Kentaarza's story

Subject: Kentaarza's story Thu May 15, 2008 9:39 am

Name of your story: The beggining of a hero Razz

Does it change ur charecter in any way?: little bit
Is it very short or epic size or in the Middle?: EPIC [ill constantly add parts to it..]
Does it have any admins as charecters in it?: Yep. [if wnna no who reply ;D]
does it have any people from this forum in it?:YEP
Does it have Anti in it?: yes..only for a small bit though..
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Thu May 15, 2008 2:11 pm

Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Fri May 16, 2008 3:29 pm

====== THE BEGGINING ======

One sunny day in a small village south of konoha, a local fisherman was doing his daily fish as he saw two dark mysterios ninjas by the shore..it looked as if they had something in there hands. They then threw the unknown item into the river and then in a blink of an eye dissapeard.

The fisherman swam as fast as he could and picked up the object..as he removed the damaged robe he was shocked to see that it was a young child..the childs eyes were as blue as the beaming sky..the fisherman had no idea what to do, as he had seen these eyes before...the eyes of the devilish fiends that killed his parents.

But none the less the young fisherman took in the child but secretivly so the other villagers wouldnt be alarmed..

As the child slowly grew up hardly uttering a word the fisherman said to him..all this time i havent asked your name young one..the child replied...i dont know...maybe its best that way.
The fisherman grinned..well how about we call you kentaarza..its my home language for Reborn...the young boy smiled and hugged the fisherman.

2 weeks later at nightime a scream was heard in the village..then many more after..the fisherman looked outside and saw a swarm of ninjas slaying everyone..he ran to the boy and said quick you must hide now..but before the boy could even breath the door was pummeld down...and three ninjas walked in and gazed at the boy...

"youuu.."
they said slowly and ghastly...

The fisherman jumped in with a kunai but was swiftly taken down by one of the ninja..

Just as one of the ninja's was about to eliminate the boy a beam of light came flying through the door..

And a strange man walked in and using unknown handsigns used a special jutsu which made the ninja dissapear..

The boy looked at the unknown ninja and was shocked when he stared at the mans face...

"yy...your eyes mr...there...there..like mine!" said kentaarza..

The man walked closer and took the boys hand.."quick fellow warrior we must leave".. said the unknown man..

===== end of the beggining =====
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Fri May 16, 2008 4:20 pm

i like your story
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Fri May 16, 2008 4:25 pm

thanks ;D

thats just a little prequel to it all :]
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Fri May 16, 2008 5:00 pm

When will the rest of the story be posted?
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Fri May 16, 2008 5:01 pm

i not long posted this..im working on the 2nd part now :]
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sun May 18, 2008 12:49 pm

I like it so far.
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Mon May 19, 2008 11:46 am

=D

your in it soon hazi! Razz

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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Mon May 19, 2008 12:45 pm

Lol lucky Hazi.

About when do you think it is going to be finished?
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Mon May 19, 2008 12:50 pm

when ppl stop spamming it up and ask in pms ^_^
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Mon May 19, 2008 3:44 pm

I know I was going to be in it soon, I'm the guy rescueing you. Razz

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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Tue May 20, 2008 10:03 am

yesh

maria + bao are in it too [maybe this chapter if i can be botherd to add to what ive done now:P]

if its good enough i might add it by tonight [20th may 2008] xD

lol

thanks for kind comments every1 Razz

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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sat May 24, 2008 8:24 am

============ INTRODUCTIONS ============

Here it is guys..many of you have been asking when it will be ready..not entirely sure why though..but here it is!!!

enjoy...

BTW theres alot of speaking in it from character to character so sorry if you dont like it Razz

A few hours after the horrific incident back at the village the boy wakes up in a soft bed..his vision is still a bit blurry and he see's a tall man in front of him who says..."Arn't you a tough little soldier"..The boy then passes back out..

An hour or so later...

Kentaarza wakes up and feels fully recoverd and looks at the surroundings around him and thinks to himself..*This place looks alot stranger to where i was before..* Not long after a tall man walks into the room and in a dodgy accent says to the boy..."Wellll heellooo!! i must say young child you are lucky to be alive..if it wasn't for lord Hazirami you surely would of been killed".

"so..you...your not the man who saved me?" stutterd the boy.

