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Fire Princess SpamNobi


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 | Subject: Re: towashin good or evil Mon Jun 30, 2008 5:42 pm | |
| yayaya _________________
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Hyu-zu Yoshi Eki's Apprentice


   Age : 16 Joined : 17 May 2008 Posts : 1222 Village : don't have one Married To: : no one Bloodline : Hyu-zu Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: towashin good or evil Tue Jul 01, 2008 4:54 pm | |
| TOWASHIN'S TRANSFORMATION PT 2
"towashin are you okay"joel said
towashin looks at joel with a very scary look"joel i am better than ever this power is tremdously extreme my eyes are now permantley stuck in the neo-rinnengan half of my body is black like my dead cousin zetsu this is what i have always wanted i keeping my body this way"
towashin looks as one side of his body gets darker and darker and darker
"come on what are you waiting for the only reason i went to this cave was to access the strength and speed of naruto and sasuke the assassin that killed me 10 yrs ago now come on we don't want to be late"
"so do you really think you can beat me"kimikenkai said as he stepped foward"that is a really nice attack you have i can't wait to take it along with your soul"
chouji looks at him with the most angriest look on his face his eyes turned into wolf eyes and he grew a tail and wolf like reflexes and he also has wolf claws and teeth
he runs at kimikenkai"aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh you are going to regret ever saying that aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh"
BAM BOOM"hahahahahahahahahahaha that tickled now let me show you what eye can do"kimikenkai grabs chouji's feet from under ground and takes him down hurting him really badly
"oh i am sorry did that hurt"kimikenkai stares at chouji looking at the sharp rocks inside his arms and leg chouji takes a akimichi pill(yellow one) and a plasma pill the rocks blast out of his body like bullets hitting kimikenaki
"aaaaaahhhhhhhh you little brat" kimikenkai then sticks his hand under ground and creates a fissure that blast chouji back into a couple of rocks and and trees
"i am ready now i am leaving to go help them i have surpassed all required steps of a medical ninja i am stronger than lady tsunade and sakura i am going hokage"karon says as she runs and leaves the gates
a couple miles later she sees chouji " CHOUJI are you okay"karon says "karon go hurry this is my fight" karon then runs and was grabbed by someone behind her it was yume he grabbed her from inside the tree
"oh no ya don't"yume says as he drags karon in the tree
karon punches the tree with so much strength the force from here punch knocked down a couple of other trees
"whoa some power you got there"yume says as he pops up behind karon
"what are you doing here yume you don't belong here"
"oh are you still sad and hurt and still a burden "
"no i have changed"
flash back: hi karon" yume says as he gently hugs her
"so what are you up to today" yume said " oh nothing" karon said back "well good cause you and me will have dinner to night okay" "okay awsome" as karon and yume hold hands walking down the road people stop and stare at the most caring and beautiful couple in the world
'look at that" a lady said "only true love can make those white jade flowers bloom" each flower yume and karon walked by would suddenly bloom
a couple hours later "aaaaaaaawwwwwwwww this food was tremdously good"yume said with a sort of weird look on his face like he is going to do something that might mess up there relationship"you said it" karon says as yume pays the bill
"okay i will walk you home karon"
as yume and karon walked home the flowers started to die and turn black "well bye karon""bye yume" the 2 said has the kissed eachother
"what took ya so long"eki said from the roof
"i had to let her believe me and think that we were going to be together forever any way i left the note on her bed telling what i am doing the note will definetly break her heart"
as karon walks to her room she sees a note on her bed
"dear karon if you are reading this it means i have joined the akatsuki and i will no longer be with you thank god i am sorry karon but it is over i am no longer your bf you made me sick from the start by karon i don't love you"
tears fall down karons face as she falls asleep (the flash back is over)
"you are the reason why people think i am a burden but i am not i have changed since then i am now going to kill you i will not hold back"karon said as she took her fire whip out
"nether will i"yume said as he jumped in th air
"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh" "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"
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Kaguya Kimimaro Special Shinobi


   Age : 13 Joined : 16 Jun 2008 Posts : 298 Village : missing nin Married To: : nobody Bloodline : uchiha Character Page Health:
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Hyu-zu Yoshi Eki's Apprentice


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 | Subject: Re: towashin good or evil Tue Jul 01, 2008 5:37 pm | |
| no actually some other members will pop up in my story _________________
 I HAVE A LONG NAME zachary evan minalsilo eucudar delerosa sina derpree |
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Kaguya Kimimaro Special Shinobi


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Fire Princess SpamNobi


   Age : 18 Joined : 21 Mar 2008 Posts : 757 Bloodline : Inukuka Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: towashin good or evil Tue Jul 01, 2008 7:28 pm | |
| lol cool _________________
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Hyu-zu Yoshi Eki's Apprentice


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 | Subject: Re: towashin good or evil Sat Jul 05, 2008 10:58 am | |
| | im not in it =/ |
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Fire Princess SpamNobi


