, we need to help." Maria said as she was getting ready to charge.

"NO! Dont come near, he will only snatch you up too, if that happens... we will never get a bell! RUN!" Hazirami shouted as he was trapped beaneath Naruto and his tall shadow.

"Right!" Aigoro said as he grabbed Maria by the arm and jumped away.

Maria and Aigoro are jumping through the trees.

"Why did we run, we should have just help him anyways! No clue how sensei could be torturing him!" Maria said. "I suppose you have a point. But Hazirami told us to run" Aigoro, "But still, this is not the way of the shinobi, to run away from a defencless... captured... teammate!" Maria cried out.

Aigoro's eyes dialated, his heart rate sped up. "Somone is following us, we also need to split up, in that case at least one of us will be safe." Aigoro said as he pointed towards the right for Maria. "All right, I guess..." Maria said as she cut left and started running in that direction.

Aigoro went diagonal left, and cut to the left. He's still on me! Hes way to fast, he's going to catch me in the matter of seconds if I dont react! Aigoro thought. He jumped down and lurched himself into a bush where he kneel and choke for breath. Aigoro's hands trembled. "Boo..." A voice behind him said, it was Naruto bending over with a smile on his face.

-Meanwhile-

Maria was sprinting through the woods cutting corners hoping to lose the person who is after her. No matter how fast she ran, and where she moved, the person was always gaining on her. "Why can't I lose him?!" Maria said to herself. A bead of sweat rolled down her forehead.

Maria could no longer sense the person who was after her. "What? Where did he go?" Maria said to herself as she leaned against the tree. She turned on her back, and leaned against the tree again, she layed against it thinking. What should I do? What should I do!? Maria thought to herself.

She heard a scream. "Wha.. that was Aigoro!" Maria said, as she looked over. She took a kunai, and a piece of paper.

Are you all right?

Maria wrote on the piece of paper and tied it to the kunai, she threw it towards the direction where his scream came from. She waited for a minute then the kunai came back. She took it out of the tree and read what it said.

I am alright.

Maria sat back down and leaned against the tree, "Then why did he scream like such a wussy?!" Maria said to herself as she crumpled up the paper and threw it off the tree branch she was laying on. There was a creaking noise, she looked down at her legs and realized that there was a shadow extending over her feet. "Thats not my shadow!" Maria yelled as she looked up to find Naruto using a transparent jutsu to travel inside the tree and was protruding out right over her. His hand lurched and grabbed her.

Maria woke up, it seemed only minutes after she was captured. She found that she was on Naruto's back, and they came to an opening. Maria was peering over his shoulder, unable to move. They jumped up and were coming down to the field that they were originally in.

Something happened that made Maria panic. She saw Aigoro and Hazirami still being held by two other Naruto! What is this! Maria thought, as hard as she tried, she could not even move her pinkie. Maria could feel him, that this was a solid actual clone of Naruto.

The Naruto that was carrying her picked her up and lifted her over his head and dropped her. She landed and was sitting on his feet resting back on his shins.

"What did you do?!" Hazirami shouted as she struggled and tried to break free. "Don't stress out about it, I only relaxed her muscles with medical jutsu." The real Naruto said, who was standing by Maria.

In seconds the two clones of Naruto had tied Aigoro and Hazirami's hands and feet up in twine and dissapeared.

Maria's hands were dead on the ground. Her pinky moved. Energy rushed throughout Maria.

Before anybody knew what happened, Maria already had her leg pointing up, she had kicked Naruto and sent him flying through the air. Naruto was flying through the air, just before he hit the ground he disappeared. There were glowing cyan lines across Maria's face which faded away.

Naruto came up out of the ground between all three of them. Maria was all alone on this one. "I guess im all alone on this one." Maria said as she held her wrist in pain.

Maria ran at the speed of lightning she focused chakra into her fingernails to make them razor blade sharp, she ran right passed Naruto and cut the twine entangling Hazirami and Aigoro.

"Kakashi told us to put the team ahead of ourselves!" Maria said as she took out a senbon and held it up in front of her face.

"Hmmm, its already 4 o'clock and you still haven't gotten a bell." Naruto said as he reached down to touch them, but they were gone.

