Naruto Ninja RPG
This is a role play forum based in the popular anime series, Naruto. Create your own character and play against others within the shinobi world. You can build or break alliances and battle or befriend other players. You will also find that the game play crosses into other media like Bleach, Harry Potter, Shin Megami Tensei and other popular series

Naruto Ninja RPG

This is a role play forum based primarily in the popular anime series, Naruto, and crosses into other media. Build your own character and play against others within the shinobi world. You can build or break alliances and battle or befriend other players.
 
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Rax_XII
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PostSubject: .............   Tue Aug 16, 2011 9:52 pm



Not the best of my mind but ye..
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PostSubject: Re: .............   Tue Aug 16, 2011 11:16 pm

RASENGAN!

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Chris
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PostSubject: Re: .............   Wed Aug 17, 2011 12:13 am

Looks good. Only thing I have to say is that you may want to consider adjusting the positioning of her right arm there in the back. Just having it flailed out in front of her in the midst of that attack is not only bad form, but would slow her down. Try tucking her arm into her body a little. You know, like she's preparing to punch with that arm, close to the body, bent with the fist closed to maximize the power to rip through the air.

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Rax_XII
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PostSubject: Re: .............   Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:43 am

Ty.i'll take note if i were to draw a similar action of another.
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Kiyoraka San
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PostSubject: Re: .............   Wed Aug 17, 2011 8:40 am

thats very good ^=^ just her back should be curved to her shoulder. it does not stop at the arm <.< but other then that and what chris said its good =D

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PostSubject: Re: .............   Fri Aug 19, 2011 9:58 am

Here's another shot. This time at my char with Shibu village symbol. Its blur sry.
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PostSubject: Re: .............   Sun Aug 21, 2011 5:49 pm

looks like that saber is going through her leg...
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Kiyoraka San
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PostSubject: Re: .............   Mon Aug 22, 2011 6:49 am

sai its beside the leg

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Kurowashi Saikoro
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PostSubject: Re: .............   Mon Aug 22, 2011 5:23 pm

Very Happy
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