Blue's story

Subject: Blue's story Sun Oct 05, 2008 10:32 am

Name of your story:blues story
Does it change ur charecter in any way?:no
Is it very short or epic size or in the Middle?:long
Does it have any admins as charecters in it?:yes
does it have any people from this forum in it?:yes

the characters of my story

Brothers
devil
jubei
yoshi
ai

sisters
inu
ryu
miyuki

best friends
bao
hazi
shin
obito
maria
yume
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Chapter 1. Waking up

it was a normal day for blue. She woke up while the sun light would shine through her window, as she opened the window a gentle breeze of air drifted across her."today will be a swell day no problems no worries" she said as she headed down stairs. Everyone was gone ,some were in the village playing and talking with others and some were on missions. Blue walks outside and watches the birds and butterflies flutter around."Blue!" obito says from behind her running toward her as if he had something to tell her. "hi obito" she said smiling "Hi blue guess what" blue looks confused alittle not knowing what obito is going to say "i just made chuunin" obito smiles looking at blue "awsome maybe oneday you can make it to the kage level or sannin" blue looks at obito and smiles "well i will be seeing you later obito" blue walks away "hey were are you going" blue continues to walk "i need to take care of some important business i will be back momentarily" blue runs "See ya later" she says waving good bye."Hmph she didn't even look thrilled" obito walks away. As blue runs she is greeted by everyone who sees her, Blue appears infront of the hospital with a some flowers in her hand. "Hi blue are you here to see yoshi" one of the nurses says "as always" blue smiles.As blue walks down the hall comes across bao "Hi bao what brings you here today" bao looks at blue "oh i was just here to pay yoshi alittle visit what are you doing here" "i was going to do the same thing" bao smiles at blue "i am going to do the same bao" "well okay then see ya" bao walks away as blue opens the door to yoshi's room "Hi yoshi" "Hi blue"

Stay tuned next time for
Hospital drama

Subject: Re: Blue's story Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:10 pm

YAY I'M IN IT, one problem though, forgot the template and getting it approved
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Looking for trouble, he's your man.
Say hey, hey, Shin-Chan!
He's breaking the rules the best he can
He's a little bit of rude and a little bit of crude
He's a kid with an attitude
Shin-Chan!

Subject: Re: Blue's story Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:42 pm

oh yeah my bad

Subject: Re: Blue's story Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:43 pm

fixed it

Subject: Re: Blue's story Mon Oct 06, 2008 6:52 pm

Approved ~
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