"Hehe." Maria said as she held up all three bells. "You know when I managed to kick you, I knew you would allow me to hit you in order to come back behind me. You thought I would tire out... When I kicked you in the air, I used one of my bloodline special abilities. I let just enough of my Inner Pheonix out to strengthen my body, that is what those cyan lines were, my chakra became so distinct that you could see it through my skin. This powered me up enough to run up and snatch the bells from you, while you were still in the air."

Hazirami and Aigoro were shocked at the amazing speed.

"But the problem is, I would have more gratitude for this accomplishment if you would have not let me take the bells." Maria said.

Hazirami and Aigoro were shocked once again.

"When I took those bells, you looked down at me and smiled. You knew that most people cannot forsee my attacks, and my speed." Maria said to close up her speech.

Naruto sat down under a tree and all three of the gennin used his legs as head rests.

"Well... You did get the bells... All three of you trained hard. "Here is some things I saw that were errors in your skills. Hazirami, even though you have a fast reflex and you know a lot of Ninjutsu, with your height compared to mine you could have easily escaped a hold like that, you could have easily charged away, or simply manuever under their legs. Aigoro, you have a bright mind and are very intellegent, except when it comes to sacrifices, you seem to get a bit selfish. Maria, your cunning speed and stamina match your strength. But your negative attitude all the time towards your team helps nobody."

"Okay, but enough with the lecture. The first thing I saw in you guys, was failure, I only saw you as little kids. But now you are ninja, in two days we will be going on our first mission. Tomorrow I am giving you guys the day off. But just dont get to out of shape." Naruto said.

Everbody got up and walked away, down the street and paths. Maria walked seperate path, somone grabbed her shoulder. "Maria. Dont worry its me again." Naruto said as he turned her around and looked at her.

"What is it Naruto-sensei?" Maria asked him.

"Well, I noticed your Inner Pheonix jutsu which extends the power of your chakra. When you were done you were exteremly streched out and exhausted. I want to train you in private, where I can teach you to control that Jutsu." Naruto said as his grip became more firm on her shoulder.

"Well, did you offer it to everybody else."

"Yes, I did. Everybody else accepted, and theirs will also be private. Im planning on teaching Aigoro how to use different Origami jutsu's and Hazirami how to use better taijutsu, and for some close combat type jutsu's. I want you three to learn more before the upcoming chunnin exams in two days." Naruto said, "So, are you up to it?" He asked in his gentle comforting tone.

Just the thought of the chunnin exams sent a chill of nervousness down her spine.

"Yes, I would be honored to do it." Maria said as she grabbed Naruto's hand and walked off towards her home, "Good bye, see you tomorrow." Maria said as she waved. Naruto waved back and dissappeared.

Maria made it back to her appartment, it was hot and grose out. She pulled off her weapons case and baggy.

It was getting late, Maria was all showered up and in her pajamas and was on top of the fleece covers on her bed with the headboard lamp on. "I have a full free day tomorrow to hang out with some friends. What should I do?" Maria said trying to take advantage of the next day.

Maria sat up on her bed and slid open her window. She reached out to pull on a string which lead to the apartment two stories above. That window opened and out popper Kelsey's head, "What!" Kelsey said while her hair was up in curlers and she had face cream on. Maria reached over and tugged on another rope that lead two stories under her. After a couple seconds out popped Karon's head.

The three girls had a way of communication by using ropes. "Do you guys want to go shopping tomorrow, we can have some guy friends come with us." Maria said. There was a shush in a nearby window.

Karon made a face at the window and started making weird noises, mocking the person in the room.

"We would love too!!" they both said

A bit of face paste fell off Kelsey's face and landed on Karon's face. "Eww did a bird just poop on me?!" Karon yelped. Maria and Kelsey both shut there windows and left Karon out there alone.
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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Thu Jul 24, 2008 4:45 pm

awwwwssoome story took me a while to read it >,< but it still awesome. If you can fit anyone else in can I be in it? Very Happy

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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Mon Jul 28, 2008 7:45 pm

-The Beggining of the Chunnin exams!-

Maria woke up, her laziness kept her in her soft warm bed. She looked to the side to see her window curtains were pulled open and her window was open. The cold breeze felt moist on her skin. It was six in the morning, four hours before the chunnin exams would start.

There was a pounding on the door.

