Kyubz story

Subject: Kyubz story Sun Aug 03, 2008 10:58 pm

well ive changed a lot of things so im starting another story

Name of your story:Kyubi's story
Does it change ur charecter in any way?:meh maybe
Is it very short or epic size or in the Middle?:i dont really know ill end it when i think itss ok to
Does it have any admins as charecters in it?:ya
does it have any people from this forum in it?:ya
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Subject: Re: Kyubz story Mon Aug 04, 2008 4:20 am

accepted.
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Subject: Re: Kyubz story Mon Aug 04, 2008 4:23 pm

ok

PROLOGUE
setting: Kamen District
time: night

"AHHHHHHGH" Kyubi screamed as they were cutting his tail "Remember this was your choice" yume said. Maria had a needle in her hand which she handed to yume when he had finish to cut Kyubi's tail. Yume quickly injected another needle into Kyubi's arm and left it there for around 5 seconds. He got it out and quickly injected the other one into his other arm. After 30 seconds he got that one out."Its done, kyubi you are now part of Kamen" Yume said "Here is your mask." Maria said handing him a fox mask. "Ok, will my tail ever grow back?" he asked as he put his mask on "I don’t think it will" Yume said "But now that you’re a Kamen you should forget your times as an Inuzuka, besides it was you who wanted to leave it." He added "Thanks Yume" Kyubi said as he started walking home "Now you wont want to do that to Kamen" yume said as Kyubi was leaving "Yeah, sure" kyubi said without turning back Finally I’m a Kamen, those times in Inuzuka weren’t the best ones He thought and sighed. Well I should better forget those bad times, though i still had some good times with Bao, and wolfreign and all the others, maybe they could be missing me. He sighed again

20 Minutes later Kyubi arrived home.

"Well about time i got here" he said and walked to his room. He laid down on his bed and looked out the window at the starry sky and sighed again “Ah, at least I can sleep facing up now” he said and chuckled He closed his eyes and after some minutes he was asleep.

To Be Continued

END OF PROLOGUE

EPISODE 1 PREVIEW

The Dream

“Where am I and who are you?” “That’s none of your business all you have to know is that….”
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Subject: Re: Kyubz story Tue Aug 05, 2008 12:38 pm

OOC:something tells me this part will come out crappy lol

EPISODE 1

Setting: Kyubi’s dream
Time:night

Kyubi Awoke in a place he had never seen before “where the crap am I?”he asked himself. “Kyuuuuuubi” “Who was that,show yourself”he said.The scream wasn’t loud and the person or thing who screamed his name was from far away.”Kyuuuuuuubi” someone screamed again “WHO WAS THAT” kyubi said.”Kyuuuuuuuubi h…” someone screamed again.Kyubi was starting to get paranoic.He started to run to the voice every time it got much clearer.”Kyuuuuuuubi help me!” someone screamed. This time He heard it and the voice sounded more of like a woman’s voice,a voice that sounded a bit familiar to him.He kept running towards the voice.Every time it got louder and louder.”Who is, it tell me!” Kyubi screamed.There was no response.”Kyuuuuubi, help me!” someone screamed again. “But how!?!?” he screamed.Again there was no response.He kept running and running.”Kyubi you must help me and your friends!” someone screamed again. “But my only best friends up to now have been Bao,Kelsey and sango” Kyubi screamed back. “Kyubi you must help us!”.

