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Kade Shinobi


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 | Subject: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 12:16 am | |
| Name of your story: Kade and Mimotaku Does it change ur charecter in any way?: Is it very short or epic size or in the Middle?:middleish sized Does it have any admins as charecters in it?:no does it have any people from this forum in it?:it has Mimotaku
the story of Kade and Mimotaku
Long ago on a night like any other night. two children were born. the first child was named Kade. and the second child, Mimotaku. the first child, Kade, was blind, he had inherited this from his father as well as his fiery red hair. from his father, Kade learned the art of fire
the second child, mimotaku, was raised by his mother, from her he inherited his aqua blue hair and her hot headedness. from his mother, mimotaku learned the art of wind.
one day when Kade was ten he went into the town to find a friend. living outside of town the child was very lonely. he walked around the town looking for another lonely child he could play with. as he was walking around the north side of the town he saw another boy carrying a large sack on his back. the boy, very exhausted fell to the ground and griped his shoulders in pain. Kade walked over to the boy and helped him up. "what are you doing" asked kade. "i am taking the grain that me and my mother have farmed this year to the market" the boy replied. "can I help" kade asked, "sure" the boy said. "what's your name boy" asked kade. "I am Mimotaku" the boy replied with a smile. they ran down the street with the bag. returning back and forth between mimotaku's house to get the rest of the grain. Kade had found a friend who he would be with forever.
The village kade had belonged to had just started war with the next rivaling village and his farther was sent to war. Kade had no choice but to stay in the streets. one day kade and mimotaku went out to the hill to play Hide n' Seek. when they were there 3 other boys were playing tag in the hills as well. "go away you stupid punks" the first boy said. "can we play here to, we'll stay away from your game and play our own off to the side." responded Kade. "No!" the boy snaped "you weirdo's make my eyes hurt with your stupid colored hair". "just let us play here we won't disturb you while you play"!, Yelled Mimotaku. "you little dummies think your real hot, but i don't think you'll look so good if we shut you up." the boy's pushed over kade, making him scrape his knew on a rock. mimotaku ran into the group and pushed over the first attacker. he punched another in the jaw and returned to kade. "are you ok" mimotaku asked."ya im fine" sniffed kade. the third boy tackled mimo pushing him to the ground. Kade jumped into him and tried to push him off. the two other kids ran to kade and grabbed him off the tackler. Kade tried to run away, but the two boys persisted and threw him near the side of a cliff. they kicked him over the edge, but kade grabbed onto an exposed root and hanged over the chasm. the two boys ran over to the other and joined into the fight against mimo. Mimo fought well and held of the boys for a long time. after a while though , they started to wear him down. they pushed him to the ground and started to beat him on the ground. Over the edge Kade was starting to burst into a rage. he was burning up with chakra, making a huge flame-like shape around his body. Kade pulled himself back over the cliff and ran over to the boys. "STOP IT!" Kade screamed. he hit the first boy of mimotaku, making him fly off his friend 8 feet away. he grabed the second boy and threw him off mimo smashing him into the ground, breaking his arm. the other boy ran away. Kade fell over unconscious and scraped up.
mimotaku woke up first at the hill, bruised, battered, and beaten, he still crawled over to the side of Kade. he shook Kade at the torso until his eyes opened. "are you ok", Kade mumbled to mimotaku."yeah, im ok" he responded. they got up and limped back to mimotaku's house, mimo's mother treated their wounds and put them in bed.
when Kade woke up he sat up and rubbed his head. by his side was the mother of mimotaku. "you finally woke up Kade, i have something.. important to tell you". "your father has loved you very much your whole life and has never forgot about you". "yesterday a messenger came in and told me news of your father.... Kade... Your father, is dead". Kade stared at mimo's mother. he started to lay back into his bed, and cry. after a few minutes when kade was calmed down a little mimotaku's mother spoke again. "There is something else i must tell you Kade, There is a good reason you and mimotaku are so close, he is your brother Kade, he is your Twin, I am your mother". " me and your father met when we were young, but when you two were born my father split us apart and never aloud us to talk to each other, or else he would kill your father". After this swarm of surprising and depressing news, Kade turned over and stared and the back of his twin. Kade would never be alone again, but he had also lost his beloved father.
The End, of the beginning
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Fire Princess SpamNobi


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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 12:43 am | |
| that is so cool
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mimotaku Special Shinobi


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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 6:09 am | |
| | srry Karon not this time |
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Fire Princess SpamNobi


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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 10:31 am | |
| nnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooo.lol ok^-^ _________________
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mimotaku Special Shinobi


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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 12:40 pm | |
| | what character did you think you were karon 0-o, Lol |
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Kade Shinobi


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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 12:41 pm | |
| | Lol, yeah 0-o |
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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 12:46 pm | |
| one of ur friend u meet in a village traviling or something.lol _________________
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Kade Shinobi


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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 1:16 pm | |
| | would you like to be in our next story karon? |
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Kade Shinobi


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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 1:41 pm | |
| karon im wondering how you got those pictures into your signature.
me and my bro are having troubles with our, they don't seem to be appearing. |
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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 1:54 pm | |
| | you gotta turn on ur signature, its a option in ur profile somewhere |
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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:36 pm | |
| yes i would like to be in ur next stoie if u would let me _________________
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Retsu Kenty Admin/Hazi's Homeboy/Retsu 2nd in Command


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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:37 pm | |
| Anndd you gotta wait for an admin to accept the story first, hence the whole template thingy.
lol  _________________ The official post/quote of the week™
| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^ I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea 
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Kade Shinobi


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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 3:00 pm | |
| yush i would love to include you in the next story karon
thanks anti for the Info
and yes kent i hope an admin will come along and aprove this for me :/ |
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Retsu Kenty Admin/Hazi's Homeboy/Retsu 2nd in Command


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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 3:05 pm | |
| ill get onto it for you. _________________ The official post/quote of the week™
| ShinChan wrote: | Yeah good luck man ^^ I like this girl in my martial arts class who is taller than me..I sniffed her...she smelled like tea 
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Kade Shinobi


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 | Subject: Re: The story of Kade and Mimotaku Fri Jul 11, 2008 3:07 pm | |
| thanks buddy.
and anti it would be cool if you could be a little specific, im trying to find the thing that allows my signature but i cant T-T
EDIT: woops, its there now _________________ "The spaces between your fingers were created so that another's could fill them in."

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