Maria sat up and put her feet on the ground. The marble tiles were like ice on the bottom of her feet.

She unlocked the door and opened it to find Aigoro with a towel and some soap bars. "I was just wondering if I could use your shower, it will only take me a couple minutes." Aigoro said as he pleaded to walk in.

Maria moved her arm out of the way to allow Aigoro in. "Be my guest, I took one last night." Maria said as she slightly rolled her eyes. "Yes! Thank you!" Aigoro said as he flew in and into the bathroom.

Maria stood with the door open, looking at the glare from the bright hallway on her dark marble tiles.

Maria walked over to her grooming area where she had her brush laying on the table. She grabbed its wooden handle and started brushing her hair until it was smooth and straight.

She reached down to pull out a new clean brown shirt which she replaced with her sleeping shirt. She put her vanilla caprees on.

She put her hair up into a ponytail leaving her bangs straight down, and leaving a flap of hair down on both sides of her forehead.

Maria continued to brush her ponytail to make it more straight.

Aigoro walked out of the bathroom with his clothes on and his hair partially dried. Aigoro was all ready to go with his all his paper scrolls latched at his side. His green hair was already dried.

"Well that was fast..." Maria said.

She felt a stronger rush of cold air against her, she saw that Aigoro was startled as he stood waiting for Maria. Maria looked at the window sill and was also startled to find Hazirami, all dressed, with his black coat swaying, kneeling in the window sill.

"Comon! Hurry up Maria, Naruto-sensei still isnt up! We can surprise him real good!" Hazirami said as he beckoned Maria.

She ran over and slipped on her brown leather vest, which was bordered with silver. And put on her strapped sandals.

Hazirami jumped back, while Aigoro ran and jumped out of the window after him. "Wait for m... ahh never mind!" Maria said as she grabbed her kunai holder, and her baggy and jumped out. Latching them on while catching up to Hazirami and Aigoro.

When Maria caught up to Aigoro and Hazirami. They all jumped over a large gap of homes which were pretty high. Maria saw in the courtyard Kelsey who was swiping at a tree at unison with Wolfreign. Tenten was standing right behind them. She saw Nagato standing right beside Sasuke, Maria clenched her fists.

She looked back at Aigoro and Hazirami, who were in front of her. They jumped a weak one were all three of them landed on an edge of the Hokage house.

They all edged there way and under the first window, they when they reached the second window, which was their sensei's room, and was opened. They carefully popped into the room.

They saw a king sized bed in the middle of the room, where they could see Naruto sleeping in it. They all went to one side of the bed, where Naruto was facing. The covers were over his head. He let out a breath, and it went into Maria's face and it dried out her eyes.

"Boo..." A voice said behind all three of them. The person grabbed the two kids on the side by the shoulder, which were Hazirami and Maria. The person, who was discovered to be Naruto, pulled them up and held them both in one arm.

"What!!! We were going to scare you!" Aigoro said as he stood at Naruto's waist.

Naruto dropped Hazirami and Maria on their feet. "Well, I knew you would be coming this early." Naruto said while laughing. "Lets go, I need to warm you guys up for the chunnin exams today!" Naruto said as he jumped out the window, the three gennin followed.

Naruto lead them to a courtyard in Konoha, which he had some targets and punching stomps out.

-forty-five minuted before the exams start-

Maria jumped up into the air where she did a half misty flip. She was upside down a sheathed four needles in both hands. She continued doing the misty flip and let go of all the needles. She hit all eight targets in the bullseye

Hazirami, with his eyes closed, focused and palm punched at the stomp, a release of chakra split the wood stump in half. As the top half of the stump fell towards the ground, Hazirami opened his eyes, he threw his other palm at the top part of the stump. And instantly it blew up into splinters.

Aigoro was sitting cross-legged with origami of up to thirty different weapon made out of paper surrounding him. He started mumbling some words as he had his fingers in the tiger sign. All the origami weapons turned into actual real metal weapons.

"Well, it looks like all three of you are more than ready for the chunnin exams." Naruto said.

"We should be going now, am I right?" Aigoro said as he put his scrolls back on his latch.

Maria, Hazirami, and Aigoro ran because they were a tad late. They arrived in the building. When they reached the room, they continued through the doors where there was a huge room of people.