20 Minutes in the dream later

“But cant you answer me these two questions!?!?” Kyubi asked in a scream.There was no response.”Who are you?!?”Kyubi asked again in a scream. At first there was no response.”Kyubi Im sure you must know me,Im someone who once was very close to you” the person responded. “And can you tell me why I have to help?!?!?” Kyubi asked.”You will know that when the time comes,but for now train and prepare yourself, for the end of humanity might be near” The person responded.For some minutes Kyubi remained silent,a bit shocked for what she said.Then he started to think about his or her identity.Someone who was very close to me once,who could she be?.... That voice it sounded so familiar yet i still cant recognize it He thought and then thought of the voice. A minute later he gasped Its my mom,but she…sh-she died years ago,how could she know what was going to happen

in the real world

“Brother!!” Inu screamed at Kyubi trying to wake him up.”What?” he asked as if he was still in the dream. “Wake up!” Inu screamed. Kyubi still didnt wake up. Inu smacked him in the head “Wake up!!” she said. Kyubi jumped out of bed “WHAT IS IT!?!” he screamed and then started to stroke his head. “Its already 1 P.M.” Inu said. “Oh shait,the Special Jounin exams are today at 2:30,Im gonna be late” he said rushing to take a bath.After he was ready and was already heading to where the Jounin exams where going to take place he thought Was that dream related to my world,is the end really near?.

END OF EPISODE 1

PREVIEW OF EPISODE 2

Special Jounins part 1:Show your skills!
“Is that kurayami?!””Yes””She was my old friend and training partner when Tinnie trained us”
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Subject: Re: Kyubz story Tue Aug 05, 2008 7:55 pm

yay im in your story brother. i love it so far! ^^
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Subject: Re: Kyubz story Tue Aug 05, 2008 8:44 pm

^^ thanks i did that before i went to school
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Subject: Re: Kyubz story Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:52 pm

EPISODE 2

Special jounin exams:Show your skills!

Kyubi ran to the place where the exams where held”I cant be late!” he said to himself. Why did I overslept,I had luck Inu woke me up,if not I wouldve been late and would have to wait for them again.Kyubi arrived at the place and saw what time it was,2:25 “Yes,just in time”.He walked to where eveybody was.”Who’s taking them right now?” kyubi asked but everybody was to concentrated on peeking through the door.He managed to peek trhouh it and saw that His old friend was taking them.Someone tapped his back,he looked back and saw kent “Hey kyu” kent said when kyubi turned back “Oh,hey kent” he said and peeked again. “Is that kurayami?” kyubi asked kent “Yes that’s her” kent replied “She’s gotten so much better since the last time I saw her”

After Kurayami had finished

She walked out the door with a kid following her and went straight out of that place.Kyubi was called to come in.He walked through the door and saw the Kage and some other Jounins.”Kamen kyubi, right?” The Kage asked “Yes that’s me” Kyubi replied “Well Kyubi in what jutsu type are you specialized in?” The kage asked.”In ninjutsu,Though I also use a little genjutsu with it” Kyubi said. “Very well go ahead and show us your skills” The kage said. Kyubi nodded.He made some quick handsigns “Kuro kansei” he said. Darkness started filling the room. He made some other signs in complete darkness and said “Ryuu sou giri” and his hand turned into a dragon claw.He put more chakra into it and made it burn. “May you throw me a dummy?” Kyubi asked “Im right infront of you “ he said. One of the Jounins threw a dummy. They heard nothing for around 10 seconds. “Release” kyubi said. The darkness started to dissapear and the room became brighter. The dummy was torn appart into bunches of burnt pieces. The kage and the Jounins were a bit surprised to see this come from a Chunnin and all that in 10 seconds and complete silence and also with no light. “Good,very good,you have passed this part of the exam,but now you are to train this student” The kage said as a kid appeared at his side.”His name is Timmy,you are to train him for the Chunnin exams,after 5 days bring him back” The hage said. The kid then walked to kyubi and then they both walked out of the room.Kent was outside and when kyubi came out with the student following him he asked “Hey kyu whats the exam like?” “Well kent it isnt very hard,you have to show your skills and that’s it” he said.

END OF EPISODE 2

EPISODE 3 PREVIEW
Special jounins part 2: teach a student

“TIMMY GET BACK HERE” “STOP BOTHERING ME YOU IDIOT”
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Subject: Re: Kyubz story Sat Aug 16, 2008 4:13 am

yay kurayami was there kyubi. Awesome-ness! i want to read more of your story soon.
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