yui's kurowashi's story

Subject: yui's kurowashi's story Sat Aug 23, 2008 5:18 pm

Name of your story:yui's begining
Does it change ur charecter in any way?:yes
Is it very short or epic size or in the Middle?:short
Does it have any admins as charecters in it?:yes
does it have any people from this forum in it?:not really maybe on or 2

Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sat Aug 23, 2008 5:20 pm

Go ahead
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Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sat Aug 23, 2008 6:01 pm

its been over 12 years since yui seen her mom and dad and she was very happy to see them but as she returned to konoha everything has changed.Konoha has a new hokage and new clans have generated during the past 12 yrs she doesn't remember anything there now but then she sees

a familiar face it was her old friend aigoro "ai is that you"
he turns around and looks at "yui your back awsome"the run adn hug eachother "alot has changed here"yui said "yep alot has changed i just figured out som new jutsu's that no one else knows i started my won clan to"ai says in excitment

"really what is the name of your clan"yui says with a puzzled look on her face "it is called the kurowashi clan" "so what have you been doing yui" "traveling studying new jutsu's" "what have you been doing" "oh me well i have been doing chores every day" "that sucks" "yeah i know" but anyways i was wondering since my mom is from uchiha but was formerly from kamen and my dad is from uchiha and don't have a clan i wd like to be apart of your clan if that isn't to much to ask"

"no of course i like just opened it but i could use some help in it " "i will like to help" "thanks yui you are a lot of help" "your welcome" yui and aigoro walk into the gates of the kurowashi village and start the end of a new begining

Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sat Aug 23, 2008 7:16 pm

... umm... not to make anyone sound ridiculous, but clans dont just spring up as simple as saying "I made my own clan..."

did you even read my sample post?

if you go around and research about Clan Kurowashi, you'd learn that in this RPG, Kurowashi has existed since the creation of Konoha village, along side the Uchiha clan & others.
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Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sat Aug 23, 2008 7:59 pm

wasn't finished yet

"ai" yui said "yes" so this clan has been here since the land of konoha was created right" "yep thats right" "so why did you say you made this clan" "because when i first came to this clan i saw that it was broken down and abandoned so i decided to fix it up" "oh okay" "come with me to the clan library i want to show" "sure"

yui and aigoro run to the library and go inside to see a book in the library that has been there for years maybe centuries "do you know what yui" "what" "people say that the legendary sannin jiraiya himself originated from this clan" "really didn't he like die 200 yrs ago bye pein " "yeah he did it was from an akatsuki member named pein but all of that is 200 yrs behind us now" "look at this" aigoro opens the book and reads the history and information on this clan

The Kurowashi clan is one of the oldest surviving clans of Konohagakure, even surviving through the three great wars. Although the clan has survived through the ages, they have been known to propagate small families, each family only having the maximum of 2 children in every generation.The Kurowashi specialize in solidify jutsu like Origami no Jutsu. This is achieved by their unique Kekkei Genkai which can turn ordinarily soft objects like hair and paper, into hard and sharp objects that they may use as weapons. Among the advantages of this ability is being able to turn anything on hand into a dangerous weapon.The Kurowashi clan is also known to be the foremost paper product experts, manufacturing products such as Scrolls and Explosive Tags. Their clan is pretty much identified with every item in Konoha made of paper.It is speculated that the great Sanin, Jiraya himself was a kin blood relation to this clan, although there is no way to truly be sure.

aigoro closes the book "wow just to think this clan was an old dump" yui says as aigoro glares at her with red eyes "oh but its not a dump now ha ha Sweatdrop

" "good save" "so um were do we start"yui said with excitment "well first i need to train you for a couple months and teach you everything about this clan" "then it is off battling" "okay fine"

"aigoro can i ask you a question" "sure go for it" "were are my parents" aigoro stares at yui with fear in his eyes "well yui you were gone for so long there was a war between sound and akatsuki agaisnt konoha" yui's eyes get big "what Crying or Very sad

" "thats how jiraiya died" every single person from the akatsuki came and wiped out mostly all of the uchiha clan including your mom and dad" "no thats not true it can't be" yui runs and hugs aigoro "why did this happen why" aigoro hugs back "don't worry we managed to kill some people from the akatsuki like deidra,zetsu,sasori,and kisame many of us died trying to vs itachi konan and pein"

"AIGORO"yui said "train me i want the akatsuki to feel as much pain as me i won't them to suffer" "aigoro looks at yui and says okay as you wish" "yui you do realize i am the third hokage and konoha had died but rebuilt a new one right" "really alot happens when your gone" "yeah it does but anyways glad to see your back little sis" "yeah i am glad to be back" "but how did the akatsuki come back to life no one knows we are still trying to figure out that info"

Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sat Aug 23, 2008 8:32 pm

I regret to inform you, Jiraya has died 200 years ago...

Naruto, the 6th Hokage, died 150 years ago, give or take a year...

Since then, Konoha has been destroyed and rebuilt.

2 Hokages have gone and Aigoro is the 3rd Hokage of New Konoha.

So your trying to come up as Aigoro's cousin? Elder or younger?
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Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sun Aug 24, 2008 9:47 am

i will be your younger aigoro okay and i edited some of that stuff you said need some fixing

Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sun Aug 24, 2008 5:12 pm

Just to clarify, Aigoro cannot have a younger sister... Aigoro's mother died a week after Aigoro was born. Aigoro's father is still alive and is the current patriarch of Kurowashi Clan.

I can allow your character to be a cousin to Aigoro... and your past being away from Konoha wont pass. You can figure out how Yui is related to Aigoro yourself, but it has to be at Aigoro's father side.

Remember, each family usually has 2 or less children in the Kurowashi Clan.

More or less, you are accepted into the clan. Subscribe to it so I can approve you in.

In the subject of I training you, you will have to comply with the requirements for becoming my student, found at the Konoha forums. Good luck.
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Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sun Aug 24, 2008 5:50 pm

Actually Aigoro, I don't know how thats possible because I'd have to be 150 years old. XD I became Hokage after Naruto died. He also happened to be my sensei. XD
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Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sun Aug 24, 2008 5:54 pm

OMG! Aigoro is saying that I am about 150 years old too! Hazi! We are super old! ^_^

And just to tell you, Naruto was my sensei, while Hazirami was my teammate. (In my PS)
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Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sun Aug 24, 2008 5:55 pm

GO SUPER OLD GEEZERS!!! *High fives Maria*
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Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sun Aug 24, 2008 6:01 pm

Well, calculating for how long an entire village could be reconstructed... more or less, that is how long it would take... 2 lifetimes. then each Kage would have served for at least 20 years, making it 40 years...

so 40+the time Naruto is estimated had died of old age and the time Konoha was destroyed... would take 150 years.

Maybe compromise, at least 100 years...
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Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sun Aug 24, 2008 6:04 pm

Um, Aigoro, me and Maria are 56 and 55 years old accordingly, also, a reign as kage is far longer then only 20 years, most last up to the least 40 years, Sarutobi was 66 when he died, he took over in his early 20's. He had about a year or two long break when Yondaime came in the picture.
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Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sun Aug 24, 2008 6:12 pm

By your estimate... it would take a much longer time between Naruto's death and the present time. And are you saying NR was responsible for the time of disbelief?
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Subject: Re: yui's kurowashi's story Sun Aug 24, 2008 6:13 pm

Um Hazi was Hokage for a short time period.
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