The three found a place in the crowd where they sat.

Kelsey, Wolfreign, Nagato, Gan Ning, Kentaarza, and Karon entered the room and were surprised at the numbers.

Hazirami sat with Maria and Aigoro standing behind they. They watched all the other groups shoot eye darts at each other.

A figure came up to the table which Hazirami put his feet up on. The person stood over them. He had bright sharingan eyes, but he was not from the leaf village. "Hmm, is there any reason your standing there, your blocking my light." Hazirami said stubbornly.

"Hmm, I just came here to tell you... There was no reason for you to join, because we..." The person said as he pointed towards his group. "We are going to destroy you.

"Yea... well how can you supposidly destroy us if we dont even know your name." Maria said

"Hmm, well. My name.. Is Ryu Uchiha." The boy said, just like my father Maria thought as she remembered her parents. "This is Kierkyay Youmoto." Ryu said as he had is arm pointing in the direction of a boy with very clean long blonde hair. "And this is Hataki Sona." Ryu said as he had is arm pointing towards a girl who had jet black hair and had a streak of pink in it.

Eh! Her right arm and leg! There fake! Aigoro thought to himself as he was in shock. Hataki noticed that he was looking at them so she hid her right side behind Ryu.

"Hmm." Hazirami said under his breath.

A big puff of smoke exploded out in the front of the room. There stood a man with several other jounin gaurds behind him. "Listen up you wussy gennin! Its time for the chunnin exams to begin! I am your procter." The man said.

(Tomorrow I will add more onto this, dont feel like writing right now.)
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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Tue Jul 29, 2008 8:22 pm

:::Continue:::

"The first part of the Chunnin exams is the written test." The man said. There were many gasps in the crowd.

Everybody was seated and some people were put in different rooms because there were too many.

Maria was ready, she had her ink quil and the paper was in front of her. She began to shake in nervousness. This is so easy! I studied all of these! Maria thought until she stopped at one answer. Wh...What is this one. Maria thought to herself, Oh well ill just skip it... oh my god! I dont know this one either! Same with the next one!

Maria guessed and filled in answers.

-Later-

Everyone was leaving, Maria was walking with her group. "I swear I probably failed!" Maria said, "I didn't know half of the questions."

"Quit stressing out about it, you probably did fine." Hazirami said as he slapped her on the back. "Well... I think I probably got closed to getting them all right." Aigoro said.

Yea... because your a stupid nerd like that! "Oh thats great Aigoro!" Maria said.

"Yea, the test was just like a walk in the park, it was easy!" Hazirami said.

They both said it was really easy! And I will be the only person left behind! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!!! "Well thats even better! Im glad to hear it.." Maria said trying to maintain and fake smile.

-Next day-

Maria was walking alone to the chunnin exam center. When she entered the room was almost empty, the number of people was cut down by at least eight.

"What? There is probably only twenty people in here." Maria said, not noticing that everyone she knew was already there. "The people who were 'disqualified' were told not to come because they failed the first part of the exam." Wolfreign said as he leaned against the wall.

"Ah... Its good to see that you all have arrived... I know you all worked hard to pass that test. Now all of you will advance to part two of the chunnin exams."

"Sound Team Mou" The proctor said as he directed himself towards three individuals, "Choce, Ina, and Ein." The procter said as he looked at them.

"Cloud Team Hayate." The proctor said as he looked in the direction at the three people who confronted Maria and her squad earlier, "Ryu, Kierkyay, and Sataki" The proctor said as he turned his attentiont back towards Maria and the other leaf village gennin. "And leaf village ninja, Team Tenten, Team Sasuke, and Team Naruto." The procter said.

