LMAO HAHAz

very cool

yeah, but it should be more 3D

All I see it lacking, is some finer detail on the clothing, hair, face, eyes and accessories (yes, I realized that is pretty much all of it) and a fine layer of shading and highlights. Then add in an appropriate background that fits it, and it will start to look pretty good.

As it stands, I have a few ideas I'd be willing to work into it, but it is your work, not mine.

Oh, and if those blades were meant to be Japanese in design, be aware that all japanese blades have a slight curve to them, they are not perfectly straight.

which pretty much i define it as crap for now

Just as a little tid bid since it was brought up here. Not all japanese swords are curved. Primaryly, the Chokutō, Tsurugi (the type of sword that the Kusanagi-no-Tsurugi is styled after), Ninjatō, and Tantō all did NOT have any curve to their blades. The only swords that always had some Curve were the Katana, Wakizashi, Kodachi, Uchigatana, Tachi. The final set of swords displayed either as much curve as a Tachi or no curve like the Chokutō: Shinken, Nodachi, Ōdachi, Shin Guntō, Zanbatō, and Yoroi Tōshi.

Sorry for the intrustion but it caught my eye here and now I'll go on this final parting thought. Cool art there, good for a base and start and it looks as if you are wielding dual Tantōs so that keeps with the traditional Ninja theme from the area.