Gentu The Devourer,,story written/need approval

Last edited by Uchiha Gentu on Sun Jun 29, 2008 6:46 pm; edited 3 times in total

Name of your story:Gentu the Devourer
Does it change ur charecter in any way?:yes
Is it very short or epic size or in the Middle?:epic
Does it have any admins as charecters in it?:sadly no
does it have any people from this forum in it?:no

His Name Is Gentu,, Thought to be a descendandt from the direct Uchiha Bloodline but it is uncertain where his power comes from. It is referred to as the Devouring sharingan. It is a Six tomoe sharingan that can eat any other Mangekyou Sharingan it finds to add to its own ability's. Madara Uchiha said that the darkness never came again. For Gentu, the Darkness never came a first time.

Gentu Was Once Thought to be an Associate or Spy of Akatsuki but he has never worked with the organization nor does he have a village. He is a Drifter and his origin is thought to be Konoha but it is uncertain of his origin or heritage. There are many legends of Gentu but noone can. or ever will be certain of his capability's. His Known name,, is Gentu the Devourer.

watch your eyes

When Gentu Was Born on the west side of Konoha He imidiately activated a strange six tomoe sharingan that for some unkown reason killed anyone in the room that had the mangekyou sharingan activated or not and absorbed it within himself. Gentu slowly became Gentu the Devourer Within the Uchiha clan. As he grew he was slowly absorbing many MS's and killing hundreds of Uchiha's until he left the village at the ripe age of ten. He Slowly Devoured Any Uchiha's Mangekyou's that were hidden on the continent. But something kept making him want to come back to the village of the leaf. it was not till then. 5 years later. that he realized he had a brother.
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Gentu The Devourer,, Whatch Your Eyes..

you might lose them

when Gentu returned to his village he found that he had a 8 year old brother with a mangekyou so powerful that if he used it his vision would degrade by thirty percent everytime it was used. if he didnt get an eternal mangekyou soon he would be shrouded in darkness for his entire life. Gentu said nothing but frowned from the rooftops with the moon behind him and the starry sky above him. he knew what he had to do to save his brother. but he wasnt going to go easy.

The very next day Gentu followed his younger brother into a somewhat dark alley with only a few people then approached him. His brother knew exactly who he was.

Sarutobi "Gentu... Why have you come back"

Gentu "I came to see you. i heard about your Mangekyou"

Sarutobi "If they find you they will capture you"

Gentu "Then you should know how to save yourself by now"

Sarutobi "why dont you just let me take your eyes? if you really care for me why not hand them over?"

Gentu laughs and continues "If you want to save yourself... you have to take them. only then will you save yourself from oblivion"

Sarutobi "So be it... i will rip them from your head"

Gentu " frankly... i like the sound of that"

Gentu smiled as he knew his job had been complete. then he fled from the city of konoha before his brother Sarutobi could leak what had just happened to him, and what Gentu had told him.
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Gentu The Devourer,, Whatch Your Eyes..

you might lose them

Gentu please wait for an admin to accept the story first.

But anyway nice story Razz

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