:::To be continued::

(Tired, will continue it tomorrow.)
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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Mon Aug 04, 2008 7:28 am

this is great maria Very Happy

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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Sat Sep 06, 2008 7:57 pm

~~~Freaky Forest!~~~

Maria, Hazirami and Aigoro were set off and in the forest. "Look at this, its still in the evening and its so dark!" Aigoro said. "The tree's are thick, why do you think they call this the 'Freaky Forest'?" Hazirami said.

There was a sound, like a branch snapped. The three of them stoped, Aigoro and Hazirami and Maria both perched themselves on a branch. They noticed three people standing in the middle, it was the sound team. But to bad that the sound team noticed them before Hazirami, Maria and Aigoro noticed them.

There were two guys, Cahori and Ein. Cahori was cloaked in a huge robe and his face was wrapped in red cloth which drapped everywhere. Ein was smaller, and he had to face gaurds on his cheeks. He had a miniature divice on his right wrist. And the girl, Ina, was slender and had light blue hair. She wore a black jacket that had a red band going through it.

"Parties over fella's, so here's what you do. You drop your heavens scroll and walk away, maybe then we won't kill you." Ina said in a snotty tone.

"I guess there is no other way." Hazirami said as he reached his finger into his kunai case and put his finger through the loop of it.

"I guess so!" Ein said as he smirked, he through his arm up and pulled up and had it vertical towards the three. Out of the side of his arm, the device shot four kunai's out. Aigoro reacted by taking a scroll of his back, he quickly nipped his finger and began printing all over the scroll. Aigoro's hands moved lightning fast, and in a split second, he already had origami shurikens. He sheathed all four of them and threw them accordingly countering the four kunai's Ein shot.

Meanwhile Hazirami ran side to side in an evasive manuever to dodge the incoming kunai's from Ina. When he got close enough he grabbed his wrist. Hazirami's hand became enveloped in a firey chakra. He slammed his palm to Ina's chest, and she moaned in pain and fell to the ground. "Hmm, Touch of the Dragon, nothing more than a little pain. You won't be moving for awhile..." Hazirami said.

Aigoro had four origami kunai's sheathed between his fingers. He threw them and they all hit exactly in the weapon slots in Ein's device, preventing him from shooting anymore kunai's.

Maria ran low with a kunai in her hand, she ran, charging at Ein. Cahori slid in between Maria and Ein, protecting Ein. "It's over" Cahori said as he smiled nastily. Just then, Maria smirked and vanished. Maria maneuvered, lightning fast and was on the ground between Ein and Cahori. Cahori managed to look back to see her there, but it was too late for both of them. Maria shot up in a handstand and drop kicked them both in the chins. Launching them up several feet in the air. She flipped herself back unto her feet and jumped up until she was parallel in the air with Cahori and Ein. "Not Yet!" Maria said as she grabbed both of their heads and bashed them together, quickly she began sending frequent kick's to both Ein's and Cahori's bodies.

Maria pushed herself above them both, frusteration was written all over her face. "Lions Barrage!!" Maria yelled as she brought her heel down on both of their chests, sending them bashing back into the ground.

When the dust cleared, Maria was frightened. "No... No way!" Maria said as she looked at Cahori. Ein was knocked out cold, but Cahori had blades sticking out of his body and holding him off the ground. "Your... your a monster!" Maria said.

Hazirami and Aigoro were too frightened to say anything. Ina layed unconscious on the ground.

"My ability lays within my cells. I can turn the tissue underneath my skin into a hard metal blade, which I can force out and protrude out of my body." Cahori said as he put his hands together. "Omega Sound shockwave!" Cahori yelled as a gigantic burst of white rays flew in all around him. Maria tried running but the intest sound through he back, even though she was fast enough to keep conscious.

The dust cleared once again. When it did, everything was demented and put out of place, but one stood was Maria. Everyone else including Hazirami and Aigoro were knocked out cold from the intense sound blast.

Argh! Impossible, she was fast enough that she could make her own body withstand the attack. She made her body vibrate through the sound waves! Cahori thought.

(I'll continue part two tomorrow)
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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:25 am

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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Wed Sep 24, 2008 7:35 pm

Cahori ran at Maria, with blades surrounding his arm he swiped at her. Maria was able to weave her hands through the blades and grab and stop his fist. Maria threw herself down towards his side as she went for a swipe to his side, but then blades quickly protruded out and scraped her cheek as she tumbled back.

I would rather not resort to more powerful attacks, which will only leave me vunerable to defeat. Maria thought, But if I can just pull off a morning lotus, I should be alright.