"haha, no i am master Bao Inuzuka..current leader of this fine village!" shreiked the strange man

*the boy stares at the man strangely*..

"when is the other guy going to come back? i want to see him..you scare me" said the boy.

"WHAAAT!!! O_O..all i do is introduce myself and you act like that!..well mark my words young boy you havent heard the last of me!!!" said bao.

"well..errmm...ok then.." said the boy quietly to himself.

In a poof the strange man was gone.

Whilst the boy is lying down he hears strange giggiling and talking from behind the door..

"who's there!" shouted the boy.

Two girls then walked in..
The young boy was mesmorized by there beauty and started to blush.

"Sorry if i offended you young warrior..i was just talking to somebody outside before i officially introduced myself to you.."

"not another wierdo?!" thought the boy to himself

"Dont worry young child i wont scare you...i take it by your reactions you have already met master Bao.." softly said the woman.

"oh lord yes..he was a strange and frightfull person" quickly said kentaarza.

"haha yeah he's a bit odd but he means well in his heart."

"so..you never told me your name yet" said the boy.

"oh where are my manners, my name is Maria Konoshi! and im currently second in charge of Mori " said the woman as she smiled.

"Umm..pardon me but whats a Mori?" said the boy pulling a confused face..

"well thats where you are right now!, Mori is one of the most hidden villages there is..it is no suprise you have never heard of it..we are simple people who keep things to ourselfs and only leave our village if it is completly neccisary!!"

"oh right ok...im far away from home then.." *the boy begins to shed tears*

*Maria holds the boys hand*
"dont worry young child you will be fine here..we can protect you from anything now..."

"the last person who said that died..and its all my fault" whimperd kent.

"Look young child..before i take you outside i must tell you something...were not normal people.."

Kent thinks to himself..*huh..darn right your not*

"We have certain ..how should i put this...abilities..that can make us morph into a certain animal we most desire.."

"WHAT!?!?!? your crazy!!! what are you some sort of circu.."

"BOY! please be quiet..i am talking..and that was very rude of you to criticise us like that...i am simply just saying that if you see anybody transform into a certain form..please dont be alarmed.. i beg of you that.."

Aproxometly 20 minutes later Maria led the young boy outside where he saw buildings everywhere surrounded by a huge forest..

"wooow.." said the boy as his eyes lit up.

"this is the most amazing thing ive ever seen.."

Maria chuckled slightly.."this is nothing compared to what its normally like young one.."

Whilst Kentaarza was looking at the scenary he couldn't help but notice all the other childen staring at pointing at him..he overheard some of them speaking..

"uughh..look at his eyes" one of them said.
"whats he doing here! why is he here!" another said..

The boy looked down on the ground and said..

"I want to become a ninja! i want to see to it that those who ruined my life shall be punished! and i wont take no for an answer!!!"

"Well..oh my" Maria replied..."You dont stick around do you..i tell you what..have another days rest then i'll get you signed up at the academy! you can start training with Gan_Ning.."

"Gan what?..who's he...why does everybody have strange names here..exept you that is Maria!!"

One day passed and the boy was itching to go! he ran straight out the door and awaited Maria's arrival..as he saw her coming from the distance he ran towards her panting heavily...

"your here! your here!" the boy said whilst jumping around...
"well of course im here..i promised didint i" said maria whilst laughing.

As maria took Kentaarza into the academy he could here distant talking and then sudden fuds! and applauding..

As maria stopped by a door and looked at the boy he took one big gulp and says..

"Maria...im ready! lets go!"

they both enter the room to see a strange man balancing on his head..
The boy enters the room and the floor creaks..the mans eye suddenly opens and becomes fixated on the boy.

"Ahmmm...so Maria..is this the boy...the boy lord hazirami talked about?" he said smartly..

"Yes sir...it is him.." she said shyfully.

"Well then looks like i finally have the honour of teaching one of them..."
Gan jumps up and walks towards the boy...

"Welcome to my domain! i am now your new teacher! alrriiiight!"

===== End of part " =====
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Subject: Re: Kentaarza's story Sat May 24, 2008 8:47 am

Hey yo story nice...it beat mine...though you lost alot of energy in the 2 chapter but still I can't hate on it....good...