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Uchiha Satsu
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 |  Subject: The history of a life time  Thu Jul 24, 2008 10:09 am | |
| Name of your story: History of a life time
Does it change ur charecter in any way?: A little bit
Is it very short or epic size or in the Middle?: Epic size
Does it have any admins as charecters in it?: Yes
does it have any people from this forum in it?: Yes
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Retsu Kenty
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Thu Jul 24, 2008 10:31 am | |
| i think i can do this..
so accepted 
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| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^
I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea
Uhh...you never heard that |
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Uchiha Satsu
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Thu Jul 24, 2008 11:20 am | |
| NarutoReicarnate Wrote
| Quote: | | Its accepted by me NarutoReincarnate, PM me for proof. |
The Beginning
It was dark. There was a blood scent one the air. Uchiha Keyn entered his house. He could smell fresh blood inside it. Something wasn't right. He ran deeper and deeper into the house until he reached the living room. His wife was dead on the floor, and his brother was under her, dead too. He's son was in the floor, in his knees. His hands were all cover by blood, and he had an ironic smile on his face. Uchiha Keyn was one of the Uchiha clan members. His wife was called Uchiha Mey. They had a son, his name is Uchiha Satsu. He has 5 years.. His brother lived in the house too. Now, he was looking at a dead scene. How could a 5 year old boy kill his own mother? He started to back away but then he paralyzed. From his son's hand, it started to appear some lightning.
- H...H...How can you make a Chidori, Satsu?
- SHUT UP!
Satsu ran to his father and hit him with the chidori. His hand passed through his dad's body, Andd he felled on the floor, dead. In Satsu's face, there was a sarcastic smile, like if he was possessed. Then he fall down and fainted.
Slowly Satsu started opening his eyes. The hokage was talking to a nurse.
-... and then, when we reached the house, his family was dead, and he was fainted on the floor.
- We made some analyzes, and we found out that he had some evil demon on hi body. We extracted him. But now theres nothing to do, He's family is dead.
- We will change his name, for people don't recognize him.From now on, he's name will be, Uchiha... Joel.
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Fri Jul 25, 2008 2:21 am | |
| nice story
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| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^
I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea
Uhh...you never heard that |
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Uchiha Satsu
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Fri Jul 25, 2008 2:22 am | |
| Thx. But the better is yet to come
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Kamen Sasuke
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Fri Jul 25, 2008 4:04 am | |
| of you are gna be called Uchiha Joel ur gna have 2 tlk to an admin
to get your username changed.
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Uchiha Satsu
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Fri Jul 25, 2008 4:07 am | |
| Lol. Uchiha Joel was the name i had before this. Remember. This happen in the past. I'll reveal my real name in the end
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Retsu Kenty
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:47 pm | |
| SHOOP DA WHOOP WOW
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| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^
I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea
Uhh...you never heard that |
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Uchiha Satsu
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:25 pm | |
| An Unknown Life
It was morning. Satsu slowly woke up. He was still in the hospital. Some fresh air was in the room. The window was open. Satsu tried to get up but he hadn't any strength. He fall of the bed and the nurse came in.
- Joel! You shouldn't try to get up! You are still to weak!
- Joel ? Why did you call me that miss?
- Thats your real name.
- No. My real name is Satsu!
- No. Your just confused, your name is Joel.
- NO! MY NAME IS SATSU!
- Joel calm down.
- STOP CALLING ME THAT!
- JOEL! LISTEN TO ME! - said the nurse while she told Satsu what happened three days ago. - And that's why your name must be Joel now.
3 Years later
Satsu was walking through th playground. He was in the academy.
- Hey Joel! Want to practice some launches?
- Leave me alone idiot!
- Whats with him?
- Don't worry, he's like this everyday. - said another student.
Satsu went to a tree and laid down. Everyday, every time, he was on that tree. It made him remember of the good moments with his family. But sometimes, it made him remember of the bads too. In that tree, he cried, he laughed and he sleep. He simply loved it. Thats when he decided. That was not his life. That was not his real name. That was all fake. The life he lived was an unknown life. He get off the tree and walked home, without the senseis noticed. The house was deserted. He made his package and went to the living room. It was there where it all happened. Then he leaved, and went out of the town, to until god knows when.
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Hope you like it ^^
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Uchiha Obito
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:44 pm | |
| You are a mix between Itachi and Sasuke, Itasuke XD
Loving the story.
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Uchiha Satsu
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:45 pm | |
| It will come out much more. It's going to have like 20 chapters or more. Thx for the coment. I liked your story too 
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Mon Jul 28, 2008 3:24 am | |
| good story ^^
very emotional
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| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^
I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea
Uhh...you never heard that |
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Uchiha Satsu
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Mon Jul 28, 2008 3:26 am | |
| Thx. This is not like Jeremy's story. This haves everything that needs. Emotion, Desire(xD) mistery, happiness, sadness, romance, etc
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Mon Jul 28, 2008 3:29 am | |
| awww
jeremys story was good untill i died
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| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^
I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea
Uhh...you never heard that |
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Uchiha Satsu
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| | Subject: Re: The history of a life time Mon Jul 28, 2008 3:32 am | |
| xD. See? Jeremy's story is: kill, fight, fight, kill, kill, kill, kill, fight, kill etc. Mine is much better (i think)
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