"All right, here I come!" Maria said as she slid her feet and began sprinting ultra fast at Cahori. Maria jumped with an air round house kick, he blocked it with his right arm which was surrounded by metal blade. She spun herself around to kick him at the other side, but her kick was blocked by his other arm. She then turned herself halfway around, while still in the air she did a back flip kick which she still was blocked by both of his arm. The last kick sent him staggering backwards a few feet with his arms down to balance himself. Maria landed on her feet quickly then jumped up for an attack. She threw her heel up and kicked him hard under the jaw, throwing him up into the air. Maria appeared behind and fiercly wrapped both her arms and legs around his torso.

Just then blades immersed out of his black cloak and lightly impaled Maria up through her chest. She leaned back and fell back down to the ground head first. Blood was dripped slowly. "Hmm, if I hadn't been wearing this vest, I would have been killed instantly." Maria said as the blades slowly seeped back into Cahori.

[continue it later]
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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Wed Oct 01, 2008 6:36 pm

"Argh!" I'll just have to move around those stubborn blades, but let's take a closer look. Maria thought to herself.

Maria ran with her hand pointed facing the ground ready for a frontal attack. But just before she reached Cahori she vanished, Maria appeared behind Cahori in a ball of upthrown particles. Just as she threw a back-hand swipe with her fist, Cahori immersed himself and was completely covered by blades.

Maria's fist still move towards him as a blades catches and scraps her thigh and her fist. Cahori began rotating himself, the blades caught Maria's flesh as the blades twirled her around in mid-air. Maria was thrown off the rotating spiked column(Cahori).

I don't get it. This kid, hes really good. Maria thought to herself, she heard a sort of sizzling noise. She looked over to see Hazirami and his wounds healing, quickly!

Thats right, its because of the nine tail fox. Maria thought to herself. Although these chunnin exams may not be a problem for him, its dangerous for Aigoro and I.

Without hesitating Maria charged at Cahori once again. She began incircling him with her speed, as dirt and dust was thrown up into the air, creating a wall of debree surrounding Cahori. This move will use up all my chakra, if it doesn't work, I might have to use my Pheonix release jutsu, but that would bring even more trouble against him. "Come on already, what are you waiting for?!" Cahori stubbornly said, "Okay then, you asked for it!" Maria said as wrappings from her hand wraps began inswirling and it entangled Cahori. Maria appeared without any trace behind her directly infront of Cahori, but seemed to be in a slow motion state of her ultra fast run. "Pheonix Strike!" Maria yelled as she vanished once again, almost at the speed of light her pointed hand already swiped and charged at Cahori. But the attack was unnsucessful. Blades imerged out of Cahori's chest ad absorbed the impact of Maria's attack.

"Hmm, your speed is impressive. But this is over now." Cahori said as blades surrounded his hand. "Now die you annoying brat!" Cahori said as he punched his bladed hand at Maria. No! Maria thought to herself.

Just then a spiraling noise was heard. A small, thin string of water stopped and begain spiraling in-between Maria and Cahori, the water grew more dense and exploded in a large sphere of symetrical lines of water. Maria was thrown back and also was Cahori.

A figure immerged from behind Maria, Maria looked back to see Kelsey Naimi standing there with a moving ball of water in her hand.

"Who's this?" Cahori said as he stood up straight. "It is I... Kelsey, Kelsey Naimi!" Kelsey said as their was an intense shrill thrown down Cahori's spine.

[Next time: Kelsey vs Cahori]
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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Thu Oct 02, 2008 3:17 pm

Thats right i am kick @$$
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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Thu Oct 02, 2008 3:35 pm

not to criticize, but Aigoro didnt live the same time as Kakashi... Naruto had already died when Aigoro was born. Though, this is not Aigoro's continuum, so proceed. Smile

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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:17 pm

aigoro QUIT THE BIG WORDS they hurt my head
jk
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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Sat Oct 04, 2008 12:20 pm

I know, Aigoro. The only people who are actually supposed to be in my storyline is Nagato and Hazirami. It should be more like your father, Aigoro. I'm just adding extra people to add enjoyment for others in my stories.
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Subject: Re: Maria Konoshi's story Sat Oct 04, 2008 4:21 pm

Aigoro's father's name is Sarajo. Sarajo is a master of Origami no Jutsu... making Paper animals like Kai does with ink. Sarajo uses then like one would use puppet jutsus, like Aigoro uses chakra strings to make his paper animals move. Just FYI for whatever use it may serve.
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