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 | Subject: Re: towashin good or evil Sat Jul 05, 2008 11:03 am | |
| thats so awsome and sad to. _________________
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Hyu-zu Yoshi Eki's Apprentice


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 | Subject: Re: towashin good or evil Sat Jul 05, 2008 11:35 am | |
| don't worry the hokage you guys will be in the next part of my story trust me troll _________________
 I HAVE A LONG NAME zachary evan minalsilo eucudar delerosa sina derpree |
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Uchiha Satsu SpamNobi


   Age : 13 Joined : 18 Mar 2008 Posts : 1030 Village : Star Married To: : Engaged to Siaki Texi Bloodline : Uchiha Clan Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: towashin good or evil Tue Jul 15, 2008 5:22 am | |
| I want to fight kent in the storie
PS: I want to win it XD _________________
Ride The Lighting |
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Hyu-zu Yoshi Eki's Apprentice


   Age : 16 Joined : 17 May 2008 Posts : 1222 Village : don't have one Married To: : no one Bloodline : Hyu-zu Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: towashin good or evil Tue Jul 15, 2008 3:54 pm | |
| I AM SORRY
"aaaaahhhhhhh"yume falls to the ground karon runs to him he takes out a kunai an stabs her in her stimach she falls and does the sam to him
"why yume why you were the best person i ever known and now you and towashin and joel my best friends have joined something that is not you i loved you yume and now i can't even trust you"
yume stares at her with tears falling down both of there faces "ka...kar....karon i am no longer apart of akatsuki you and me will be together forever and nothing will break our bond because that is how strong we are"
karon eals her self and yume the stand up to eachother and there faces getting closer and closer until they kiss
"aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww how sweet"a voice from the trees said it was towashin yume such a shame well you were holding us down anyway towashin uses his his sword and runs at yume full speed faster than light stabbing yume in his chest
*cough*cough* yume falls by karon towashin vanishes "joel" towashin said"i know what you want to do no one is stopping go ahead and beat kent
joel stares at towashin with a grin"okay oh and one more thing towashin my real name is satsu uchiha"satsu runs and looks for kent
"yume hang in there here" karon uses a light blue chakra healing yumr all the way down to the bone
"we need to hurry to the village there is no telling what could happen"as yume and karon run to the village chouji is in for a huge finishing
chouji comes at kimikenkai appearing behind him infront of him above him and on the side of him hitting him in the order 10 or 20 times
kimikenkai gets sick of it and he then activates his econd form of the curse seal kimikenkai as claws for wolf like tails and super 2 feet long fangs
"lets see what you got"kimikenkai and chouji said at the sametime
"wait" kent says "show yourself joel or should i say satsu" "how'd ya know hahahahahaha" "guys go this is a personal fight"kent says "bu-" "NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" kent says with his neo-rinnengan activated" "ooooooo so scary"
"shall we begin now" "yes we shall"
"hokga hazi"yume says"yes"hazi says
"we are in serious trouble" "what"
"the akatsuki members are coming here to destroy our village and orochimaru is leading them"
hazi gets a fearful look on his face "we need to gather the villages yume get anti,teen,yorimoto,fang,and maria now"
"yes sir" come on "this is were the line crosses satsu "come on give me your best shot" " you asked for it"
"come on akatsuki members here we go" all the 15 akatsuki members went headed for konoha
"NO HOLDING BACK"yume said
"NO HOLDING BACK"kaorn said
"NO HOLDING BACK"kent said
"NO HOLDING BACK"towashin said
"NO HOLDING BACK"satsu said
"NO HOLDING BACK" eki said
"NO HOLDING BACK" chouji said
STAY TUNED NEXT TIME FOR
READY YOUR NOT HERE I COME
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Uchiha Obito SpamNobi


   Age : 12 Joined : 20 Jun 2008 Posts : 1489 Village : Konoha Married To: : Dating uchiha yui Bloodline : Uchiha Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: towashin good or evil Tue Jul 15, 2008 4:22 pm | |
| I thought I was supposed to be in it? _________________ When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest
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Hyu-zu Yoshi Eki's Apprentice


   Age : 16 Joined : 17 May 2008 Posts : 1222 Village : don't have one Married To: : no one Bloodline : Hyu-zu Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: towashin good or evil Tue Jul 15, 2008 4:29 pm | |
| forgot to add you okay i did _________________
 I HAVE A LONG NAME zachary evan minalsilo eucudar delerosa sina derpree |
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Uchiha Obito SpamNobi


   Age : 12 Joined : 20 Jun 2008 Posts : 1489 Village : Konoha Married To: : Dating uchiha yui Bloodline : Uchiha Character Page Health:
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 | Subject: Re: towashin good or evil Tue Jul 15, 2008 4:31 pm | |
| thank u _________________ When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest
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